Saturday, December 22, 2007

   Naruto: The Epic Adventure!
CHAPTER 16: PROCRASTINATION!! NARUTO AND THE CHRISTMAS GIFT!


A day has passed and Christmas is in full bloom. Christmas is everywhere in the Leaf Village. On the houses, the clothes, even Tsunade got into the christmas spirit by wearing a santa hat with the hokage symbol on it. It seemed like everyone was in the Christmas spirit. Including the Leaf Village's Number One Hyperactive Knucklehead, Naruto Uzumaki.


"Its almost Christmas!" Naruto said as he woke up besides Hinata.

"Good morning Naruto-kun." Hinata said slowly awaking.

"Good morning Hinata." Naruto kissed her passionately as he groped her body.

"Oh Naruto stop. You know we can't keep doing this all the time. Remember? We had to go Christmas shopping today." Hinata said playfully knowing she really didn't want to stop.'

"Oh yeah." Naruto jumped out of the bed. "What are we shopping for again?"

Hinata stepped out of the bed herself. "We are shopping for Christmas gifts and party supplies for Ino's party tomorrow."

"Oh yeah gifts!" Naruto looked in his dresser for his trusty frog wallet he always had as Hinata went to go take a shower. Naruto found and placed it on the dresser and steadily creeped up behind Hinata as she walked to the shower door.

She noticed Naruto behind her and turned around. "Nuh-uh-uh." She shook her finger in disapproval yet playfully. "No taking a shower together or else we won't get anything done today."

"Yes Hinata." Naruto said all sad-like. Hinata kissed him on the cheek as she walked into the shower and shut the door.

After a while both took a shower and got dressed. Naruto wore a silver poncho over his black and orange jumpsuit with boots. Hinata wore her purple and silver jacket with baggy pants and a pair of boots as well. They both left for the Leaf Village Mall at noon. They both walked in it hand in hand.

"Oh Naruto-kun! Look at that christmas tree!" Hinata pointed to the giant christmas tree. "Its so cool"

"Yeah Hinata! Its awesome!" Naruto stared at the tree.

Naruto and Hinata bought so much stuff that Naruto had to use his Shadow-Clones to carry all the bags. They paid for all their stuff and took it to Naruto's apartment. They sat it all down and fixed up Naruto's whole apartment with christmas lights and ornaments. Naruto's Shadow-clones worked long and hard at putting up lights and a tree with presents underneath. Everyone had a present.......except Hinata!

"Holy Shit!!!! I forgot to get Hinata her christmas present!!" Naruto thought but Hinata could sense his distress.

"What's wrong Naruto-kun?" Hinata asked.

"Oh its nothing Hinata darling! I just have to visit Kakashi-sensei for something." Naruto lied.

"Oh ok i'll go with you."

"No no no." Naruto shook his hands. "I'll do it myself. You just sit here and look beautiful for me."

"Awww....ok Naruto-kun. You hurry back now." She kissed him.

Naruto quickly put back on his poncho and ran out into the snow. He trudged through the snow that came up to his knees. He went to Kakashi's house maybe he could help Naruto out.

Naruto knocked on the door. "Kakashi-sensei! Are you there?"

Kakashi shirtless opened the door to a creak. "What is it Naruto?"

"I need your help and....do you have someone in there?" Naruto asked trying to peek inside.

"No." Kakashi tried to obstruct Naruto's view. "What do you need help with?"

"I need to find a Christmas present for Hinata quick! Christmas is almost here."

"How would I know? Try Neji. He's from the Hyuga clan as well. Now if you don't mind......"

"Oh Kakashi! Let's continue playing Make-Out Paradise!" A girl's voice spoke out.

Naruto was shocked. "Was that Anko-sensei's voice I heard Kakashi-sensei?"

"Well look at the time! You better hurry Naruto! Christmas will be here soon!" Kakashi slammed the door.

Naruto was deeply confused at what he just witnessed but he didn't have time for that now. He had Hinata's present to go get. He dashed over to Neji and Tenten's house. He knocked on the door only for Tenten to answer.

"Naruto? Why are you here?" Tenten asked.

"I need to see Neji quick!"

"Ok calm down! Neji-kun! Naruto is here!" She yelled in the house.

Neji walked down in a black shirt with white pants and his hair was let down. "What is it Naruto?"

"I need your help Neji! I need to find a present for Hinata! But i have no idea on what to get h er!" Naruto confessed.

"Ok Naruto! All I know is that she loves stuff like toys and stuff like a little kid. She's kinda cute like that every year." Neji said.

Naruto thought it out. "Hmm. Thanks Neji! I think I have a pretty good idea on what im going to get for Hinata now." Naruto left.

"Awww he works so hard to please Hinata. So Neji-kun what are you going to get me for Christmas?" Tenten asked.

A big sweat drop formed on Neji's head. "Oh look at that! I have to go help Lee with his christmas tree!"

"I'll help Neji-kun!"

"No no no" Neji shook his hands. "You stay here and look beautiful. Wouldn't want you to get dirty." Neji kissed Tenten and ran upstairs to get dressed and then left.

Naruto ran to the toy store in the mall and ran all around searching for the cutest gift he could find.

"Ahhh! Im never going to find a gift in time!" Naruto searched all the shelves and didn't find any gift he could decide on. Naruto then found a big teddy bear but thought it was too original. Then a light bulb went off in Naruto's head. He touched his long black headband.

"I had a blue headband before i left the Leaf Village 5 years ago. Its still in my room.......maybe i could........that's it! I use my old headband and put it on this teddy bear and with the help of Sakura i could make a teddy bear version of me as a kid! Its perfect im glad i thought of it! Naruto Uzumaki you are a genius!" Naruto jumped up and down in joy as he picked up the teddy bear and bought it and ran to Sakura and Sasuke's house.

Naruto knocked on the door. "Sakura! Are you there!"

Sasuke answered the door. "What is it Naruto?"

"Sasuke is Sakura home?" Naruto asked with a giant teddy bear in his hands.

"Isn't it a little early for christmas Naruto?" Sasuke said pointing to the bear.

"No Sasuke! Its for Hinata and I need Sakura's help with it."

"What is it Naruto?" Sakura said coming from behind Sasuke.

"I need your help with this thing!"

Sakura's eyes lit up. "Awww....is that Hinata's?"

"Yeah but I have a great idea for it." Naruto stepped inside and explained the whole situation.

"Awww.....you're making a little you! That's so cute! Of course i will help you! Just let me get my sewing machine! Im a pro at this!"

Sasuke groaned.

"Sasuke show Naruto the sweater I made you!" Sakura ordered.

Sasuke walked and put on a red sweater with the Uchiha symbol on the front and Sasuke's whole name on the back. Sasuke was itchy in the thing.

Naruto laughed his ass off. "Look at that thing!"

"Don't listen to him Sasuke! We are going to wear matching sweaters at the party tomorrow and we will look so cute!"

It took a while but Sakura stitched Naruto's old jumpsuit and his old blue headband onto the teddy bear. It looked so cute!

Naruto held it up. "Not bad! A pretty good looker isn't he!" Naruto held it to his face for them to see.

"Im sure Hinata will love it!" Sakura assured. "Now let's get to work on our matching scarves Sasuke-kun!"

Sasuke frowned and walked over to Sakura but Naruto laughed some more. "Yeah Sasuke-kun go work on your scarves!" He said mockingly.

Sakura gave Naruto a death stare. "Do you want me to kill you! Cause you know I will!"

Naruto stopped laughing and left quickly. He arrived home but realized he just couldn't walk inside with Hinata's present he needed a diversion and hide it. He thought of a good plan. "Shadow-Clone Jutsu!" Naruto produced a second Naruto. The clone knocked on the door as Naruto went and hid in the bushes.

Hinata opened the door. "Naruto-kun! You're back!"

"Hinata! what did you do while I was gone?" The clone started a conversation with Hinata as he led her to the bedroom while the real Naruto wrapped the present and hid it in the secret compartment he had for his stash of ramen he had Hinata didn't know about. He cleared out the ramen and put the present in there and put the ramen in the kitchen cabinent. He then took off his poncho and jumpsuit jacket but needed an excuse once Hinata sees through the clone. The clone poofed away and Hinata got surprised. She walked out to find Naruto snooping around the presents.

"Ahem!" She said.

"Aww you caught me!" Naruto said putting on a show.

"Naruto now you know you have to wait for christmas this tuesday." Hinata scolded.

"Im sorry. I want to know so bad!"

"Here I got something to keep your mind off of the presents." Hinata walked into the kitchen and brought a big steaming bowl of ramen.

"Yay ramen!!!" Naruto kissed Hinata and ate the ramen. "Mission Accomplished!" Naruto thought.


~End of Chapter 16~

Stay tuned for Sunday's episode.

CHAPTER 17: THE PARTY OF THE CENTURY!!

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   hey
Hey everybody! what it do! token is here and im kinda happy *Naruto taps shoulder* what is it roomie?

Naruto: I learned my lesson now. Can we please stop with the specials?

Token: Of course!

Naruto: really?

Token: NO not really! We have to have it done by this afternoon!

Naruto: ahh crap!

Token: its almost christmas did you buy any christmas gifts for anyone?

Naruto: Cripes! Shit! I totally forgot you had to do that!

Token: Well you better hurry or else christmas will come this monday! plus you have two episodes to do tonight along with the next chapter.

Naruto: Token you're killing me here!!! I won't be able to do all that! *runs around screaming*

Token: Well you better find a way! i will post the chapter later this afternoon!

Naruto: Shadow-clone Jutsu! *multiple narutos* ok lets get to work boys!

Token:*sigh*
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Friday, December 21, 2007

Naruto: The Epic Adventure! Christmas Edition Part One
CHAPTER 15: NARUTO AND THE CHRISTMAS SPIRIT!


It was a cloudy day. Naruto and Hinata have been training with each other for the past week.

Hinata and Naruto held up hand signs.

"Shadow-Clone Jutsu!" They both said. And 5 of each popped up.

"Yay! Naruto-kun! I did it! I master the Shadow-Clone Jutsu!" All the Hinatas said as they hugged the Narutos.

"I'm proud of you Hinata! It took me 3 years to master that jutsu!" Naruto exclaimed as the clones poofed away. They kissed each other.

"Ahem! I hope I'm not interrupting anything." A familiar voice spoke out.

"Yes you kinda are!" Naruto said annoyed as he turned around to find Sasuke in the tree branch.

"Anyway I was sent by Tsunade to get you two." Sasuke explained. "We have a mission to do."

"Awesome! We have a mission together Hinata!" Naruto yelled.

"Lets go see what it is Naruto." Hinata said as the three dashed away to the Hokage office.

As always Naruto doesn't knock he just enters. "Hey Granny Tsunade I heard you have a mission for us!"

"Don't you ever knock!" Tsunade said angrily.

"Geez sorry Grandma." Naruto apologized.

"Anyway I do have a special mission for you along with Choji, Sakura, Shikamaru, Sasuke and Hinata." Tsunade said.

"What is it! Is it fighting more bad guys?" Naruto asked as he punches the air.

