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Hello! this site i tell A story on, my story site so to say, this story is called "The Last Elfling", i hope you enjoy you visit. please sign my geust book, if you want. and feel free to make any comment bad or good. thank you and have a wonderful day!!!! READ THE INFORMATION AFTER THESE WORDS PLEASE! You Must start at The Last Elfling (Thundering Rain's Story) title, or else you will be EXTREMLY confused! Thank you!!!! =(^-^)=


Friday, December 9, 2005


The Last #43
Manu and Luna piped in "Please! let us come! we dont have armor or weapons but we can use magic, and we know how to use a bow!" Thundering Rain laughed and ran down to her quarters. she pulled out a perfect size Crystal Mythrel, she got two of them and handed them to Manu and Luna, she then went to her closet of bows and brought out two short bows, she handed one to each of the twins. she said "Of course you can come! But you have to listen closly to me!" The twins nodded "Okay" Curiousity ran in painting. He rested his hands on his knees in a crouching mode, he says with much exclamitory " Your going to make allies with the minitors?!?!?! and fight the bad one??? Your a mad one Una!" Thundering Rain laughed "I have already been in one war, it was worse than this, and this is just a minor battle! Plus I want to use my skills in fighting so badly, so why not help out another group! form a friendship with these people!" Curiousity says "Man is it hard to keep up with you! especially when you fly! Well I am with you in this battle, see ya at dawn!" Thundering Rain and the others waves bye to Curiousity
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The Last #42
Thundering Rain flew off to the forest and turned human, from ther she ran to her house. When she got there she set of a beam of energy, this beam was made so that the creatures of the forest that would help Thundeirng Rain would know when to come. Creatures of many times, most of the night came around the house to hear what was to be said. Thundering Rain said in a booming vioce so that everyone could hear her "All creatures of the night and day! I have just visited a village of minitors, thses minitors are good, and very stronge. But they need help, there are evil minitors that live two days walk from here, If we help thses minitors maybe when we are in need they will help us too! Create an allies with these creatures and many advantages will come our way! So all willing to fight off these evil creatures to the south be ready to march by dawn!" Thundering Rain then dismissed everyone that came and turned off the beam. She went inside and told everyone what had happened. Ayra said immediatly after she was done "Are you mad?!?!?! Minitors can crush your bones! They are monsters! I will not interfere with these beasts!"
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The Last #41
"Welcome Elfling, I heard from a gaurd you were coming here. I have never seen such a being as yourself, and you seem Alien to this earth. You glow like a star down on this earth, why is that?" Thundering Rain says "Greetings Minitor king, My name is Thundering Rain, but I'm called by friends Una for short. I seem like an Alien to this planet because I am an Alien, I come from far away from here, on the planet Saturn. I come here out of curiousity to see the village." The minitor king smiles "That is very interesting! My name is Calidus, Lord of the good minitors." Thundering Rain looks confused "Good minitors? you mean there are bad ones too?" Calidus nods his head "Yes, very bad minitors" Thundering Rain gets a twinkle in her eye "where are these bad minitor's closest village from here? I may be able to help." Calidus says "By night there is a red star, follow it for two days, and you will see the grounds of the village." Thundering rain replies "Thank you, and now I shall take my leave" Thundering Rain turns into a pheonix and flies out of the chimney. Calidus tells his people "Fear not of this Elfling, she is a friend. she is venturing forth to the closest village of the bad minitors!" The village cheered.

