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Sunday, May 14, 2006

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.:Grant:.

Here is more of my story Chapter 2 pages 4,5, & 6.ENJOY!

“Hey it feels cooler now!” Torrado said while he was waiting for the sand to clear up.

“Duh! The sun beings were making hotter and now that they are knocked out it cooled. And it is just in time because look!” Ziyran said pointing alarmed. Then two giant claws appeared from behind the wall of sand.

“Oh my gosh! We need to fight more?” Farin said.

“Yeah, and I guess it is good because this seems like it is going to be a long fight” Torrado said holding his sword in a battle ready position.

Then the sand cleared and a giant scorpion appeared. The scorpion was blood red with eyes like the flames of the underworld. The claws were an inky black color with a blood color at the tip of the claws. The tail was the most horrifying thing you could have ever seen because it was inky black with a tint of blood red, and poison from his tail dripped ready for a victim to inject his deadly poison into.

“AHH!” The group screamed dropping their weapons.

“Click clack snickle whack!” The scorpion said in its weird language.

The scorpion then swung its giant claws towards Torrado and his companions. They quickly jumped out of the way while grabbing their weapons in the process.

“Guys we are going to die!” Ziyran said shaking.

“Calm down, I think it’s trying to pick a fight.” Torrado said holding his weapon up again in the same battle position.

“Another fight?” Ziyran said longingly.

“Told you so!” Farin said loading arrows in her quiver.

The scorpion ran towards the heroes with its claws out ready to crush anything in their path.

“Brace yourselves!” Torrado said aiming it towards his companions.

Farin and Ziyran nodded. The scorpion ran faster and faster until it came within about 12 feet of the group.

Farin jumped out of the rampaging scorpion’s path and shoot a couple of arrows at the eyes. Torrado dove out of the way and tried to slash the scorpion but the slash was no good it only made a scratch in the scorpion’s body like armor. Ziyran flew up out of the way and caste a blizzard spell at the scorpion. Farin’s arrows didn’t cause any damage what so ever. But Ziyran’s blizzard spell rammed the scorpion into the sand.

“Hey I saved the day!” Ziyran gloated.

A claw busted from the sand and grabbed Ziyran and flung him.

“Ahhh!” Ziyran said flying through the air. He flew about ten feet until he crashed into a rock, and made a huge crater. “Ow my aching head, nose, spine, foot....” Ziyran said lying in the crater he made.

“Ziyran!” Farin said holding her hand out. Then she felt a tingling feeling in her hand and a burst of green wind flew out towards Ziyran.

The green wind hit Ziyran and woke him up feeling great.

“I’m ok guys!” Ziyran said flying up.

“Huh? I just caste cure!” Farin said looking at her hand.

“Uhh... That is cool and all but help!” Torrado said in the scorpion’s right claw.

“Torrado!” Farin and Ziyran said in unison.

Farin loaded arrows and Ziyran started to chant a thunder spell while flying towards the fight.

Farin released her arrows and Ziyran successfully caste thunder. The arrows flew a super fast speed and a thunder cloud appeared over the scorpion. The arrows landed a direct hit on the right claw and stuck in the claw.

The thunder cloud shocked the scorpion and the right claw fell off. The claw landed, and Torrado broke out of the claw.

“Thanks guys” Torrado said running over to his friends.

“Don’t...” Ziyran started.

“...Mention it!” Farin finished smiling.

“Let’s talk later now we need to finish this over sized scorpion off!” Torrado said turning and running toward the wounded scorpion.

“Ok” Ziyran said chasing after Torrado.

Farin looked at the claw and an idea came into mind.
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