"No.......something more subtle." Tsunade said.

"Huh? Then what is it Granny?" Naruto asked with a look of confusion on his face.

"You are to go to the Leaf Village mall and dressed up for all the little kiddies and make them happy for Christmas." Tsunade said with a smile.

"What! What kind a mission is that!" Naruto was shocked.

"Aww....come on Naruto! It would be cute to see you and Sasuke in elf outfits." Sakura said with a smile on her face.

"You can't be serious Grandma!" Naruto said in complete disapproval of Christmas dress-up.

"Yes! In fact i am! You will do it or else!" Tsunade yelled.

"Or else what!" Naruto yelled back.

"Or else I will hurt you beyond belief!" Tsunade said with her fist in Naruto's face.

Naruto backed away. He knew that Tsunade meant business. "Ok fine! I'll do it."

"Good! Take the others with you and get ready in the next two hours. you will be doing this all day." Tsunade ordered.

"All day!" Naruto thought. This was going to be a long day.

Naruto, Sasuke, Shikamaru, Choji, Sakura and Hinata dashed to the Leaf Village Mall. They walked into the locker room in the back of the Mall.

"What a drag! I'm an elf." Shikamaru complained.

"You said it Shikamaru! I don't even like Christmas all that much." Naruto agreed.

"What! You don't like Christmas?" Sakura said.

"That's what I said." Naruto replied.

"How could you not like Christmas! It's the greatest time of the year! When Santa comes when you are sleeping and delievers presents to all the good little boys and girls." Sakura explained.

"Yeah yeah yeah. I know that story already! But I haven't recieved one christmas present my whole life! Where's the fat man when I need him?" Naruto said putting on his elf pants.

"What did you say Naruto!" Choji said annoyed that he said the word fat.

"Uhhh.....nothing Choji!" Naruto said to try to get Choji to calm down.

"That's what I thought you said." Choji continued putting on his Santa suit.

"Awww.......Naruto-kun we could spend Christmas Eve together under the mistletoe." Hinata said hugging Naruto's arm.

"Honestly I don't see what you guys see in Christmas so much." Naruto said.

"It's a holiday where we all celebrate and give each other gifts on Christmas Day and sing Christmas carols at the fireplace and wish everyone a Merry Christmas!" Sakura said.

"Whatever. Let's get this over with already." Naruto said putting on his green coat and green christmas hat. They all walked out to greet the little boys and girls.

The girls wore white shirts and green christmas jackets and christmas hats with kinda short skirts and black stiletto heels. The guys excluding Choji wore black shirts and green christmas jackets with red fur and fuzzy green shoes with bells at the ends with a green hat and tight green pants. They walked and greeted the little boys and girls screaming and jumping up and down.

"Look at them all!" Naruto thought as he looked at the huge sea of kids. Naruto and the others walked to the throne were Choji was to sit and waved at all the little children.

"Are you all ready for Santa!" Sakura yelled to the kids.

"Yeah!!!!!!!" The kids yelled so excited to see Santa in the flesh.

"Ok well here he is! Santa Claus!" Hinata yelled.

Choji stepped out of the door waving at all the little boys and girls. Choji totally looked like the real thing. With the red christmas hat and the red jacket and the red pants with the boots. He wore a scruffy white beard to cover his face and black mittens as well. "Ho Ho Ho!" Choji sat down in the throne as the kids formed a straight line towards him. A little girl with a red bow in her head sat on Choji's lap.

"What's your name little girl?" Choji said in a deep voice.

"Rena!" Said the little girl.

"Ho ho ho! what do you want for christmas Rena?" Choji asked.

"I want a pony Santa!" Rena asked with a smile on her face.

Naruto got annoyed. "This is stupid! She has to know she won't be getting a pony!" Naruto thought.

More and more kids came through and sat on Choji's lap and wishing for stupid things. Naruto and the others finally reached their breaktime before the afternoon shift. Naruto ate beef ramen as always. Hinata ate chicken noodle soup. Sasuke had an apple. Sakura had an orange. It was her favoriter fruit. Shikamaru slept during the break. And Choji ate barbecue but was careful not to get it on his suit.

Naruto finished his bowl at the cafeteria table in the back. "Man I can't believe those kids actually believe in Santa like that. This is by far the most easiest mission I have ever done."

"You don't believe in Santa Claus Naruto?" Hinata asked eating her soup.

"Of course I don't! What has he ever done for me!" Naruto complained.

"Awww......come on Naruto!" Sakura said. "Get into the christmas spirit! You better watch out! You better not cry! You better not pout I'm telling you why! Santa Claus is coming to town!" Sakura sang.

"He sees you when you're sleeping. He knows when you're awake. He knows if you're been bad or good, So be good for goodness sakes!" Hinata sang along.

"Come on Sasuke-kun! Sing with us!" Sakura pleaded.

"Fine." Sasuke said.

"Oh! Jingle Bells! Jingle Bells! Jingle all the way!" They all sang. "O what fun it is to ride in a one horse open sleigh!"

Naruto didn't sing it just made him more annoyed than ever. He just got up and left to the alleyway in the back of the mall. Naruto sat on the dumpster. "It's a stupid holiday!" Naruto sulked. Naruto then heard a crying from down the alleyway. It was a little boy crying besides the dumpster. "Hey what's wrong with you?"

The little boy quickly stopped crying and wiped his face. "Nothing the matter with me. What's it to you."

Naruto made a mad face. "Hey kid! I was trying to nice here!"

"Whatever. I don't need your pity."

"What are you doing out here anyway?" Naruto asked.

"None of your business." The kid replied.

That only made Naruto more mad. He grabbed the little kid by the shirt. "What's your problem!"

The kid got mad as well. "It's this whole stupid holiday! I hate it! I hate it!"

Naruto put the kid down and sat down beside him. "Why do you hate it so much?"

"Cause......cause......." The boy began to cry again. "My parents died on christmas eve two years ago and i asked Santa to bring them back and he didn't....."

Naruto really felt bad. "Poor kid." He thought. He looked at the boy and saw himself as a boy crying all alone on christmas eve. He would look in windows and see families being with each other laughing by the fireplace and loving each other. Naruto bowed his head. He didn't have a family to give him presents or love him on christmas. Naruto put his hand on the kid's head and smiled. "Don't worry kid. I may not be able to bring back your parents back, but i can bring you to see Santa."

The kid's face lit up. "Really! The real Santa!"

Naruto chuckled. "Of course! I'm his right hand man!" Naruto sat up and put the kid on his shoulders as he walked to the front of the mall and walked inside. They walked to the throne where Sakura and the others just finished the day's work.

"Where have you been! You missed the whole..." Sakura stopped her fussing when she saw the little boy on his shoulders. "Huh? who's that?"

Naruto put the little boy down and patted his head. "Do you think Santa has enough time to talk to one more kid before he heads back to the North Pole?" Naruto smiled.

Everyone was shocked. Was Naruto in the christmas spirit?

"Uhhh.......sure." Sakura said. She took the boy's hand and led him to Santa.

The little boy jumped with joy as he jumped on Choji's lap."It's you! It's really you! Santa!

Santa! Santa!" The little boy hugged Choji.

"Ho Ho Ho! Why yes it is I Santa Claus! And what's your name little boy?" Choji asked.

"Mushi! My name is Mushi Ukai!" The boy said with a smile on his face.

"And what do you want for christmas Mushi?"

"I want to be a ninja just like my parents were!" The boy said.

"A ninja?" Choji said with a confused look. "I don't know if......."

"Wait Santa! If the kid wants to be a ninja we should let him but we should visit a very important friend of ours first. Naruto interrupted.

Choji and the others looked at Naruto. What's gotten into him?

Naruto grabbed the kid's hand and put him on his shoulders and dashed away. Hinata and the others followed him to the academy building. Naruto knocked on the door.

"Hey Iruka-sensei!" Naruto yelled.

Iruka came and opened the door. He was about to leave for the day. "Naruto? Why are you here?"

Naruto put the kid down. "I have a huge favor to ask you!"

"What is it Naruto?" Iruka was deeply confused.

"Can little Mushi join the academy? It would mean alot to him. Please?" Naruto said as the others came up behind him.

"Well......normally I don't allow students this far into the school year but if he wants to so bad. I guess so." Iruka patting the boy's head.

"Yes! Thanks Iruka-sensei! Did you hear that Mushi! If you work hard and do your best you will be a ninja in no time!" Naruto smiled.

"Really? Thank you Naruto!" Mushi hugged Naruto. "This is the greatest present anyone has ever given me!"

"Aww....gee kid. Stop it you're getting me all sensitive." A tear drops from Naruto's face.

"Don't forget your first day at the academy begins tomorrow. Don't be late." Iruka told Mushi.

"Yes sir!" Mushi saluted Iruka. "I gotta go home now so i can get ready!" Mushi ran off with a smile on his face.

Hinata hugged Naruto's arm. "That was a nice thing you did for that boy Naruto-kun."

"Well it is Christmas time." Naruto chuckled.

"What made you change your mind about Christmas?" Sakura asked.

"I realized that Christmas is about making people happy and being with the people you love not getting presents. I guess I forgot that a long time ago." Naruto explained.

"Wow. That was deep Naruto. Who would have known you would come up with that all by yourself." Shikamaru said.

"Ahh......shut up." Naruto said back.

"Anyway let's go back and change clothes we gotta report back to Lady Tsunade." Sakura said.

The gang walked down the street and then something strange happened. It started snowing.

"Is it snowing?" Naruto said as a snowflake hit his nose. Suddenly it started to snow a little harder. Naruto looked at all the christmas lights all over the Leaf Village. Hinata hugged his arm even more.

"Merry Christmas Naruto-kun." She said as she kissed his cheek.

"Merry Christmas to you too Hinata." He kissed her back.

The gang all walked down the street as the snow fell on them and Christmas cheer was in the air. "Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year." Naruto thought.


~End of chapter 15~

Stay tuned for the next christmas special!

CHAPTER 16: PROCRASTINATION! NARUTO AND THE CHRISTMAS GIFT!

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Thursday, December 20, 2007

Happy Holidays!!!!
I want to take time outta my day and say to thank you to all those who supported my Naruto fanfic. And to show my appreciation I brought a special friend of mine to speak to you all.

*a poof of smoke appears* It is I! Naruto Uzumaki! Here to wish you all a Happy Holidays! Merry Christmas! And all that other crap!

Token: What's up with you? Where's your christmas spirit!

Naruto: What christmas spirit? I'm too busy training to be Hokage!

Token: Come on Naruto! It only comes once a year!

Naruto: Why should I care? I only came cause you told me there was ramen in it for me and so far there is no ramen in sight!

Token: *punches Naruto* Idiot! Get in the spirit or else!

Naruto: Ok ok ok! what does that say at the bottom? *read the bottom of the site* O no! you're not putting me in a christmas special!

Token: Tough cookies! You are actually in five!

Naruto: What! What am i going to do in these specials?

Token: Well all i can say is that it fit with my storyline and you're at the center of them. *evil laugh*

Naruto: What are you doing to me Token!