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The Last #40
Thundering Rain speed up as she says this, leaving Curiousity far behind. She flies over to a tree at the border of a village, but its not a human village though. She jumps out of the tree, and walks into the village, the gaurd yells "Holt! who goes there?" Thundering Rain replies "I, Thundering Rain is who goes there. I'm a wanderer from the Forgotten Forest, and I was wondering what this village was, if you would be so kind to let me pass, I mean no harm to your people." She curtseys as she says this. The gaurd says "Very well wanderer, but first see the king, he is in the tall cabin in the middle. Oh and just out of curiousity what race are you? you look like an Elf, but smell a little strange." Thundering Rain replies "I am an Elfling, the last one matter of fact." Thundering Rain enter and goes to the large cabin in the center of the village, every villager she passes looks at her oddly, a croud starts to gather around the King's cabin wondering who this person is. Thundeirng Rain enters the cabin and looks at the king. The king is am extremly tall, and large being, he is a Minitor. Thundering Rain bows down before him. The king says
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The Last #38
Mean while Thundering Rain runs off and goes to Mysterious Wolf and greets her a good morning "Good day!" Mysterious Wolf Answers back "Good morning to you too" She runs by Curiousity's cave "Good Morning sleepy head!!!!" Curiousity wakes up with a jump, and hits his head on the roof of his cave "Ow! hey! Una What did you do that for? You trying to give a guy a heart attack? If you are, your doing real well at it!" Thundeirng Rain laughs "No silly! I'm just saying good morning! Well' I'm off, bye!" Curiousity asks "Where are you off to so early?" He rubs his head where it hit the roof. Una replies "Somewhere!" Una runs though the forest and takes off, she turns her head to see Curiousity stretching, then taking off running below her. She lower so shes close to the ground. Curiousity asks "But where is some where?" Thundering Rain laughs "You will just have to see, if you can keep up!"


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The Last #38
Thundering Rain says grabing a muffin "I know, and I'm just now leaving, easy comes easy goes.Adios!" Ayra shakes her head and mumbles to herself "Girl needs to settle down, and act her age. oi!" She continues to make the twins omlets
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The Last #37
Thundering Rain says grabing a muffin "I know, and I'm just now leaving, easy comes easy goes.Adios!" Ayra shakes her head and mumbles to herself "Girl needs to settle down, and act her age. oi!" She continues to make the twins omlets
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The Last #36
After that Ayra found a note on the table every morning explaining where Thundering Rain was. Ayra sighed wondering what she is up to now every time she read the notes. This morning the note was different, it usually explained that Una was off for a wolk, or what general area she was in, but today it was different, Ayra read the note out loud " ''I'm off for a walk some where'' Where is some where?! she usually gives a better discription! Ug, she's hiding something, and I want to know what it is!" At that moment Thundering Rain entered the door, she was breathing heavily, and scratches were all over her body. Ayra asks "So where is this 'somewhere' and why are you breathing so hard, and have so many scratches all over you?" Una laughed "I won't tell you where, but the scratches are mostly from bushes, though I did run into a couple of demon gnoms, and I'm breathing hard because I was running for the fun of it!" Ayra shakes her head "What am I going to do with you!" Thundering Rain says "You sound like my mother, I didn't say you had to take care of me, sheesh" Ayra says "That doesn't mean I can't worry about you!" Thundering Rain says "I'm off, bye" Ayra says "But you just got back!"

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The Last #35
Luna asks Thundering Rain "Who is tuso?" Una replies "Its a....... nickname I gave to Curiousity." Curiousity adds "And don't even think of calling me that, if you need a nick name for me call me Curo ok?" Luna laughs and says "Alright."
Ayra shakes her finger at Una "Where wer you?!?!?" Una laughs "I was taking a walk, I left a note on the table!"Curo looked at Ayra "I even asked if she left a note!" Luna goes to the table and finds a note saying she was on a walk, she hands it to Ayra "Here it is." Everyone except Ayra bursts out laughing.




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The Last #34
Luna asks Thundering RainShe turns and holds her head as her pupils show a flame in them. she quickly turns to the sink and tears it open, water bursts and hits her. Her eyes turn back to crystal blue, she sighs and fixes the sink. she makes the walls around Curiousity disapear, and he runs out and says to Thundering Rain "you need to get help! your wounded" Thundering Rain looks down at her side, witch is now gushing out blood "Oh yeah" She takes the bottle from around her neck and pours on crystal clear drop on it, it hisses, then it heals it quickly. She walks over to Curiousity "Here" she drops two drops onto his wound, and he is healed "Find the others for me." Curiousity looks at Thundering Rain and hugs her "Thanks, I'll go find them, but first......" He whispers in Una's ear his name. He runs off and finds the other witch he brings back to Una, when they return they find Thundering Rain looking at the scar from where she healed herself. Curiousity asks "Will I have a scare like that?" Thundering Rain laughs "Don't worry Tuso, I'm just not good at healing myself."

