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myOtaku.com: Thegrantinator
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Wednesday, May 24, 2006
Review of chapter 3
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.:Grant:.
Here is a review of chapter 3 the beginning!
Chapter 3
Dwarfeinhiem
Torrado woke up the next morning to find him in a small room with a cool wash cloth on his head.
“Huh?” Torrado said sitting up.
Torrado looked around and saw a small room with one little window in the corner of the ceiling. He was lying in a dwarf sized bed with a rag of covers kicked over.
“Where am I?” Torrado said to himself.
“Oh good you are up!” came a small sweet voice from the door.
Torrado turned and saw a small woman with a bucket of cold water. “Um, who are you?” Torrado asked studying the little lady.
“I’m Daunty, and my husband rescued you and your friends from the desert last night.” The small women said.
“Huh? Ziyran, Farin!” Torrado said remembering his friends. “Where are they? Are they all right?”
“Yes, they are in the dining room follow me.” Daunty said and turned.
Torrado followed Daunty down the hall to the dining room.
“So uh... why are you small?” Torrado asked glancing at Daunty.
“Well this is Dwarfeinhiem, this is a town filled with dwarves!” Daunty said studying her water.
“Oh.” Torrado said turning again. The hall he was in was quite small but just enough for a human to fit through.
“So uh... why are you and your friends so tall?” Daunty asked looking up a Torrado.
“Well, we are humans.” Torrado said looking forward.
“H-h-humans!” Daunty said dropping her bucket of water.
“Uh... yes.” Torrado said stopping.
“I’m terribly sorry master” Daunty said dropping to her knees.
“Huh?” Torrado said puzzled. “I don’t own you...” Torrado said grabbing Daunty’s arm and pulling her up.
“Oh would you look here we are here” Daunty said opening the door.
He came to a door he opened it and saw his friends sitting at a table and eating a pancake like food.
Ziyran looked up and saw Torrado standing in the door way and said with his mouth full: “Hey Torrado!”
Farin looked up too and also said with a mouthful: “Hey there!”
Daunty walked over to a dwarf at the stove on the far end of the kitchen. She whispered something to him and his eyes grew as big as dinner plates.
Daunty walked over to Torrado and said: “Here go and sit down we will make you some of our dwarfcakes.”
“Thanks,” Torrado said walking over to a chair at the table Farin and Ziyran were sitting.
A while later Daunty came to the table with two huge dwarfcakes.
“Here eat something after that Sun Fever you are probly starving.” Daunty laid the dwarfcakes in front of Torrado.
Torrado looked down at his stomach and it growled like an angry bear. “Come to think of it I am pretty hungry” Torrado said picking up a fork and sticking it in a dwarfcake and placing it on his plate.
While Torrado was eating the dwarf that was at the stove walked over and sat next to him.
The dwarf just sat next to Torrado drinking some sort of grayish drink. When Torrado finished the dwarf said: “Hi, I’m Dant, and last night I was walking in the desert when I saw you three about to be torched by two sun beings.”
Torrado looked up from his plate and asked: “What is Sun Fever?”
Daunty walked over and sat next to Dant and said: “Well Sun Fever is a deadly virus that is caught when you come in contact with a sun being.”
Ziyran looked up then Farin.
Well I hoped you enjoyed the review. Next part explains why Dauntey dropped he water and called Torrado "master".
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