Token: Shut up! You will see tomorrow in the first christmas special tomorrow!

Naruto: I'm going back home! Merry Christmas and to hell with it. *sulks away* stupid token he said there would ramen!

Token: Sorry about that folks. Trust me he will learn his lesson soon enough. but anyway Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! *lassos Naruto and drags him*

Naruto: Hey! what are you doing!

Token: We gotta go rehearse for your special tomorrow!

Naruto: Aww man!

HAPPY HOLIDAYS FROM TOKEN DA BLACK GUY!!!!!!!
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   Naruto: The Epic Adventure!
here it is! chapter 13 and 14!


CHAPTER 13: A NEW JUTSU! TRAINING DAY BEGINS!

The sun shone on Hinata's face as she woke up. She found herself in Naruto's arms. She kissed his forehead and walked out of the bedroom. She cooked breakfast in Naruto's blue and orange jumpsuit she found lying on the ground where they left it. She made eggs and sausage with a nice tall glass of orange juice. She heard a knock at the door but forgot to put on a pair of pants.

She opened the door. "Hello?"

"Uhhh.....Hi Hinata..............where are your pants?" Neji said.

Hinata quickly covered herself and ran to go get them and put them on. "Sorry about that Neji...I....I....I....."

Neji chuckled. "I see what's going on here"

Hinata froze. Naruto walked up wearing his jumpsuit pants rubbing his eyes. "Hey Hinata have you seen my jacket? Oh here it is!" Naruto noticed Neji. "Oh crap! Neji!"

"Alright you two. What did you do last night on your date?" Neji asked with arms crossed.

Naruto and Hinata blushed a dark red. "Uhh...well....you see.....nothing....happened....We just ate at Ichiraku ramen and slept.......but certainly not together......" Naruto stuttered.

Neji tried to hold it but couldn't. He fell on the floor laughing so hard. "Oh man! You guys should see the look on your faces right now!"

Suddenly Sakura and the rest popped up and laughed as well. "Did you two really do it last night?" Sakura asked.

"Its none of your business!" Naruto yelled.

Neji activated the Byakugan and search their expressions up and down. "Yep! they did!"

Ino, Tenten, and Sakura giggled. "Was it good?" Sakura asked.

"Shut-up!" Naruto said annoyed.

"Awww come on Naruto! we are all friends here!" Tenten said.

"Did she scream?" Kiba said. Kohaki punched him in the back of the head. "What was that for!"

"Its none of your business!" Kohaki said.

"Please baby it wasn't like I didn't have you screaming last night" Kiba smirked.

"Oh please Kiba it was just a little foreplay." Kohaki said.

"Yeah right! If you call doggystyle foreplay" Kiba said.

Kohaki blushed.

"Oh me and Neji made love at the hot springs under the moonlight. It was so romantic!" Tenten said.

"Sasuke was so forceful last night. We broke pictures off the wall and everything." Sakura said giggling.

Everyone was talking about their wonderful nights that they completely forgot that Naruto shut the door a long time ago. Naruto and Hinata took a shower together and put on their clothes. Then they ate breakfast which Hinata made earlier.

"Hey Naruto! We need to hurry up and go meet at the arena in an hour! today's the Leaf Ninja Tournament Selection. We get to find out who we will be facing in a month! Hurry up already!" Sasuke yelled at the door.

Naruto almost choked on the eggs he was eating. "What! We better hurry!" Naruto ate his breakfast even faster. "You ready Hinata?"

"Yep i'm finished now. Lets meet the others there!" Hinata said excited. She climb on Naruto's back and piggybacked him towards the balcony. Naruto jumped off the guard rail into the sky. Hinata's hair blew in the wind as they jumped from building to building. The rest of the gang caught up with them.

"About time! We need to hurry!" Sasuke said.

"Don't rush me Sasuke! I know already!" Naruto yelled.

They reached the building of the old arena they did the Chunin Exams in 5 years ago. They all walked inside and looked at the empty seats.

"Man does this place bring back memories!" Naruto said.

"Yeah it kinda does!" Sakura said.

Suddenly a poof of smoke appeared and Kakashi, Iruka, Kurenai, Asuma and Guy-sensei appeared out of it. "Hello fellow contestants! Welcome to the first Annual Jonin Entrance Examination Tournament Selection Set!" Iruka said.

"Man that was a mouthful wasn't it Iruka?" Asuma said.

"Yeah I know but Lady Tsunade begged I say it for them. I almost forgot the words." Iruka said.

"Iruka-sensei!" Naruto said as he hugged his old mentor.

"Hello Naruto! My goodness! Look at how you've grown!" Iruka said.

"And I've gotten stronger too Iruka-sensei!" Naruto boasted.

"Is that right?" Iruka asked. "Well anyway I heard that you became a Chunin last week and just in the nick of time too. You made the Jonin Entrance Exam. I'm proud of you Naruto!"

"Yeah who would thought that little guy would make Chunin and let alone even make Genin." Kurenai said to Asuma.

"Yeah last we saw him, he completely surprised us by beating Neji, a child prodigy no doubt. Who knows what the kid learned in under 5 years with one of the great Sannin." Asuma said back.

"Any way everyone stand with your respective Jonin teacher while we make the tournament listings." Iruka said.

Naruto in his black and orange jumpsuit and long black headband stood with Sakura who wore black heels with the same red shirt and shorts she always wore during the day with black gloves. Sasuke wore his old black spandex suit he wore at the Chunin Exams years back. They all stood with Kakashi, the same as always. They were the elite Team 7.

Hinata wore black high heels with her purple and silver jacket with the fur at the end of the sleeves and black tight pants. Kiba wore his black jacket with the furry hood with grey pants and Akamaru had a Leaf headband tied around his neck. Shino wore a green trench coat that covered his face with black pants and his trademark shades. Kurenai wore her trademark red shirt with the white stripes with black outlines with her khaki shorts. They were the superb Team 8.

Shikamaru wore his traditional grey shirt with the teal Nara clan symbol on it with his Chunin jacket on and wore black pants. Ino wore her purple shirt with white shorts with fishnet pants underneath them. Choji wore his old Genin outfit. The one with the Akimichi symbol on the white shirt with his green jacket and the white scarf and black pants and bandages wrapped around his legs. They stood with thier Jonin teacher Asuma. They were the marvelous Ino-Shika-Cho Team 10.

Neji wore a long white robe with a silver string tying it together and grey pants. Tenten wore the same thing only it was red at the bottom half with tan pants. Lee wore his traditional green workout uniform with the red headband tied around his waist with orange leggings and bandages wrapped around his hands. They stood with their Jonin teacher and personal rival of Kakashi, Guy-sensei. They were the genius Team Guy.

"Ok if everyone is here and accounted for we can explain the process of how this works" Iruka said.

Suddenly a bang and poof of smoke appeared when Anko busting out of it with a large chalkboard and a tournament bracket on it. "Ok Chunins! You are here cause you are the best of the best of all Chunin in all of the Leaf Village! Its the first Annual Jonin Selection Tournament. As you all know only one of you will become Jonin at the end of this Tournament so it won't be we choosing you like in the Chunin Exams." Anko said.

"So all we have to do is beat everyone here and become Jonin? Sounds easy enough!" Naruto exclaimed.

"Its not that easy we have to follow this bracket and whoever wins all their matches will become the next Jonin of the Leaf village." Anko said pointing to the chalkboard.

Everyone looked at the chalkboard. "So how do we do this selection process?" Kiba asked.

"Well we choose numbers out of a box and put your name on the board to see who you will be facing in a month. whichever bracket you're in you will be facing that opponent in the same bracket even if you are on the same team." Anko said.

"Really? Who came up with this idea for a tournament instead of just promoting us?" Shikamaru said.

Anko rubbed her head. "Well Lady Hokage came up with the idea and we saw no argument there. It was a great chance to raise money to add on to the Leaf Village."

"Plus it would give us a chance to see how much you all have grown over the past 5 years." Kakashi said putting his hand on Naruto's shoulder.

"Correct and the Kazekage will be to rate your abilities as well and may ask for your assistance in missions Jonin or not." Anko said.

Another poof of smoke appeared and this time it was Tsunade, Jirayia, Gaara, Kankuro and Temari.

"Hey Grandma Tsunade! Pervy Sage! Gaara! Kankuro! Temari!" Naruto said.

"Hey kid! I wish i could seen you come back from your rescue mission but i was too busy doing research yesterday." Jirayia said.

"I bet so!" Naruto said.

"Anyway lets get the selection process underway!" Tsunade said.

"Oh yeah i can't wait to see who im going to blow away next!" Naruto said as he drew a number out of a box. He looked at the ball. "I got a number 7!"

It was Sasuke's turn. "I got a 10."

It was Sakura's turn. "I got a 1."

It was Ino's turn. "I got a 2"

It was Shikamaru's turn. "I got a 11."

It was Choji's turn. "Oh yeah! I got a number 3."

It was Kiba's turn. "Look at that Akamaru! Number 12."

It was Shino's turn. "An 9"

It was Hinata's turn. "A 5."

It was Lee's turn. "Yeah! Guy-sensei! A number 8!"

It was Neji's turn. "An six."

It was Tenten's turn. "A four! my favorite number!"


"Ok that's everyone! Now look at the chalkboard and look at your bracket standings." Iruka said. Everyone looked as told.

"The first match is Sakura Haruno of team 7 versus Tenten of team Guy!" Iruka said.

The two girls looked at each other and shook hands.

"The second match on the list is Ino Yamanaka of team 10 versus Hinata Hyuga of team 8."

The two girls looked at each other and shook hands as well.

"The third match is Choji Akimichi of team 10 versus Naruto Uzumaki of team 7!"

Naruto looked sternly at Choji shaking his hand. "Give it all you got Choji!"

"You bet i will!" Choji replies.

"The fourth match is Shino Aburame of team 8 and Kiba Inuzuka of team 8 as well."

"Awesome! Shino don't hold back on me just because we are teammates!" Kiba said.

"If you wish Kiba." Shino said.

"The fifth match is Shikamaru Nara of team 10 versus Neji of team Guy."

"Hmph! Guess we are opponents Shikamaru." Neji said.

"Yeah its a drag but i guess i gotta do it." Shikamaru said.

"And the final match of the first round is Rock Lee of team Guy versus Sasuke Uchiha of team 7"

The two looked at each other as the wind blew. "I knew this day will come when me and you would meet in combat Sasuke Uchiha." Rock Lee said.

"Me too. I've been meaning to pay you back for that fight years ago." Sasuke said.

The two shook hands with a tight grip. "I'm better than I was before." Sasuke said.

"Me too." Lee said.

Guy stood beside Kakashi. "Look at them Kakashi! My prodigy Lee vs. your Sasuke! It would be my chance to prove my superiority over you! my biggest rival Kakashi Hatake!"

Kakashi turned away from his book and looked at Guy. "I'm sorry did you say something?"

"Darn you Kakashi! Why do you always have to act so cool!" Guy said to himself grabbing his head.