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The Last #34
Luna asks Thundering RainShe turns and holds her head as her pupils show a flame in them. she quickly turns to the sink and tears it open, water bursts and hits her. Her eyes turn back to crystal blue, she sighs and fixes the sink. she makes the walls around Curiousity disapear, and he runs out and says to Thundering Rain "you need to get help! your wounded" Thundering Rain looks down at her side, witch is now gushing out blood "Oh yeah" She takes the bottle from around her neck and pours on crystal clear drop on it, it hisses, then it heals it quickly. She walks over to Curiousity "Here" she drops two drops onto his wound, and he is healed "Find the others for me." Curiousity looks at Thundering Rain and hugs her "Thanks, I'll go find them, but first......" He whispers in Una's ear his name. He runs off and finds the other witch he brings back to Una, when they return they find Thundering Rain looking at the scar from where she healed herself. Curiousity asks "Will I have a scare like that?" Thundering Rain laughs "Don't worry Tuso, I'm just not good at healing myself."

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The Last #34
She turns and holds her head as her pupils show a flame in them. she quickly turns to the sink and tears it open, water bursts and hits her. Her eyes turn back to crystal blue, she sighs and fixes the sink. she makes the walls around Curiousity disapear, and he runs out and says to Thundering Rain "you need to get help! your wounded" Thundering Rain looks down at her side, witch is now gushing out blood "Oh yeah" She takes the bottle from around her neck and pours on crystal clear drop on it, it hisses, then it heals it quickly. She walks over to Curiousity "Here" she drops two drops onto his wound, and he is healed "Find the others for me." Curiousity looks at Thundering Rain and hugs her "Thanks, I'll go find them, but first......" He whispers in Una's ear his name. He runs off and finds the other witch he brings back to Una, when they return they find Thundering Rain looking at the scar from where she healed herself. Curiousity asks "Will I have a scare like that?" Thundering Rain laughs "Don't worry Tuso, I'm just not good at healing myself."

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The Last #33
Curiousity ran to Thundering Rain's House and knocked down the door. He set Thundering Rain on the table, and fixed the door. Thundering Rain sat up and moaned at the pain in her side, her head filled with dizziness and she fell unconsious. Ayra ran in as soon as she had heard the door, she looked at Thundering Rain and gasped "Thundering Rain.......What happened." Thundering Rain sat up at the mention of her name and looked around, she looked at Ayra and said softly "Zatsa Batsuka has returned! Go now, he is comeing he will kill you! leave me!"
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The Last #32
Curiousity ran to Thundering Rain's House and knocked down the door. He set Thundering Rain on the table, and fixed the door. Thundering Rain sat up and moaned at the pain in her side, her head filled with dizziness and she fell unconsious. Ayra ran in as soon as she had heard the door, she looked at Thundering Rain and gasped "Thundering Rain.......What happened." Thundering Rain sat up at the mention of her name and looked around, she looked at Ayra and said softly "Zatsa Batsuka has returned! Go now, he is comeing he will kill you! leave me!"
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The Last #31
Curiousity looked at her confused "Una isn't here? Thats odd, I'll go look for her, did she leave a note?" Ayra looked at Curiousity and sighed "You find her, and you better bring her here, if I find out you have ran off with Una I'll be very angery.And of course she didn't leave a note!" Curiousity ran off to Mysterious Wolf "Hey! have you seen Thundering Rain? She is missing." Mysterious Wolf said "Nope, but I would be glad to help." Curiousity, and Mysterious Wolf ran off in different directions to find Thundering Rain.. Curiousity ran to the lake and found Thundering Rain lying there with a slash through her side, and a Man Curiousity couldn't identify. Then the man turned to Curiousity with his red eyes, Curiousity looked away quickly knowing who it was now, it was Zatsa. Curiousity looked up at the barly visable moon, and sure enough it was red. Curiousity ran infront of Zatsa and grabbed Thundering Rain. Zatsa claws ripped at Curiousity's shoulder, and tore it apart. Curiousity yelled out in pain, but ran away quickly with Thundering Rain on his back.
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The Last #30
After that life wasn't the same. Curiousity would come by and visit at least once a week. Every time leaving saying something about some bizzar Expedition, and Thundering Rain would always tag along with him. Everytime he visited she asked the same question "What is your real name?" Then one day Manu woke up and looked around for Thundering Rain for she was usaully the first to rise, but she found her no where. She checked Thundering Rain's room, but no one was there. The Manu ran and jumped onto Ayra's bed "Unas gone!!!!!!!!" Ayra leaped out of bed and searched everywhere, Manu was right, Thundering Rain had dissapeared. They woke up Luna and they all searched for Thundering Rain, then their thoughts were disrupted by a knocking on the door. Ayra answered the door, by swinging it open, it was Curiousity. Then Ayra got ideas about what happened to Thundering Rain, she grabbed Curiousity and shook him "Where is she?!?!? what have you done with her?!?!?"


