Saturday, August 13, 2005

   Part 14…and you guys are going to hate me!
Refi: Hello to you! All my wonderful friends! As the votes would have it, Hiei#27 and Bankotsu’s fight will be my next post so root now for who will win! {And I will be taking direct quotes from my chatbox for those who wish to be active spectators for the post} Then I’ll continue w/ my YYH Beyond Project (although I may disappear doing “research” cause I JUST got my package ^____^ now I have ep 1-90 of YYH to watch and gain characterizations) and one person voted for the Branson critique…so how about if any of you ever get a chance to visit Branson, MO, just give me a holler and I’ll tell you what shows are worth going to and which aren’t k? ^_~ Now for the long awaited moment that many (I hope many) of you have been waiting for…Part 14 of Hiei in RainbowLand!!! ^_________^

Kyo Clone #4: >.> That’s such a stupid story no one wants to hear it…

Hiei Clone #3: Oh and you think you would fair better in that retched place?

Kyo Clone#4: o_O Eeeee!

Refi: Oh and I have a Present for #2, thank you Mishotarup for the idea, I made it myself like Neko-san suggested.

Kurama Clone #2: ^///^ Oh why thank you, you know you didn’t have too! *sees it’s a cheesy drawing of stick figure Refi and #2 infront of a house and #3 are yelling at each other in the background* My ^^;;; how lovely

Refi: I know! ^_^

Kurama Clone #2: Shall we attend the feast now so our friends can hear the rest of the story?

Refi: …the…rest…? ^^;;;;;;

Kurama Clone #2: >.> Refi…

Refi: *looking down while pointing fingers together* Well…you see…I did finish it…but the concluding chapter got so long…I…I…

Hiei Clone #3: Hn. I cut it off! The ending is not appropriate.

Refi: *buzzes Hiei*

Hiei Clone#3: >O.o<

Refi: You shouldn’t interrupt! As I was saying, I finished it, And the ending was a very lovely one at that! but it just got so long…I broke it down for you guys ^^; Next week I’ll post the true concluding chapter! I know I will cause its already written!

Kurama Clone #2: Well, I suppose that’s fair since most readers are intimidated by long post…

Refi: But the fanfic readers are going to kill me…I…I…I left it at another cliffhanger ^^;

Kurama Clone #2: O_O…intense…

Refi: Yeah…I guess I have a knack of keeping readers at the edge of their seats…

Kyo Clone #4: -_- Puh-leeze! Could you get any more humble-er? Its more like they’re at the edge of their seats cause they can’t wait to leave.

Refi: ToT That’s it cat-boy! We’re feasting on leeks tonight!

Kyo Clone #4: LeEkS?!?!? >o< You know that stuff will kill you just as much as I!

Refi: Um…well…I already ate! And no desert for you boy till your plate is clean!

***Migrate to the feast where, yes, leeks are served XP, Kyo looks around and shoves his food onto Tohru’s plate when no one is looking! After desert we all migrate to the official Story telling room where Kurama Clone #2 can continue the story***



In a cavern with a teal glow shining through the roof of it, Murky and Lurky are in front of Yukina, who is tied to a chair

Murky: Come now my dear, where did those jewels I saw you with earlier come from?

Yukina: *turns head away* hmph!

Murky: Now now *places a finger under her chin* You’re going to make us very rich…

Lurky: Gosh Murky, she doesn’t seem like she can talk, is she ok?

Murky: Doh shut up chicken breath and go get something.

Lurky: Ok Murky ^_^ …duh… o.O What do you want me to get?

Murky: Something to extract the jewels out from this kid!

Hiei: You will do no such thing.

Murky and Lurky are taken by shock and turn to see Hiei standing in a entranceway to the cavern

Murky: Oh look, if it isn’t our little friend.

Lurky: Oh goodie! Our friend!

Murky: -_-; Be quiet hairball and just bring him here!

Lurky: Ok Murky! Duh are we going to have a party now? I love parites!

Murky: -_- *turns back to Yukina* Well if I remember correctly it was when this Black kid was hurt that you made jewels before…perhaps we should try that again.

Yukina: NO!

Murky: Aw, so now you’ll speak *turns to Hiei* How fortunate for us that you decided to show up.

Hiei: Hn *Smirks* You really are fools to think that you can hurt me…

Lurky: *reaches Hiei and picks him up by the shoulders and carries him across the cavern towards Murky and Yukina* Come along! We’re going to have a party!

Hiei: Actually… *upon reaching halfway, he kicks, flipping him out of Lurkys grasp*…here is just fine. *to Murky* Why don’t you come here if you are so eager.

Murky: Now is that any way to thank us? After we destroyed the color for you?

Hiei: Funny, the way I see it you should thank me for showing you how.

Murky: Then I shall thank you again for now helping us to become rich! Lurky! Get Him!

Murky runs towards Hiei and pounces on him while Lurky jumps on from behind, Hiei powers up and the force throws them back


Lurky: @.@

Hiei: Might I ask you to bring out the Dragon again?

Murky: *snickers* Well if you insist, but this is going to hurt you more than myself…

Murky pulls out a bottle of dark liquid from behind his cape and starts to explain how it was concocted of the darkest elements that could be found in the pits along w/ the remains of the crystals that Hiei earlier destroyed, while distracted Shy Violet has snuck around the cavern in the shadows and tiptoed up to Yukina in the center, she starts to untie her

Shy Violet: Don’t worry Ice Gem, oh I mean Yu-ki-na, right?

Yukina: *warm smile* That’s right but Ice Gem is fine if its easier for you to say.

Shy Violet: Ok ^^ *finishes untying her* Follow me, we need to get out of here quickly.

Yukina: But Hiei…

Shy Violet: I know, I want to make sure he is ok too, but he can handle it.

Yukina: *sighs* Very well.

Murky: *uncorks the bottle and pours a bit of liquid onto his hand* Now that the lesson is over, I’ll demonstrate your demise!

Hiei: You’re mistaken… *throws off cloak and snatches the bottle from Murky’s hand while Murky stares at the cloak falling* …Now I know what I need to and shall be able to defeat you.

Murky: O_O How did you??? >.< Never Mind You’re Finished! *summons the Dragon*

Hiei: Hn. Fool. You’re the one finished…*pours some liquid onto the hand he summons the dragon with*

Back at the castle, the Color Kids and Kurama are at the color console when all of a sudden Kurama gasps and stands up hitting the console, he starts to sweat

Kurama: Amazing…two dragons at once?

Twink: What are you talking about? Get back to work!

Canary Yellow: Twink! That’s no way to talk to the Great Rose!

Kurama: No, its ok, thank you Twink for keeping me focused ^^ *thinks: Rainbow better hurry, Hiei may not realize it, but he needs the rainbow more than ever now. At least Shy is there with him*

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