"Ok remember we meet back here on December 26!" Anko said. "Don't be late!"

"Hey kid! We gotta go start your training now." Jirayia said.


"Ok Pervy Sage!" Naruto ran to Hinata. "I gotta go" Naruto kisses her. "I see you later." Naruto dash away with Jirayia.

"Sasuke we gotta go start your training as well." Kakashi said.

"Sure I'll be right there!" Sasuke said as he kissed Sakura goodbye. He dashed away with Kakashi.

"Sakura come on! I have a new Jutsu I wanna teach you." Tsunade said. They dashed away as well.

"Come on you three your dads want to train you as soon as possible." Asuma said to Ino, Shikamaru and Choji. They dashed away as well.

"Well you three know the deal. To the training field." Kurenai said. They dashed away as well.

"Ok! Lets get back to more rigorous training!" Guy said.

"Ok Guy-sensei!" Lee said saluting Guy.

Neji and Tenten sighed as they dashed away with Guy-sensei.

"Come on Gaara! We got to work on fixing your Kazekage uniform." Temari said.

Gaara frowned. "I hate wearing that thing Temari."

"You are going to like it!" Temari yelled.

Kankuro sighed. "Here we go again!" Kankuro put his fingers in his ears to block out the arguing as they dashed away.

Meanwhile Naruto and Jirayia stop at a field of tall grass. Naruto looked around the grass that came up to his knees.

"So what's the new jutsu you're going to teach me Pervy Sage!" Naruto asked.

"Who said anything about me teaching? I said training. I'm here to conduct research. Your next phase of training is making up your own personal jutsu like the Fourth Hokage made the Rasengan."

"What! How the heck am i supposed to make up my own jutsu!" Naruto asked.

"All I can say is that you should use the wind around you." Jirayia said.

"What the heck does that mean? Use the wind around me?" Naruto asked.

"Do I have to explain everything to you? I mean the wind will help you create a new jutsu. If you find a way to control the wind you can use it to your advantage and use it to blow away the competition." Jirayia said.

"Ok but first how do i create a Jutsu?" Naruto asked.

"I don't know think of a idea and try it out." Jirayia said looking at women through his telescope.

Naruto thought long and hard. "An idea huh?" Naruto sat down in the grassy knoll and looked at the sky suddenly a shuriken fell out of his pouch. Naruto looked at it and with some serious thinking a light bulb popped up in his head. "I got it! With the power of my chakra and the wind element I make my new technique! The Rasen Shuriken!"

"What to go kid! That's using your head! Now do it over there away from me so i can continue my research." Jirayia said.

"Some support you are!" Naruto scoffed. "Watch out everyone! Naruto Uzumaki is going to blow you all out of the water!" Naruto held his fist to the sky.

~End of chapter 13~

Will Naruto make a new jutsu in time for the tournament? Find out tomorrow in chapter 14!

CHAPTER 14: STRENGTHEN BONDS! SOLI IS BORN!

A week passed after the selection bracket. The Leaf Chunin trained long and hard. Sasuke was on the tip of a tree focusing his chakra at the soles of his feet as the moonlight shone on him. He has been there for hours. Sakura was sparring with Lady Tsunade. They have been sparring for two days straight. Choji was alone in a adbandoned field as he practiced his expansion jutsu. Shikamaru was in the forest trying to focus his shadows more accurately. Ino didn't train she felt weird all day but paid it no attention. Hinata, Shino and Kiba trained separately but Hinata had a weird feeling.

"Shino and Kiba-kun haven't talked to each other in days. I'm starting to get worried that this competition may have made them not be friends anymore." Hinata said looking at them train away from each other.

"Im going to beat Shino and his bugs and be one step closer to becoming Jonin" Thought Kiba.

Shino looks at Kiba but turns away and continues training.

"Hey Shino! Kiba! How bout we stop training and go hang out?" Hinata said to break the ice.

"I don't feel like it Hinata. I'm training right now." Kiba said monotone-like.

"Me neither I have to visit Ino. She said she's sick and needs me." Shino said ignoring Kiba and dashed away.

Hinata bowed her head. "I really hope they will be ok."

Meanwhile Neji Tenten and Lee were training rigorously with Guy.

"Oh man Guy is going to kill us Neji!" Tenten said to Neji sweating.

"No doubt he finally lost it!" Neji said back.

"Awww....come on you two! Guy-sensei only wants us to be in top physical shape for the tournament next month! " Lee tried to comfort his teammates.

"Ok that's 500 pushups! Now 200 laps around the Leaf village walls!" Guy yelled.

Tenten and Neji sighed. This was going to be a long two weeks.

Meanwhile Naruto held up his left arm with the palm to the sky. One clone made the Rasengan while another clone used chakra to swirl the air around and made wind and the last clone morphed the chakra ball into a shuriken.

"RASEN SHURIKEN!!!!" Naruto yelled but couldn't contain the power as it dissolved and Naruto fell to the ground. "I need to train even harder than ever if I want to complete this jutsu. But i can't move I have been out here training for a whole week straight." Naruto passed out under the moonlight.

The next day Naruto awoke and found Hinata in his face.

"Naruto come to the hospital quick!" Hinata yelled.

Naruto stood up quickly. "Why! what's wrong!"

"I don't know! I was told by Sakura to hurry and go to the hospital and i ran into you on the way here. Come on!" Hinata explained.

Hinata and Naruto raced to the Leaf Village Hospital where they met up with Sakura, Sasuke and the rest.

"Hey! I'm glad you guys could make it!" Sakura said.

Naruto had a look of confusion on his face. "Make it for what?"

Sakura got annoyed. "Ino is having her baby dunce!"

Naruto's eyes lit up. "What!"

"Yep! Just like you and Hinata will have one day!" Sakura smiled.

Naruto gulped. "What! Kids! Never!" Naruto shook his hands in disapproval.

Everyone smiled as Naruto and Hinata blushed. Naruto looked around the crowd. "Hey where's Shino?"

"He's the father so he's in the there with Ino right now." Sakura said. "So we wait till its born"

"What! we are waiting! I thought the thing was born already! How long do we have to wait!" Naruto yelled.

Sakura punched him in the head. "Keep your voice down Idiot! Its a hospital! And I don't know how long it takes! Hours maybe."

Naruto rubbed his head. "Hours? I don't have that kind of time!" Naruto thought but he sat down and didn't say a word.

Naruto and the rest sat for hours as he got more restless and annoyed. "Man how long does it take to pop the damn thing out already!" he thought.

Finally a nurse walked out to greet the gang. "I'm proud to say that the little baby has been born." She said with a smile.

"Can we see it?" Tenten said.

"Sure as long as you can be quiet." The nurse said putting her fingers together to her mouth to signal them to be quiet.

They all walked to the glass window where babies are placed and Naruto placed his face to the glass. "So which one is Ino's kid?"

"I don't know which one Naruto-kun. We don't know the baby's name." Hinata said beside him.

Shino wheeled out an tired looking Ino in a wheelchair.

"Man she looks like she has been in an accident!" Naruto said.

Sakura punched him again.

"Hey everyone." Shino said.

"Are you happy Shino?" Tenten asked.

"Yeah, me and Ino are estatic at the birth of our child, Soli Aburame."

Naruto didn't laugh but in his head he was laughing his ass off. "The kid's name is sugar blossom!!!!!" He thought. Naruto tried to hold it in. "Where's the restroom?"

"Down the hall to the left." The nurse said.

Naruto ran to it and went inside the stall and let out his laughter. "Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha Sugar blossom!!!" Naruto walked out back to where the gang was and put his face to the window again. "Ok lets find sugar bloss......I mean Soli!" He said to Hinata.

Hinata scanned the sea of babies and found the one with the clipboard that said Soli. "I found him! to the left! isn't he so cute!"

"Yeah yeah yeah" Naruto agreed with her but really didn't.

"I want to have kids, Naruto-kun!" Hinata said hugging Naruto's arm.

Naruto gulped. He didn't exactly have a great history with kids. They were annoying selfish little brats who always wanted crap and didn't appreciate the finer things in life. It was at that moment Naruto had a epiphany. "I used to be the same way. But I didn't have a mother and father to take care of me. I don't remember having any at all. The only father figure i can think of is Iruka-sensei. He believed in me even though I was a troublesome brat." Naruto thought. He smiled. "Ok Hinata we can have kids one day."

"Oh yay! Thank you Naruto-kun!" She kissed him.

Naruto walked out with Hinata hand in hand to his apartment as the moonlight shone on them. They walked into Naruto's apartment and laid on his bed in thier underwear as Hinata hugged Naruto and closed her eyes as if to go to sleep. Naruto laid back in the covers with his hands on the back of his head thinking.

"Naruto?" Hinata said softly.

"What is it Hinata?" Naruto said kissing her forehead.

"I need you to do me a favor." She said with her eyes still closed.

"Anything for you." Naruto said.

"I want you to teach me the Shadow-clone Jutsu tomorrow." Hinata said.

Naruto was shocked. "Why would Hinata want to know the Shadow-Clone Jutsu?" Naruto thought. "Why?" He asked.

"Cause I could use it in my training session so that I can get stronger." She said.

Naruto kissed her on the lips. "Ok I'll teach you first thing in the morning."

Hinata smiled as she drifted off to sleep. Naruto chuckled. "Hinata you are one of a kind." He thought as he drifted off to sleep.

Meanwhile Kiba couldn't sleep. "Akamaru let's go visit that baby of Shino's." Akamaru was dead asleep though. Kiba put on his jacket and pants. Kiba left Akamaru alone and silently left Kohaki. He walked all the way to hospital and asked to see the baby since he wasn't with the others who went since he was training. He looked through the window and found little baby Soli sleeping so quietly. Suddenly Shino walked up behind him.

"It's a beauty isn't he?" Shino said. "I feel a happiness in my heart to know that child is mine and I want to let it know I will always be there for it."

Kiba looked at Shino without his shades. It was the first time he had seen Shino's eyes. They were a deep shade of green. "Yeah its a nice little guy"

"I was going to tell you tomorrow but since you're here Ino wanted you to be the Godfather of our child." Shino said.

"What! Me!" Kiba said. "Why me?"

"Ino thought that since you were my best friend you should be the Godfather should anything happen to us along with Kohaki." Shino said.

"Ok sure Shino." Kiba said but he was mentally kicking himself. He was a total jerk to Shino over the past couple of days. He spent his time training to beat his friend instead of supporting him and his newborn child. "I'm honored Shino"

Shino put back on his shades. "Well I gotta get back to Ino. The doctor said she may not be 100% in time for the tournament competition so it's best if she withdrew from it. We will tell Hinata tomorrow."

"That is right. Hinata's first match is with Ino." Kiba reminded himself.

Shino walked away to the hospital room where Ino was and gave her the news that she would have to withdraw from the competition. She was mad but she was too weak to argue as she passed out. Shino sat down in the seat beside her bed and slept.

Kiba walked back home and silently crawled back into his bed and snuggled with Kohaki. Kohaki slowly awoke.

"Kiba whats the matter?" She asked.