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The Last #29
Curiousity comes up behind her and grabs her shoulders "Looking for me?" Thundering Rain gets startled, and laughs at Curiousity "Darn it! that went backwards." Curiousity laughs "Exactly,"he whispers in her ear. Una looks at Curiousity "What is your past?" Curiousity laughs "What past?!?! who ever said I had a past, witch I don't, mind you."Una ponders over this, "But how is that possibly?" she asks. Thundering Rain notices that Curiousity did not answer and looks around, Curiousity's orange hair bobing through the forest. She runs after him, but he dissapears. Thundering Rain notices it is almost morning and teleports back home quickly. She creeps into her bed, and acts asleep, then actually falls asleep. Ayra gets up, and so do Manu and Luna, Ayra yells for Thundering Rain , and Thundering Rain walks in. Thundering Rain rubs her eyes "Good Morning." Ayra pionts a spatchula at Una "Where have you been?!?! Your little twin friends here, started an arguement with me, then I forgot, But now I remember!" Thundering Rain says "You already knew where I was. I was with Curiousity." Ayra says "Oi" and continues cooking eggs. Luna and Manu giggle.
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The Last #28
Mean while Thundering Rain runs through the forest like the wind, quickly, yet extremly silent. She finds Curiousity at a pond drinking some water. Thundering Rain sneaks up to Curiousity until she is right behind him, she smiles mysteviously as she grabs him and yells out "Boo!" But as she grabs him he disolves into the water.


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The Last #27
She and the others walk home and have a cup of tea. Una asks the others "So what do you think of this Curiousity? I think he is rather interesting." Manu answers quickly "He is very odd" Luna nods in agreement with her twin "Yes! and mysterious." Ayra bursts out "I do not trust him, just like I don't trust Luna or Manu, for I haven't known them for a while. He is a bad hat!" But when Ayra looks around she finds that Thundering Rain has vanished in thin air, just like the Cat-man, she remarks "Darn it Una! Your running into a trap running after that man!" The twins giggle at Ayra's remark quietly, and Ayra says "What are you two giggling at?!?" Then this starts up an arguement between the twins and Ayra, until they all diside to go to bed, Ayra forgoting why they where even arguing in the first place.


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The Last #26
Curiousity circled around Una "Its no wonder you smelled wierd! there aren't any other of your kind, if I read that book correctly. So your Sesiskia Anianauna Mystic, I thought that was not a true being." Thundering Rain pouts at Curiousity "Well, matter of fact, She is a true being!" Curiousity smiles ''The forgotten forest huh? I live there myself, Maybe we will see each other again." Curiousity smiles softly and dissapears into thin air. Thundering Rain looks around and laughs "Curiousity fits him indeed."

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The Last #25
For a month this group lived happily in there house, then they disided to go outside of the forgotten forest.They walk out of the forest and looked around. Thundering Rain thought to herself aloud "its nice out here" and walked infront of everyone else, she walked until a strange little boy with cat ears of bright orange, and a tail of the same color as hi ears. Thundering Rain immediatly got out her book to see what this thing was, she found it was just a man, with cat like things about him, a cat-man so to say. Thundering Rain said to the cat-man "Hello, I'm Thundering Rain . What is your name?" The Cat-man laughed "Well, I don't have a real name, but most call me Curiosity." He yawned and stretched, he had orange hair, but besides that, the tail and ears he was just a ordinary human. Thundering Rain laughed and said "Well hello Curiosity, its a pleasure to meet you!" Curiousity says "Please, don't waist your manners on me, I don't mind. Obviously your a woman of higher estate than me, so why waist such precious manners." Thundering Rain laughs "Higher Estate you say? I think not, I'm just a Elfling from the Forgotten Forest."
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Thursday, November 24, 2005


