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Friday, July 28, 2006


I news you what to here below is the first chapter of my book comment and tell me what you think








Chapter one: Twister
It was a stormy night lighting snickered and flashed in th night sky. Annabelle a 16 year old girl was cooking dinner when her mother told her to turn off the burner and watch the news brodcassed. Scince the news was putting out tornado warnings the news cast repoarted that a F-5 twister was tearning up neighborhoods Annabelle felt a shiver go down her back but her mom was there so it stopped. The brocast stated that the F-5 tornado was coming were Annabelle and her mom was she turned off the tv and looked out side she could see it from a long range. Her mom told her to go ahead to the storm shelter that she would meet up with her there. Annabelle run inside noticing that her mom did not follow after her and the tornado was a few feet away. She cruled up in one of the corners and whatted from her mom she had a bad feeling that her mom was not going to meet her. So she cryed her self to sleep in the cold dark space Annabelle was awoke by a noise of the door buging open. When the door opened Annabelle looked up to see a girl with pale cheeks and long dark brown hair tied up in a brade. And was wearing a blue blouse and silk black pants the girl helped Annabelle out. "Whats your name" "Randy" "yours" "Annabelle" "Well Annabelle what are you doing here alone" "Well.....um...I"
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I'll write the rest later sorry


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