"Huh? Oh its nothing. I'll tell you in the morning." He replied.

They both went to sleep as the wind blew throughout the village hidden in the leaves.

~End of Chapter 14~

Stay tuned for Friday's special!

CHAPTER 15: NARUTO AND THE CHRISTMAS SPIRIT!
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Wednesday, December 19, 2007

   Naruto: The Epic Adventure!
ok heres chapter 11 and 12 of my ninja fanfic!


CHAPTER 11: THE ANNUAL JONIN TOURNAMENT! GAARA RETURNS!


Naruto slowly awakes in a hospital bed and find Hinata sleeping right beside him on the edge.

He bent over and kissed her on the forehead. Naruto then looked to his left and found Kiba

reading a magazine. Naruto then looked to his right and found Sasuke eating a apple with his left arm since his right got chopped off.

"Hey Sasuke how's it hanging!" Naruto asked.

"I should ask you the same thing you've been passed out for two days now." Sasuke said.

"What! Two whole days!" Naruto yelled.

"Yep! and Hinata never left your side not once. That girl is devoted to you Naruto." Kiba said.

Naruto looked at Hinata and felt a happiness in his heart that someone actually loves him. He smiled. Naruto heard the door open and saw a tall nurse about two years older than them walking towards them.

"Well it seems like you're finally awake Mr. Uzumaki. How are you feeling?" The nurse asked.

"I feel great!" Naruto said as he ripped the bandages off to find his wounds completely healed.

"What are you doing!" The nurse yelled.

"Look at me! Im fine." Naruto said.

"Well we have a fast healer here!" She said. "But your arm is still broken though"

Naruto wiggled his left arm in the sling and wiggled his fingers. He ripped the sling apart and bent his left arm up and down. "Nope its healed also!"

"Wow! either this kid is a fast healer or our medicine is better than i thought." The nurse said.

The door opened again and this time Sakura, Ino, Shikamaru, Kohaki, Choji and Akamaru step through.

"Hey Sakura!" Naruto said.

Hinata woke up drooling a bit and her hair was a mess. She wiped away the drool and rubbed her eyes.

"Hey Naruto and Sasuke. How are you two doing?" Sakura said.

"Im doing great as always! I feel like I can take on the whole world!" Naruto said as he stood on the hospital bed with fire in his eyes holding his fist in the air.

Sakura smiled as she turned her attention to Sasuke. "How about you Sasuke-kun?"

"I doing fine. Just here eating an apple." Sasuke replied.

Naruto's stomach growled. "Oh man! I just realized I haven't eating in two days!"

Choji opened a bag of chips. It seemed so appetizing to Naruto. "Hey Choji how bout sharing those chips with me?"

Choji's eyes stared at Naruto like he was crazy. "Are you crazy! I never share my barbecue chips with anyone except Yuki!"

"Yuki? Whos that?" Naruto asked as he sat back down in his bed.

"Oh yeah that is right! Since you've been gone Choji got married to a girl from the Village hidden in the clouds." Shikamaru said.

"Choji? Married?" Naruto thought. Naruto's stomach growled again. "Man I'm so hungry!"

"Its ok Naruto-kun. I got a surprise for you!" Hinata said. "Meet me in the hospital lobby later." She kissed him on the lips and ran out the door.

"Awww! They are so cute! Watching them makes me wanna be with Shino right now!" Ino said.

Akamaru jumped onto Naruto licking his face. "Hey Akamaru! Hey cut that out! That tickles!" Naruto laughed unbearably.

Akamaru stopped licking Naruto and jumped onto Kiba and started licking him.

Naruto looked at Sasuke and Sakura in another make out session. He smiled. "I remember Sakura always desperately tried to get Sasuke's attention when we were kids. But now I guess I'm not the only dimwit who didn't realize love." Naruto thought.

"Do you guys think that you would be ready in time for the Annual Leaf Ninja Tournament in three weeks?" Shikamaru asked.

Naruto drew a blank expression on his face. "Oh crap! I totally forgot! Grandma Tsunade told me about that! I got to get training quickly!" Naruto stepped out of the bed to leave but Sakura pulled him by the hair.

"Oh no you don't! You are no condition to start training idiot! Sakura said.

"Why not! Im completely healed!" Naruto argued. "Why don't you tend to your boyfriend!"

A vein appeared in Sakura's head. "I said no!" She punched him in the head.

Sasuke smirked.

"Gee ok mom!" Naruto said rubbing his head.

"Mr Uchiha is it? Well Mr. Sumataku will see you now in the emergency room." The nurse said.

The nurse walked away with Sasuke and Sakura. Kiba looked into Kohaki's eyes. "I love you Kohaki."

"I love you too Kiba." Kohaki said as they kissed passionately.

Ino looked at Shikamaru and Choji. "We should throw a party!"

"Oh yeah! with food!" Choji said.

"A party? Why Ino?" Shikamaru asked.

"Cause we all have someone now! I have Shino! You have Temari! Sakura has Sasuke! Choji has Yuki! Kiba has Kohaki! Neji has Tenten! And Naruto has Hinata! We should totally have a huge party!" Ino said.

"Aren't you forgetting someone?" Shikamaru asked.

"If you are talking about Lee, don't worry I found someone for him." Ino replied.

Shikamaru looked at Ino with a confused look but paid it no attention. "Anyway we should get ready to leave for the Leaf Village today."

"Sure! I can't wait to see Kakashi-sensei again!" Naruto said as he jumps out of the bed and opens his backpack and pulls out a spare set of clothes. His old jumpsuit, the classic blue and orange one. He ran to the shower room and took a shower. In the shower he noticed someone
singing a beautiful song in the stall next to him. He lifts himself up and finds a purple haired girl washing herself and singing so beautifully. His eyes widen as he looks up and down her naked body. He starts to sweat a little. He carefully steps back down.

"I just saw Hinata naked." Naruto thought as he blushed a dark red. "Darn you Pervy Sage! Im a pervert like you!"

"Naruto is that you?" Hinata's voice spoke out.

Naruto froze with fear. "What do i say! Hey Hinata I just saw you naked! No no no that's not the way to go! Gahhh!" Naruto thought. Naruto didn't respond but just left to put on his jumpsuit.

Naruto sat in the hospital lobby still thinking about what he just saw. "Oh man! I didn't know she could have curves like that! I mean she always wore that jacket and everything so i couldn't see anything but I've never been so........confused and excited before. I mean I wanted to walk into that stall and kiss her but I'm still a virgin."

"Hey Naruto-kun!" Hinata said as she walked up beside him. "Are you ready for my surprise?"

"Ummmm.......sure Hinata" Naruto uneasily said.

Hinata ran off into the hallway and pushed out an cart.. "It's your present for saving me."

Naruto's eyes widen as tears of joy rolled down his face. "Cake!"

The inscription on the cake read "I love you with all my heart" and it was shaped in a pink heart.

"Oh thank you Hinata!" Naruto kissed Hinata passionately as their tounges rolled around each other. Naruto couldn't help himself but stroked Hinata's body as they felt each other's passion for each other.

"Ahem!" a voice rang out.

Naruto and Hinata broke up their make out session to find Shino and Ino holding hands.

"Save it for when we get home you two!" Ino said.

"Oh ok." Hinata blushed but Naruto dived into his cake eating it. "Uh-huh....." Naruto said with a mouth full of cake.

Naruto ate all of the cake and was hyper off the sugar. "Sugar Rush!!!" Naruto and Hinata held hands as they walked to the entrance of Mizuke Village.

Kiba was on one crutch as he kissed Kohaki. "Are you sure you wanna leave this village?" Kiba asked.

"Yes this village would be fine without a king telling them what to do. Right now I wanna be with you!" They kissed again.

"Is everyone here?" Shikamaru asked.

Naruto looked around and searched the crowd. "Hey where's Sasuke and Sakura?"

"Here we are!" Sakura shouted holding Sasuke's hand.

Naruto looked at Sasuke's right side and noticed he had a new arm. "Hey! Your arm!" Naruto pointed.

"Yeah! the doctors built a robotic arm for Sasuke and gave him skin to boot." Sakura said with a smile.

Everyone gathered around and looked at Sasuke's cool new arm. "Ok ok. Its not important right now. We have to report back to the Leaf Village." Sasuke said.

"He's right. We should be heading off now." Shikamaru said. Then a carriage pulled up and everyone got in except Naruto and Hinata the rode on top of it.

"Look at the sky Naruto-kun. Its so beautiful!" Hinata said.

"You're more beautiful." Naruto kissed Hinata as they rode off into the distance.

Two days later. Everyone looked at the Leaf Village Entrance and breathed a sigh of relief.

Naruto jumped from the carriage in front of the entrance. "Oh Yeah! We are home again! Im heading to Ichiraku Ramen first!"

Sakura pulled him back by the collar and stopped him. "You idiot! You have to report back to Lady Tsunade first!"

"Oh yeah...I forgot all about Grandma Tsunade! Lets hurry up and visit her already!" Naruto said.

The gang walked to the Hokage office and Naruto opened the door without knocking. "Hiya Granny Tsunade! We are back!" But Naruto was shocked to find that Tsunade wasn't alone. He saw a pale 19 year old with black eye shadow with a red shirt and red pants with a gourd on his back.

"Hello Naruto Uzumaki." The pale kid said.

"Gaara!" Naruto said happily.

~End of Chapter 11~

ok i must warn you the next chapter is a little mature and those who are offended by it, shut up and read it anyway! Save your opinions for someone who cares but for those who like it, you're welcome to speak.


CHAPTER 12: NARUTO'S FIRST DATE!

"What are you doing here Gaara?" Naruto said as he put his arm around Gaara.

"Didn't you know? I'm the Kazekage now." Gaara said.

"What!!!" Naruto exclaimed. "You're the Kazekage!" Naruto was even more shocked.

Gaara chuckled. "Yep. After my father was murdered by Orochimaru, the Sand village elders saw me fit to be the next Kazekage."

Naruto smiled. "Well I'm happy for you Gaara! You've really changed alot since last i'd seen you"

"Thanks to you Naruto." Gaara replied.

Naruto looked confused. "Why me?"

"If it wasn't for you, I would have never learned what it means to love. I met a really nice girl in the Sand village a few months back and we've been dating for some time now." Gaara said. "How have you been doing?"

"Being with the love of my life, Hinata Hyuga!" Naruto said as he pulled Hinata closer to him.

"Ok ok Lets get down to business!" Tsunade said from her chair. "I see your mission was a success."

"Of course it was! All thanks to me!" Naruto said.

Sakura punched him in the back of the head. "Sasuke and the rest helped too!"

Naruto stood up rubbing his head. "Ok ok ok anyway what's Gaara doing here anyway Grandma Tsunade?"

"He is here to witness the Leaf Ninja Tournament with Me next month." She pointed out.

"Oh yeah! I gotta get training as soon as possible!" Naruto said.

"Well Naruto-kun I was wondering if we could spend the day together if you wanted?" Hinata asked.

"Sure anything for you Hinata." Naruto kissed her on the forehead and left the room.

"Man those two really are into each other aren't they?" A voice said from out the window.