The Last Elfling #24
Una holds each of the twins hands and notices a difference "There is another difference, your eyes, luna, your's is green, Manu your's is Blue." The twins twins say "interesting" at the same time. Muna, luna, and Una all go home, and are introduced to Ayra. Ayra laughs softly and says "Your in for it Una! Twins can be extremly mystevious! but its nice to meet you too twins. oi! Una, Luna, and Manu, all sound simular! I'm going to get tongue twisted, just trying to call one of you!" Una, Luna, and Manu howled with laghter at this statement."
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The Last Elfling #23
Una walks over to the Treeant and says to it "sknaht uoy" The treeant replies "on melborp." Una takes the two cloaked figures and sets them on the ground. She says to them "You should be careful, its dangerous in the forgotten forest." The two replied as they uncovered their heads "We know, but we didn't care, everyone hates us so, why bother." Una kneels down "well, I don't judge people before I know them, so I don't hate you, do you have a home?" The two who tuned out to be children shook they're head. Una says to them "Well, Why don't you come with me, and live there? that could be your home" The two nodded and said "Then you will probably want to know our names, My name is Luna, and this is my twin Manu, you will only find a difference in our cloths, and ideas, I wear mostly blue, Manu wears mostly green, we are Wood Elfs also, what are you? you look like an elf, your energy is simular to an elf, but a strange energy also arises from you" Una answers with a smile "I'm am the last Elfling. "
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The Last Elfling #22
While this was going on Una was fighting the Blood Hound. She took out her staff, and a knife, Staff in left, knife in right. She stabbed the beast with her knife, and watched it die. she started to walk away, when it revived its self. The beast threw its claws into Una's right shoulder. Una Screamed out at the beast "Emalf wohs siht doolb dnuoh on yceim!" After this was chanted the beast bursted into enternal flames, that will live until the blood hound is dead forever, witch only took five minuites.
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The Last Elfling #21
The two lived peicfully for two years, then there was a disturbance in the forest. There was a energy force, of combined elf power, witch Una found rather unusual. Una went to the tallest branch on her tree, witch she had made into a sky watching tower. She brought out her bonoculars, and saw two small cloaked figures fleeing from a terrible moster. This moster Una identifide as a Blood Hound, allways thirsty for fresh meat. Una ran down to Ayra and said quickly "Be right back" Ayra being used to Una trying to protect the forest, answered "Alright, but try not to make it later this time, or I'll worry, and come after you." Una nodded to Ayra "I'll try."
Una ran through the forest, then saw that the Hound was at their heels. She opened her wings and flied to them, she grabbed them and set them in a tree and held out her left hand, she chanted "tcetorp meht" to the tree, and it rapped its arm around the two figures, doing this to protect them. This tree turned out to be a treent and it said ""Do not be afraid" to the two.

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The Last Elfling #20
After that Ayra and Una became friends, and at dinner that night, Ayra explains why she was chained "I'll start from the begining, I used to go to a human school, when I accidentally let out some magic. After that many children reported to mad scientists what I had done. I had to flee, so I did, but they caught me right before i entered Elf territor, so they drugged me, and pinned me to the post with crystal chains. They used crystal chains because no metal shall hold me. So they had finally figured out what it was that held me." After she had completly explained that, Una told her own story.

