Sunday, January 7, 2007

   Chapter1 part1 (edited)

.:Grant:. Hey ya'll... Well no Q's were left yesterday so lets just jump into the story. Remeber with all series the first chapter in the first book is usually always dull so don't get all outraged and leave my site and never come back... anyway STORY STARTS NOW! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Chapter 1 The Mysterious Room On the first day of summer the sun rose and shined its light in the room of the thirteen year old hero Torrado. When the sun reached Torrado’s face and hit his eyes he awoke very slowly. He brushed his blonde hair out of his face and his blue eyes shone glimmering in the sun light. “Huh?” Torrado said blinking awake. “Oh! I forgot it is the first day of summer vacation! Whoo-hoo lets party!” Torrado jumped out of bed and gazed around his room. His room is a medium sized room with a huge window on the east side of the room. And on the south side of his room he has a huge closet filled with copies of the clothes he wears, you know a scarlet red cloak (that has a hood, but he hardly ever wears it), blue jeans and a black t-shirt. On the north side is his computer place where he talks to his best friends Ziyran and Farin. And on the west side is his king sized bed. “Oh yeah I need to talk to Ziyran and Farin!” Torrado said jumping. He ran toward his closet and leaped in. He took of his pajamas and quickly put on his t-shirt and jeans and on top of that was his cloak waving as he flung it around his neck and tied it. Then he ran towards his computer and booted it up. Right as when he saw the screen light up he accessed the talk’onet. “Ziyran? Farin? You guys there?” Torrado spoke into his head set. “About time you got on there mister” Came Ziyran’s deep cool voice and a screen popped up and showed his face. He had medium length brown hair that was all messy and it made him look like he just crawled out of bed. He wasn’t wearing his normal Trinity Robes that were all colorful. His green eyes were shining from the sun too. “Yeah, seriously! Took you long enough” Farin’s soft sweet voice spoke, then once again a screen popped up and Farin’s face appeared. Her blonde beautiful hair was straight and not in her normal ponytail that she usually wore. Her soft blue eyes always shone brilliantly in the light. “Sorry guys guess I’m not used of getting up on non-school days!” Torrado said rubbing the back of his head. “I don’t blame you, I just got up as you can see...” Ziyran said rolling back his chair and showing that he two that he was still wearing his Pajamas. “Well I was practically dragged out of bed and forced to do my chores!” Farin said flustered. “Well anyways I’m sorry I keep you guys waiting” Torrado said lowering his head. “Well let’s get back to this subject later” Ziyran said rolling back to his place. “Yeah, what did you want to talk to us about?” Farin said. “Well I was thinking you guys could come over for awhile and hang around.” Torrado said raising his head again. “Yeah, sounds great, but I need to ask my parents first” Ziyran and Farin said in unison. “Oh I need to ask my dad too...” Torrado replied “Well...” Ziyran started “Around when?” Farin said taking Ziyran’s words. “Probly about two’o clock. Well, talk to you later” Torrado said logging off. “Bye!” Farin and Ziyran said logging off also. Torrado spun around in his chair and jumped off. He walked to his door which was right next to his bed and walked out. When he closed his door he turned and walked down this pretty big hall and to the stairs. When he reached the living room he turned and entered his kitchen (since that is where his dad is usually at in the morning reading the paper and drink a cup of hand made coffee). “Well good morning son! I thought you were a dead man for a second” Torrado’s dad said smirking. “Umm I have something to ask you dad...” Torrado said rubbing his shoulder. “Can Farin and Ziyran come over today at two’o clock?” Torrado asked flinching a little cause he was expecting his dad to explode. “Sure sounds great” Torrado’s dad said focusing on the paper. “Awesome! Thanks dad” Torrado turned and ran for his room. * * * ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ So people that read my story before see any of the corrections? BYE P.S. Part2 will be up tomorrow

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