"Is that you Kakashi-sensei?" Sakura said.

Kakashi stepped through the window with a issue of make out paradise in his hands. "Hello everyone. I was just reading outside the window and overheard Naruto disregard training for a date."

"Yeah I'm kinda shocked myself." Sasuke said.

"I don't feel like training today myself Temari" Shikamaru said.

"You never feel like it Shika-kun!" Temari said.

"Kiba you should rest your body for today." Kohaki said.

"Ok" Kiba said as he kissed Kohaki.

"I'm sorry but I don't believe we met before." Tsunade said.

Kohaki broke her kiss. "Oh please excuse my manners." Kohaki bowed. "Im Kohaki Yisuragi.Its an honor to meet the Hokage herself."

"Pleased to meet you Miss Yisuragi." Tsunade said as she held her hand. Kohaki shook it. "And please call me Tsunade." Kohaki smiled.

"Kohaki come on and lets tend to my "wounds"" Kiba said with a devilish look.

"Ok Kiba. Well it was nice meeting you all. Goodbye!" Kohaki said.

"Goodbye. Anyway I see that you're all in a cheery mood. You all have the week off." Tsunade said with a smile.

"Oh thank you Lady Tsunade! Come on Sasuke! Lets go see that movie I have been dying to see!" Sakura said.

"Not that movie! I wanted to see the action film that came out today!" Sasuke complained.

"Please Sasuke-kun!" Sakura said with puppy dog eyes. "I'll even give a extra special present during the movie." Sakura whispered.

Sasuke's eyes lit up. "Ok!" The two left the room hand in hand.

"Temari we have to go meet up with the village elders with Kankuro and make the plans for the tournament next month." Gaara said.

"Sure little brother. Come on Shika-kun!" Temari said holding Shikamaru's hand.

"What a drag!" Shikamaru refused.

"I said come on!" Temari growled as she pulled him out the door and Gaara followed.

"Well I have to go visit Yuki. She must be worried sick about me!" Choji said as he left too.

"Oh yeah! Lee! I need you to come with me please!" Ino said.

"Huh? Why?" Lee said.

"There's someone I want you to meet." Ino said pulling Shino out the door. Lee followed with a puzzled look.

"Well Tenten Let's go hang out at the hot springs. I need a vacation." Neji said.

"Ok Neji-kun! And i'll wear that bathing suit I've been dying to wear!" Tenten said.

"And I can't wait to take it off either." Neji whispered with a devilish look.

"Oh Neji you're so bad!" Tenten said playfully slapping his chest as they walked out the room.

Tsunade smiled. "Look at them all. Their love makes me feel all fuzzy inside!"

"Yeah yeah I'm going to go read somewhere else." Kakashi said leaping out the window.

"Damn you Kakashi!" Tsunade frowned.

Meanwhile Naruto and Hinata were eating at Ichiraku Ramen. Naruto was on his sixth bowl.

Hinata smiled watching him eat like a crazy person.

"I love ramen but not as much as I love you" Naruto kissed Hinata on the lips.

"Are you ready Naruto-kun?" Hinata asked.

Naruto stopped slurping his ramen. "Ready for what?"

"I would love to hang out at your house for the evening." Hinata asked.

"Ok Hinata." Naruto said finishing his ramen and paying the owner. The two left for Naruto's apartment. Naruto opened the front door. and sat down on the couch with Hinata sitting beside him as they looked out the window and saw the sunset.

"Oh look at it! Its so beautiful! And I'm spending it with you!" Hinata said looking into Naruto's eyes.

"Aww I love you so much Hinata." Naruto said as he kissed Hinata on the lips. His tounge licked Hinata's lips for entrance. She replied and their tounges met and rolled around each other. Naruto softly stroked Hinata's hair. Hinata took off his jacket and threw it on the ground.

Naruto took off his jumpsuit jacket and threw it off as well.

"Naruto wait." Hinata said. "Are you sure we should be doing this? I mean I'm still a virgin."

"Its ok Hinata I'm a virgin as well. And I guess if two people really love each other then its ok if we commit to each other." Naruto said.

"Ok Naruto.....I love you so much." Hinata said taking off her shirt to reveal a purple bra.

Naruto took his shirt to reveal a ripped chest. They french-kissed each other again as they stroked each other's bodies. Naruto was quickly aroused at the sight of Hinata's hot body. He couldn't contain his passion for her. He laid her on the couch and unzipped her pants and took them off.

Hinata unzipped Naruto's pants as well as he slid out of them. Naruto took Hinata's hand and they walked into his bedroom. Hinata laid Naruto on the bed as she kissed his lips down to his waist. She took off his boxers and she took off her panties and jumped on top of him. They both sweated in heated passion as their hearts beat as one. Hinata rode Naruto.

"OH NARUTO!!" Hinata blushed at the lustful pain.

It lasted for a few minutes as Naruto flipped Hinata over and began thrusting her so gently. The bed squeaked in repetition with Naruto. Naruto began to pant and sweat as he cupped Hinata's breasts. He kissed her neck so softly.

"YES NARUTO!!" Hinata said as she grabbed Naruto's head and ran her hands through it.

Naruto grunted and moaned at this seductive pleasure. It felt amazing. He didn't want it to stop. He wanted this feeling to last forever.

"Oh Hinata I love you so much!" Naruto said as his thrusts got faster and harder. He was at his limit.

"YES YES YES YES!!!!" Hinata let out a scream.

Naruto came and laid beside Hinata as the two caught their breath and fell asleep in each other's arms. The moonlight shone on them while they slept.

Meanwhile Kakashi was on his couch reading his book as always then heard banging on the wall. Kakashi ignored it at first but it got louder. Kakashi stood up and banged back on the wall.

"Hey do you mind! I'm at the climax of my story!" Kakashi yelled.

"OH ME TOO! OH SASUKE!" Sakura yelled from the other side.

Kakashi drew a blank expression on his face. "I can't believe i just heard that!" Kakashi said covering his ears as he walked into his bedroom and closed the door. In silence he could finally
read Make-Out Paradise.

~End of Chapter 12~

Find out tomorrow's episode.

CHAPTER 13: A NEW JUTSU! TRAINING DAY BEGINS!


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Tuesday, December 18, 2007

Naruto: The Epic Adventure!
This is awesome! The climatic battle between a four tailed Naruto and a Satan looking Raz! play your favorite hardcore metal song to this chapter it will perfectly fit!


CHAPTER 10: THE POWER OF FRIENDS! THE SUPER RASENGAN!


Naruto charged in a flash powered by anger and hate shoved the Rasengan into Raz's chest. Raz pinwheeled back into the wall. Naruto growled as he clawed at his head shrieking in pain and then he glowed red as he emitted a red beam that pierced the roof. His transformation ran its course as he began to lose control of his actions.

Hinata watched in horror watching Naruto's four-tailed transformation. He totally looked like a real fox. "Naruto-kun what's happening to you?" She thought.

Everyone else saw the beam and began to run faster to the source. Naruto then stopped emitting the beam and stood zombie like and walked towards Hinata. His headband fell to the floor as he stepped over it. His eyes glowed red.

"Naruto...Naru" Hinata said in fear.

Naruto stood in front of Hinata as he drooled and growled. Hinata froze in fear and closed her eyes as Naruto's fox face came closer to her then stopped. He stroked her hair with his claws she opened his eyes to find him crying. She could sense his spirit and knew he meant no harm.

"Naru...Look out!" Hinata screamed at Naruto.

Raz attacked Naruto's blind side but Naruto turned around to catch the blade and flipped Raz into the wall. Naruto raised his left arm and it got all rubbery and threw at Raz and wrapped around him. Naruto pulled Raz towards himself and prepared another Rasengan only this time it was red and flamy. It connected with his gut and flew back again. Naruto sensed it wasn't over as he charged Raz and uppercutted him into the air. Naruto jumped up after him and threw a punch but Raz blocked it and used one of his free arms to punch Naruto in the face into the throne room. Naruto stood on all fours with the four tails hovering above him. Raz prepares to attack as he ran at a high speed and each of his katanas attacked one after another but each time Naruto's tails would block the barrage.

"Damn! Full power!" Raz thought. Raz then glowed red as his attacks got faster. Soon the impacts were so powerful it shook the whole fortress. Their struggle saw no end it seemed.

Meanwhile the gang gathered around Hinata, Sakura, and Sasuke.

"Is he ok?" Shikamaru asked.

"Yeah I stopped the bleeding but we need to get outta here this place is falling apart." Sakura said.

The place shook as each blow was taken. "What about Naruto!" Hinata asked.

"No time! We gotta go!" Neji said.


The gang left the crumbling fortress and dashed away to the town with the townspeople watching the explosions from afar.

Meanwhile Naruto was still going at it with a fully powered Raz. Raz struck but Naruto ducked and headbutted Raz. Naruto charged but Raz roundhouse kicked Naruto in the face back into the wall into another room. Naruto jumped from the rubble and punched Raz in the stomach. Raz fell over on his back as Naruto jumped up and stomped Raz in the face. Naruto went ballistic and repeatedly stomped Raz further and further into the concrete. Naruto jumped to deliever the final blow but Raz dodged it.

Raz spit out blood. "Is that the best you got!"

Raz threw flames from his swords toward Naruto. Naruto ran and dodged each attack. Then Naruto ran up the wall and leapt and tackled Raz into a wall. Naruto rapidly punched Raz's stomach. Finally Naruto roared at the sky. Raz took the opportunity to kick Naruto into the shower room. As water sprayed everywhere some of it hit Naruto's red fur. It sizzled of it and created a ton of steam. Raz dived in it but couldn't see anything in the steam. Suddenly thunderous blows came from everywhere. Naruto's eyes then glowed red in the steam and punched Raz in the face. Raz jumped through the roof to get away but Naruto jumped up after him and kicked at Raz but it got blocked. Raz grabbed Naruto's leg and threw him into the ground below.

"This has got to end! I can't stay in this form forever!" Raz thought.

Raz landed on Naruto's body breaking the ground. Naruto's tails grabbed each of Raz's arms and flung him into the wall. Naruto attacked once again but his attacks seemed to get weaker. One tail disappeared into Naruto's body. Raz ran and struck at Naruto with two swords but Naruto grabbed both of them as blood dripped onto the floor. The red fur started to revert back into Naruto's body. Naruto was surrounded by a fox aura in his three-tailed state.

"He's getting tired! Now is my opportunity to strike!" Raz thought as his katanas struggled to gain control.

Naruto began to revert to his two-tailed state. Naruto closed his eyes and thought of all his friends counting on him. Then he opened his eyes as they glowed red.

"Yahhh!" Naruto yelled as he broke the katanas in half.

Raz then stabbed Naruto in the chest with a katana and backed away.

"Yes I win!" Raz said.

Naruto fell to his knees as thoughts of everyone ran through his head. blood dripped through his wound.

"What are you doing!" A demonic voice spoke at the back of his head.

"I don't think i can go anymore Fox. I'm exhausted." Naruto said back.