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The Last Elfling #19
The Elf replies "very well, I will trust your words, since for me they are very true, but why does your energy seem simular to mine?" Una says "I looked it up in my book and it says you are an elf, well my race are called 'Elflings'" The Elf says in aw "An Elfling, But they were all Distroyed! I read it in a old legand book, and i thought it was just a myth" Una says "Let me show you something, and goes do to her library and gets an old legand book that talks about one of her curses, she says "Is this the book? That some said was written by someone insane." The Elfling answers "Yes!" "Well this book is mostly true, it left out some things, like one Elfling surrvived, but besides that, it is completly true, and this 'Sesiskia Anianauna Mystic' he calls her, for he doesn't no my name, this 'Sesiskia' is the same person as myself" Una says. The Elf stumbles out of bed and says "it is an Honor to meet you, i am Ayra, at your service." Una laughs " rise Ayra, we can be friends, not under ones service" Ayra says "Alright!" Ayra smiles happily and says "Oh! thank you for helping me with the chains, how did you break them" "Flames" answers Una.
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The Last Elfling #18
When the Wood Elf awakens, she finds herself in a place far from the same as where she went to sleep, and she finds a lady simular to herself, but has a little bit of a different energy. She hears the Lady speak to her, she says "Greetings Wood Elf, I am Thundering Rain, but you may call me Una. I found you on the shore of an unknown lake, you where chained there, and also drugged. Now what ever creature tied you up, must have thought you were very powerful, if it drugged you. May I ask you name?" The lady named Una turns on a bright, but warm light. Then the Elf can see her better and asks "Will you harm me, Una? Or will you wolf hurt me?" Una replies with a small chuckle "I wouldn't dream of hurting someone that has a very simular energy field as my people, unless you harm me, then I will be forced to harm you."


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The Last Elfling #17
she sits and looks through the book, witch is tittle "Mystic Creatures, of all ages" she reads and looks for what the creature is that she found, and why it looks and feels like one of her own people. She find it and reads aloud "This here is an Elf, if it looks dark and Evil it is a dark elf, if it is dressed in earth tones then its a wood elf, if its dressed so that it sticks out of the crown than it is a high elf. If it is a dark elf get it out of your house, they are very dangerous, if its a wood elf, then its alright, just be kind to it, and dont burn trees around it, if its a high elf, act as if it were a queen, or a royal, be warned of high elfs, they can get extremely angery, if treated with disrespect." She shuts the book and walks upstairs. Una examines the Elf and figures out by its cloths that it is a Wood Elf.

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The Last Elfling #16
Una sets down the creature on a guest bed, in one of her spare rooms, witch she has many of, just in case stranglers comes by and need shelter. She sets the creature down , and fetches a heater. She places a heating stone at the end of the bed to keep her warm. she turns the heater in Medium, and leaves the room, first making sure she closes the door.she quietly goes to the kitchen and makes M-Wolf a snack, then she runs off to her room. There she opens her closet door, and turns to the left, she places a gem key in a tiny little hole in the wall. The wall moves up silently, and reveals a passage, a long stair case, leading to a warm light. Una goes down the stairs, and it leads to her seceret library, with thousands of books, new and old, and four computers on the left. she walks to a bookshelf that is painted silver, and goes to the fourth shelf. she pulls out the book shes looking for and goes to sit in her rocking chair.
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The Last Elfling #15
Una ran down to the creature, which was drugged, she turned the creature over, so she was lying on her back. The creature, looked like one of her kind, except for the fact that she didn't have any wings. Una says softly "Emalf eerf siht erutaerc" and flames blast from her palm, and broke the chains into oblivion. She picks up the creature and carries her home on her back.

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The Last Elfling #14
One day Una took a walk through the forest with her friend Mysterious Wolf, which was a wolf, but had a rather strange field of energy. Una could sense this for she is a Psychic, and senses all energies, and she guessed there was more to this Mysterious Wolf than just being a wolf. Also, how many wolfs do you know that can talk? But she didn't get any answers, so she didn't ask any more. But on this specific day they were just wandering around, into different places in the forgotten forest, when oddly enough they came to a lake, "M-Wolf," she said, for thats what she called Mysterious Wolf for short, "I thought you said there weren't any lakes around here" Mysterious Wolf replied "That I knew of, there were none, this is very odd, I've explored all the land of the forgotten forest, I thought." "Well, apparently not," Una answered with a small laugh. They went to the shore, after climbing a hill that was in front of it, when Una sensed a Familiar energy, energy of the same type as her people have. But the sight they saw on the shore was not at all what the expected. On the shore was a small wooden post, with a loop drilled into it, through the hoop were chains of crystal, and at the end of the chains were cuffs, that held a creature imprisoned.
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About the "Heart Snatchers"
Theses "Heart Snatchers" where dark mysterious figures, each having their own special talent. For example, ones callwd Madam Nanimo, her tallent is with diseases, she can give you any known or unknown disease on this planet, it just has to exist