"And this is from the kid who made a promise to protect the one he loves!" The fox yelled. "I may hate you but i hate losing ten times more! Now you get back in there and fight!"

Naruto stood up as the two tails stood over him and he glowed red. He pulled the katana outta his chest and broke it in half. His wound regenerated.

"What! He's still alive!" Raz said. Raz got angry and charged Naruto.

Naruto held up a familiar hand sign and made a clone. They both held out their hands and a large Rasengan appeared. They charged Raz carrying the large Rasengan together. Raz's katana connected with it and the impact exploded.

From far away the gang watched the explosion engulf the entire fortress as dust and pebbles flew towards them. They covered themselves as the wave of dust and rocks hit them.

"What was that!" Kiba said.

"I don't know but check it out!" Neji said.

The gang looked to find a carriage carrying King Yunko in it escaping the battle zone. King Yunko's carriage rode away but the horses stopped in front of Neji. Lee and Choji ripped off the side doors. Shino stepped inside to find a frightened Yunko. Shino grabbed him by the shirt and lift him to his face.

"You messed with the wrong village and now you must pay!" Shino said as bugs crawled on his face which only frightened the king even more. Shino threw the king outta the carriage onto the dirt ground.

Kohaki who was holding Kiba walked to the king. "You're reign of terror is over Uncle. These Leaf ninjas risked their lives to save their loved ones and now you will pay the ultimate price!" Kohaki looked behind her to find the townspeople cheering them on.

"Oh Yeah! We win again! Now lets celebrate with some barbecue!" Choji said.

Ino and Shikamaru got annoyed and they both punched Choji in the head. "You idiot! Not now!" Ino said. "Yeah we have to find out if Naruto's ok!" Shikamaru said.

"Kohaki you stay here and keep an eye on the king." Kiba said as he gave a kunai to her. "And use that if you have to." Shino took Kiba from Kohaki and everyone dashed away.

They went to the fortress which was now a large crater. "Hey i found him!" Tenten said pointing to the left.

Naruto laid unconscious in his ripped pants. His body was cut and bruised all over his body. Hinata and the others ran to his side. Hinata grabbed and held up his head and stroked his hair. "Naruto.....wake up please."

Naruto's eyes slowly opened as the first thing he saw was Hinata's face. "Hey beautiful."

"Oh Naruto I thought you were dead!" Hinata said with tears of joy.

Tenten, Sakura, Ino and Temari look confused. Did Naruto just give Hinata a compliment?

"Ok did i missed something here? Do they both like each other?" Temari said.

"Yep! our little Naruto has finally seen through his dimwittedness and finally realized Hinata loved him for a long time." Sakura said holding up a armless Sasuke. Sasuke smirked at the remark. Everyone laughed.

But laughter turned into despair when the rubble a few yards away started to move as a bloodied and cut Raz emerged. "Why is everyone laughing! You're still dead!"

Everyone's eyes widen as they couldn't believe he was still alive after that explosion.

"Surprised huh? I can cheat death thanks to my former boss, Lord Orochimaru! But I left him years ago when i found out i was a tool to find him the real weapon in his arsenal, Itachi Uchiha. I thought i was supposed to be the body! Orochimaru used me and I'm now some king's bodyguard! My power was the strongest! So i adbandoned the plot to get Itachi and left Orochimaru to find a new purpose and i found it in King Yunko! And now you Leaf punks had to mess it all up!" Raz said.

Naruto stood up clutching his left arm. "Its broken all right but i can still fight!"

Hinata stood up also. "Naruto you can't! You're hurt!"

Neji stepped in front of her. "It's his fight we let him fight it alone! That has always been Naruto's way for as long as we can remember."

Hinata looked away but found something twinkling in the dirt. She ran and cleaned the dirt off it. It was Naruto's headband. "Naruto wait!"

Naruto looked behind him to find Hinata running towards him. "Hina..." She kissed him on the lips. Then she tied his headband on.

"You dropped this." Hinata smiled.

Naruto blushed a deep red. "Thanks." He held out his right hand. "Hinata give me some chakra"

"Ok.." Hinata held out her hand over his and a purple and blue swirl appeared.

Neji walked over and put his hand over Naruto's and a white swirl appeared with the rest.

Lee walked up and did the same thing and a green swirl appeared.

As did Tenten a red swirl.

As did Ino a yellow swirl.

As did Shikamaru a black swirl.

As did Shino a silver swirl.

As did Kiba a brown swirl.

As did Sakura a pink swirl.

As did Sasuke a dark blue swirl with his only hand.

As did Choji a orange swirl.

And last Temari a tan swirl.

The Rasengan was full of colors like a little rainbow typhoon. Naruto contained the chakras and it all turned a bright white and glowed.

"Thanks everyone!" Naruto said. "And Hinata if i don't make it I want to let you know that I love you."

Hinata's heart fluttered. Oh how long she waited to hear him say that. "I love you too!"

Naruto smiled as he started to jog then gained speed. He held the glowing Rasengan as he charged.

Raz's curse marks came only halfway on his body. "Bring it on kid! You're were the first to push me this far but it ends here!" Raz lifted his katana and struck at Naruto.

Naruto ducked and pushed the Rasengan into Raz's chest. "Take this! Super Rasengan!" Naruto yelled as the Rasengan burned Raz's chest. The force of everyone's chakra overwhelmed Raz as it exploded on him instantly disintegrating him.

Naruto put down his burned right hand. He felt to his knees then fell on his stomach. He passed out.

Hinata and the others rushed to his side. "Is he gonna be alright?" Hinata asked.

Sakura put down Sasuke and checked Naruto's pulse. "His pulse is slow but he will live with some well deserved rest." Sakura smiled.

"I guess the little guy is more powerful than i last remember him." Choji said.

"Yeah that's why i want to beat him one day." Sasuke said clutching his armless wound.

Sakura sighed. "Honestly you two amaze me with your little rivalry. I don't know what to do with you two anymore."

"Well we all need to get to stronger if we are to prepare for the Leaf Ninja Tournament next month. The winner gets to be Jonin!" Lee said with a fire in his eyes.

"Yeah but me and Kankuro are already Jonin in the sand village while Gaara's the Kazekage." Temari said.

"What a drag! My girlfriend is a higher rank than me!" Shikamaru said.

Everyone just laughed as the sun shone on them all. Naruto's eyes opened a little peek to look at the sky and saw a cloud formed like the fourth hokage smiling at him. Naruto smiled before passing out again.

~End of chapter 10~

that was awesome! Whats next for our favorite Leaf ninja? Its a brand new story saga for them. Find out Wednesday on a brand new episode!

CHAPTER 11: THE ANNUAL JONIN ENTRANCE TOURNAMENT! GAARA RETURNS!


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Monday, December 17, 2007

Naruto: The Epic Adventure!
CHAPTER 9: HEAVEN VS. HELL: NARUTO ASCENDS!


Naruto woke up from his unconsciousness hearing clangs in the background. He looked around and found Sakura's hands healing him. He stood up.

"No Naruto! You need treatment!" Sakura fussed.

Naruto took out his jumpsuit jacket and his shirt to reveal two deep wounds on his back and chest. "Thanks but no thanks.....I come heal myself." He put his hands together.

Sakura looked confused. "What are you talking about?"

"Watch." Naruto started to glow red as the wounds sizzled and regenerated at a high speed.

"How did you do that Naruto-kun?" Hinata asked.

"I'll tell you later...but right now Sasuke needs my help!" Naruto said as he charged back into the fray.

Meanwhile Vaka was shocked to see her kunai didn't hit Tenten, but Lee instead. "How did you break free from my Gravity Jutsu!"

Lee looked at the kunai in his arm and pulled it out. "That's just the thing. I didn't"

Vaka's eyes widen. "What! How are you able to move!"

"After years and years of weight training with Guy-sensei this gravity jutsu of yours is just like it only a little tougher." Lee said.

Vaka backed away afraid. "No one has ever broken it before!" She was so afraid that she did the only thing she could do. Run.

Lee started to run after her but Neji stopped him. "No Lee we won. You saved us both. I guess you finally proved you were better than me."

Lee's eyes widen as he jumped up and down so happy. "Whoohoo! Yes I finally did it! I knew that hard work and effort would be just as good as pure genius!"

"Ok Lee we get it! Now lets go help Naruto and Kiba!" Tenten said.

"Yeah!" Lee said as the trio continued their objective.

Meanwhile Kiba transformed into a werewolf. He looked at Akamaru's laying body and stared back at the man who killed him. Suddenly Kiba started to drool out of his fangs then he howled again. He charged the man crushing the ground at each step and he threw a punch but the man blocked it with his fist as the ground crumbled at the impact. Kohaki and Shino watched from up above at the two powerhouses battle it out in a hardcore brawl.

"Do you think this will work?" Kohaki asked.

"It has to work." Shino said.

Kiba's punches connected with the man's face. But he regained his senses quickly and he punched Kiba in the stomach. The impacts rippled through the air. They traded blow for blow for a long time as the two didn't seem to back down from each other. Suddenly Kiba punched the man in the face sending him flying back. Kiba clutched his arm in pain.

"I can keep up the transformation for long! I have to end it now!" Kiba closed his eyes. "Naruto what would you do?" Suddenly an idea came to mind. "I've got it!" Kiba ran towards the man when he was getting his bearings together and slid on the ground and kicked him in the chin sending him in the air. Then Kiba jumped up after him and flipped then kicked him in the face sending him flying into the ground. Still mid-air Kiba thought of him as a child holding Akamaru.

"THIS IS FOR AKAMARU!!!!!" Kiba yelled as he spun extremely fast. "Super Tunneling Fang!" The attack connected in the man's chest as his eyes rolled back into his head as the impact made a huge crater.

Kohaki and Shino jumped down and looked down in the crater and found Kiba back into his normal form. Shino went and got him and brought him back up.

Kiba coughed up blood. "I did it Shino....for Akamaru.."

"Uhhhh....Kiba there's something we gotta confess." Shino said.

"What is it Shino?" Kiba asked with a confused look.

"Ruff!" A bark spoke out.

Kiba's eyes widen. "Akamaru! I thought....I....I"

Kohaki walked up besides Kiba. "Actually it was Akamaru's idea.....to play dead just like a dog"

"What but how!" Kiba asked.

"When Akamaru pushed me outta the way he growled and looked at me sternly. Then he played dead to tell me what he wanted to do. At first i thought he was crazy. But me and Shino played along with the charade. Now i see what he wanted to do! Way to go Kiba! You beat Zaraku!" Kohaki said.

Kiba growled. "If my body wasn't half destroyed! I would kill you guys!" Kiba's frown then turned into a smile. "At least you're alive and that's all that matters." Kiba rubbed Akamaru's head then he coughed up blood on himself.

"Ok lets get you to Sakura so she can make you better." Shino said as he carried his teammate towards the hole in the wall. The three and Akamaru walked away.

Meanwhile Shikamaru put his hands together in a circle. He focused and a million plans ran through his head. Suddenly his eyes popped open.

"Ino do the genjutsu quickly! We're doing the Ino-Shika-Cho move our dads taught us!" Shikamaru said.