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Tuesday, November 22, 2005


The Last Elfling #13
These curses that she recieved, were either perposly, or accidentally. some curse were good, and more like gifts. yet some curses were bad, and quite strange. The good curses, more like gifts were accidents, not ment to be transfered to Una from Zatsa.There were four main curse/gifts.These had to o with Anger, the moon, her death, and her heart.
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The Last Elfling #12
There is a legend book, that an old man wrote, most thought he was crazy, but he was actually wise, and his soul was from one of her people, he wrote the legend of Thundering Rain, witch he had called Sesiskia Anianauna Mystic, not knowing her real name, the book said "As the moon waxes and wanes so does her power.
Una's heart wasn't changed by Zatsa, but she was born with it. She has a crystal heart, very pure. But there is a price for such a pure heart, she has to be careful, for there are The Heart Snatcher. They search for her night and day, and desire her heart, they have a mirror, where they can go inside the person and snatcher their heart. most humans are fortunate, for they have very simular hearts, and The Snatchers call them "Normal Hearts".

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The Last Elfling #11
The oddest curse she bares is the one with the Moon. it says in a great Another curse is immortality, witch is a good curse, more like a gift, witch was an accident. this is how this curse works, if someone kills her, witch is possible, her last words will be a riddle, witch will grant the one who answers it correctly one wish, that wish can not kill her though, she starts her riddles like this "twenty-four hours past this time, i will reawake, leave me above ground, not under soil, and come when this time repeats it self on a different day, answer my riddle correctly and you may have one disire, her is thy riddle you seak.......(then she says the riddle)" she will die and stay dead forever, when it is four days before the death of the earth.


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The Last Elfling #10
She had a bad habit of bottling up her anger within her. Sometimes this anger would become so strong that it would burst out of her and she would tear everything out of her way, runing straight ahead, her eyes would be blood red, this is one of the curses, and only had one cure, she would tear through any material and become a monster of distruction so to say, but eventually she would run into a water tower, or a lake, or something that holds water, and that would calm her.

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The Last Elfling #9
curses that she recieved were done on purpose, most of them, but a few were accidental transfers from Zatsa. some curse were good, and more like gifts. yet some curses were bad, and quite strange. The good curses, more like gifts were accidents, not ment to be transfered to Una from Zatsa.There were four main curse/gifts.These had to o with Anger, the moon, her death, and her heart.

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The Last Elfling #8
The vioces faded, and Una grew angery. she swunger her sword at Zatsa, but it was just a clone mad on fire, he was actually behind her, he had a dagger in his hand. Una fled quickly to the tallest volcano, Zatsa continued to chase her. Una used all her energy to make all the volcanoes explode. the dead and Zatsa was vanquished, but he arised thirteen times before he is truely dead, every time on a crimson moon. Una created a oxegen breather quickly and flew into outer space in a time capsle. Amd that is how Saturn became a gas planet, the volcanoes were gas, and not lava. Una plumeted onto earth and lived in the Forgotten forest in a hollow Sycoya tree.

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The Last Elfling #7
Zatsa's army charged up to them, about mid day. Zatsa of course was trying to find someone looking at him, but found none. he created an eye beam after the second month of war, many Elflings slewn. he set the eye beam on one he thought was worthy of living, Una. he had watched her fight the whole time, killing many, but never dying herself. the eye beam too strong for Una to fight brought her eye to eye with Zatsa. her eye became ungolfed with harmless flames to her, but they hurt her head, for there were cruel vioces taunting her mind, while all the rest of her people bursted into flames.
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The Last Elfling #6
Zatsa had raised the undead, and they were is army. Death reaked of many miles. all men lined up to fight, but Una ran up and asked to fight also, the men laght at her and said, "No!" Then she challenged them to be in the line. She, and a older stronger man fought, and she won. the men were very impressed and let her in the war.

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The Last Elfling #5
She learned everything and anything. When at age of five she began to learn magic. At age of ten she picked up fghting, with all weapons. At age eleven she learned archery. At age sixteen all she had learned in the previous years she now was a master at them. Of course, her mother was outraged that their daughter didn't know some simple dancing menuvers. So she put her in classes she wanted Una to learn. Una learned for two years dancing, manners, and things that has to do with cloths. The cloths class she didnt mind, for she learned how to sew. When her mother was happy with her improvment in the lessons Una was eighteen
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The Last Elfling #4
She learned everything and anything. When at age of five she began to learn magic. At age of ten she picked up fghting, with all weapons. At age eleven she learned archery. At age sixteen all she had learned in the previous years she now was a master at them. Of course, her mother was outraged that their daughter didn't know some simple dancing menuvers. So she put her in classes she wanted Una to learn. Una learned for two years dancing, manners, and things that has to do with cloths. The cloths class she didnt mind, for she learned how to sew. When her mother was happy with her improvment in the lessons Una was eighteen
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The Last Elfling #3
Most had names like Ana, or legones or something like that. But Thundering Rain, who most elders nicknamed her Una, was not in the most catigory. She was a rejected one by those of her age, but the Elders thought of her as a very wise young child. One of the Elders, Danana was a Phsychic, and gave her news of one reason she didn't fit in with her age group, she said, "its because you are very wise, beyond your years, your soul is very old, ancient, one of our great ancestors souls, and one day they will regret being mean, and cold hearted to you."

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The Last elfling continued #2
Thundering Rain appearance was rather pleasant though, and many girls her age thought that beauty was waisted on her. She had long, golden blonde hair that went down to her knees. Her eyes changed color with her moods, the were most often a mixed blend of colors from the rainbow, or crystal blue. She was extremly skinny. She was also much taller than other girls, she was 5'11, only half the boys were taller than her. Una had a Star on her left hand, and right foot, and a moon on her right hand, and left foot, on the tops on them, not the balls of the feet, or palms of the hand, and a four leaf clover turned on its side without a stem. She was very lean, and mysterious. Most often you could find her in the most unusual places, she was very fond of hide and seek, for no one could ever find her.

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The Last Elfling (Thundering Rain's story)
Long, long ago the planet Saturn was once able to hold life, like earth does to this day,on this planet lived Elfling, half elf half fairy. Now most the Elflings had dragonfly wings, but one could change her wings, most often though they where butterfly wings. this lady was an unusual girl, and never fit in with the femal Elflings, she was unique, strange, unusual, most of the girls in her nieghborhood called her a freak. This Elfling's name was Thundering Rain.

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Danana
Wise phychic, killed in accident, the war against Zatsa
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Luna & Manu
Luna & Manu
Twins
Age of 5
eyes of crystal blue
Luna wheres Blue, most often dresses
Manu wheres Green, most often dresses
each wear a leclace of the cresant moon with a star inside the arch, and a clover in the center of the star

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(Character) Zatsa Batsuka
Saitants right hand man. Zatsa dystroys all Elflings on Saturn. Taunts after Arya and Thundering Rain (una) Don't stare into his gaze, for all your people will burst into flames, mostlikly causing death. Red eyes. ageless. wears all black & red. black hair.

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Monday, November 7, 2005


(character) ThunderingRain
Thundering Rain
Ageless (looks 16 tho)
knee length golden blond hair
eye changing color
6 foot 4 inches
she is a very odd person, the last one of her kind, she has to escape the evil clutches of Zatsa the one who killed her people. this elfling is in a royal family also, and has a some wat twin sister, Ayra. Thunderings rain is much more mystievious than her sister tho, and loves to jion in with curiousity on his crazy adventures. she loves the forests, and is mother natures protector. and she hopes one day to have peace. she wears a long midevil blue dress and a green cloak, the dress has long sleves, she has wings witch change. she is able to change her apearance into anything she wants, she is very good at spying, but is very clumsy

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( character in my story) Ayra
Ayrafound chained to a post with crystal chains, this elf, is very loyal one, but is afraid to trust anyone. Ayra has a very odd perspective of things just to warn you. Most people think she is very creepy, and has mental issues. she longs to be free of the crystal chains that bind her. she can break all substances except for crystal. mad scientists are after her, thinking she is the key to unlocking evolutions secerets. she has crystal blue eyes, and long black hair, she is a elf also, she is twins with Thundering Rain, witch has the same problem as her.
she hates Spiders and mad scientists, but thats about it. theres only one difference between her and her twin and thats that she is an Elf her twin in an Elfling.

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