"That move! we haven't practiced it in forever!" Ino pointed out.

"Just do it! Hurry!" Shikamaru yelled.

Ino hurried and did a flurry of hand signs. "Ninja Wolfsbane!" Suddenly everyone disappeared around Mali. Purple flower petals blew around the wind.

"What kind of genjustu is this!" Mali said. Suddenly Mali saw dark figures which looked like Shikamaru Ino Choji and Temari. He threw kunais at them. "Hmph! Fools! Standing there like idiots!" But they didn't budge at all. "What?"

"Who's the idiot now?" a voice said behind him.

Mali looked behind him to find Choji but didn't have time to defend himself.

"Partial Expansion Jutsu!" Choji's fist grew ten times it size as he punched Mali with great force.

Mali's body went flying into a huge oak tree breaking his spine thus killing him in the process.

"Yeah Shikamaru you did it! What was that move?" Temari asked.

Shikamaru let go of his hand sign. "Well it was all a matter of deception. With Ino's genjutsu it gave him a sense of alert as he frantically searched for us. So i use my Shadow Impersonation Jutsu to mimic us so he would divert his attention to the shadows instead of Choji sneaking up behind him to attack." Shikamaru said with a smirk on his face.

"Yeah! We did it!" Ino yelled."Now lets see if we can find Shino and the others" Ino then climbed on Choji's back and they headed off into the direction Neji and the gang headed off earlier.

Meanwhile Sasuke was clashing with Raz. Neither seemed to give up as the metals continued to clash and clang. Sasuke then backed off beside Naruto to catch his breath.

"Is that curse mark giving you trouble Sasuke?" Naruto asked.

"No i need to go further." Sasuke said as the curse marks on his body began to glow and morph into a medium tan color as a black star appeared on his face.

"Wait Sasuke! Pervy Sage told me about the curse mark. Its a dangerous jutsu that destroys your body in the long run. Are you sure you wanna do go through with the second state?" Naruto asked.

"Just leave it to me Naruto I'll have this guy beat in no time!" Sasuke said.

Naruto put his hands together as the fox chakra covered him. "And let you have all the fun? I don't think so!" The fox chakra covered him and made fox ears and one fox tail. Naruto put himself up in a attack position.

"Figures." Sasuke scoffed. "Naruto i already know about the nine-tailed fox. I saw him when we fought 5 years at the valley of the end."

Naruto's eyes widen as he bowed his head as he looked back at Hinata. She looked at Naruto with surprise in her ears at his power. "I'm glad you are ok with it Sasuke but how will everyone else take it?"

"Don't worry about it Naruto! I already explained it to everyone that Naruto Uzumaki doesn't hurt his friends." Sasuke said as put up his sword to attack. "Lets fight this guy and go home!"

"Alright!" Naruto growled as he and Sasuke charged Raz.

"The second state! and the other kid what kind of chakra is that!" Raz thought. Raz's katana glowed a red color then he swung it as fire flew out towards the two.

Naruto and Sasuke dodged it as Sasuke made a flurry of hand signs. "Fire Style! Pheonix Flower Jutsu!" Thousands of mini fireballs flew out of Sasuke's mouth towards Raz.

Raz swung his red katana again making a stream of fire that swallowed the fire attack. "Idiot! Fire beats fire always!" Raz yelled.

Sasuke smirked. Raz's eyes widen as the shurikens popped out of the fire streams. "There were shurikens in those fireballs!" Raz thought as he blocked all of them with his katana.

Suddenly Naruto attacked Raz from the left. Raz dodged it and backflipped and Sasuke was waiting for him. Sasuke swung his katana but it was blocked by Raz's katana. Raz saw Naruto coming to attack again and ducked and sweep kicked Naruto and Sasuke. He swung his sword at Naruto's head. Naruto dodged it and sweep kicked Raz but he backflipped from it. Sasuke then charged him and their katanas met again. Sasuke ducked as Naruto threw a punch and it connected with Raz's face as it sent him flying back into the wall. Raz slowly emerged from the rubble trying to catch his breath.

"These two are strong. I guess i have to push it to the next level." Raz thought as the curse mark glowed red and covered his entire body and made two devil horns on his head and turned his skin blood red. "Now its time for you all to witness my true power!" Two more arms popped outta Raz's body as it ripped through his shirt. "Multiple Blades Jutsu!" Raz threw his katana in the air as it split into three more as his hands caught them.

"Get ready Naruto!" Sasuke yelled.

"Way ahead of you!" Naruto said ad as he charged Raz.

"Pathetic fool!" Raz said as his body bulged with muscles and his feet turned to hooves. He lifted his katana and swung it as a force of air left the blade and hit Naruto. Naruto blew back as his body hit the wall on the opposite side.

"Naruto!" Hinata yelled.

"Darn you!" Sasuke yelled but realized as soon as he put up his sword to fight he couldn't move. "What is this force thats come over me? Move Sasuke move!"

Raz charged an frozen Sasuke and raised his katana and struck at him and chopped off Sasuke's arm. "Too late to be having second thoughts kid!" Sasuke's katana and arm fell to the ground. a bloody mess.

"Sasuke!" Sakura yelled.

Raz prepared to finish Sasuke off as he struck again at the frozen Sasuke but Naruto jumped in blocking it with a kunai.

"You touch Sasuke again.......I'll kill you!" Naruto yelled as his eyes glowed a demonic red.

"What!" Raz thought.

Naruto exploded with red chakra rippling through the air. The fox chakra bubbled as Naruto punched Raz in the stomach and sent him flying into the wall. Naruto fell over one knee and looked at Sasuke's bleeding body. Sakura ran and got Sasuke and brought him outta harm's way.

"Sasuke hang in there!" Sakura cried out.

"Aaahhhh!" Sasuke yelled out in pain.

Naruto then got angry and red fur grew outta his body as the fox ears grew longer and four tails were now present. "You hurt Sasuke and now i'll kill you! I'll make you pay for hurting my friends!" Claws appeared longer than ever. The red fur covered his entire body. "I'll show you what true horror is!" Naruto said in a demonic voice as his eyes glowed red. The thoughts of all his friends ran through his mind. "You kidnap Hinata, then you disrespect her and you hurt Sasuke! You're dead! I'll make sure you never see the light of day again!"

Vaka stepped from behind Raz. "I'll help you out Lord Raz!" Raz soon realized it was her who paralyzed Sasuke. He got angry at her and slashed her in half. "I didn't ask for you help!" Raz put himself in a defensive position. "Bring it on!"

Naruto watched in horror as Raz slashed his own teammate in half. "What kind of friend are you! She was your own teammate!"

"I don't have time for that honor shit kid! She interfered and she got dealt with!" Raz yelled.

"Man that's cold!" Naruto then growled and charged Raz as a ball appeared in his hand. "RASENGAN!"

~End of chapter 9~

whoo! man im good! Will Naruto win! find out tomorrow!

CHAPTER 10: THE POWER OF FRIENDS! THE SUPER RASENGAN!

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Sunday, December 16, 2007

Naruto: The Epic Adventure!
CHATPER 8: KIBA'S FINAL ATTACK!

Neji, Lee, Tenten, Kiba and Akamaru and Shino dashed through the corridor.

"Kiba do you smell them?" Neji asked.

"Kiba sniffed the air for Naruto and the others. "Thats not good."

"What?" Lee asked.

"I smell blood up ahead!" Kiba replies.

"We better hurry" Neji said.

Meanwhile Hinata's eyse were wide open and blood was on her face as she sat up from the push. "Naruto-kun!"

Raz's katana had struck Naruto deep. Blood poured outta his deep wound.

"Fool! you were too concerned about the girl that you didn't have time to protect yourself!" Raz said.

Naruto threw up blood and smirked.

"What are you smiling about! I know something that will wipe that smirk of your face!" Raz yelled as he ran to attack Hinata.

"Hinata!" Naruto yelled clutching his deep cut. He dashed after him without thinking.

Raz lifted his katana to attack and struck. Naruto hovered over Hinata and recieved the brutal attack. Blood spilled everywhere.

"Aahh!" Naruto screamed.

"Why! Why are you sacrificing yourself for me!" Hinata asked with tears in her eyes.

"Because.....because i made a promise to Neji to protect you with my life! And i never go back on my word.....thats my nindo! My ninja way!" Naruto said.

"How touching....too bad you're gonna die!" Raz said as he geared to attack again. Suddenly a clang of metal was heard. "Huh? Who are you?"

"Im Sasuke Uchiha" Sasuke said as he pushed Raz away.

Naruto looked behind him. "Sasuke......" Naruto softly said.

"Are you ok Naruto?" Sasuke asked.

"Yeah i'll be ok!" Naruto said. "Shadow-Clone Jutsu!" A clone popped up. "Transform!" That clone transformed into a large shuriken. "Sasuke catch!"

Sasuke caught it. "So you wanna do that huh? This brings back memories." Sasuke held up the Shuriken. "Demon Wind Shuriken! Windmill of Shadows!" Sasuke threw the shuriken at Raz. Just as suspected he dodged and leapt in the air. Another one came flying at Raz.

"Crap! one in the shadow of the last!" He dodged it again barely as it cut him on the hip.

Suddenly the two shurikens poofed into Naruto and his clone as they bounced off the wall. The clone began swirling chakra in Naruto's hand as they flew towards Raz. Suddenly the clone stopped and poofed as the ball glowed. "Rasengan!"

"What!" Raz said as he looked behind him in mid-air. He turned around and attacked. His katana met the Rasengan. Chakra rippled through the air as the two combatants growled trying to overpower the other.

Meanwhile Kiba and the rest down the hallway but suddenly a force overcame Neji, Lee, and Tenten.

"Hold on! I'll save you guys!" Kiba yelled.

"No Kiba! Go save your teammate!" Neji yelled.

Kiba, Akamaru, and Shino trusted them and dashed away.

"Can you move Tenten?" Neji asked.

Tenten tried to move but couldn't. "I can't Neji! Its like gravity pulling us down!"

"Well look at the brains on captain obvious!" A woman stepped from the shadows. "And who's the cutie here!" She walked to Neji frozen in his place.

"Who are you?" Neji asked.

"Why I'm Vaka of the village hidden in the grass." She walked around Neji to his ear. "And may i ask who you are hot stuff?"

"I'm not supposed to talk to strangers." Neji joked.

"Aww but I'm no stranger." Vaka said as she stroked Neji's chest and seductively licked his ear.

Needless to say, that pissed Tenten off. "Keep your hands off of him! You Bitch!"

"Let's say we lose the party pooper, huh sweetie?" Vaka said as she grabbed a kunai knife and walked past Lee towards Tenten.

Tenten's heart raced. She couldn't move an inch.

"Come on Neji! Move! Move!" Neji thought.

"Say goodnight whore!" Vaka raised her kunai and struck. Blood went through the air.

Meanwhile Kiba, Akamaru, and Shino ran down the hall. Suddenly Kiba got tackled by a ripped figure through a wall outside into a field.

"Did anyone get the license plate of that truck that hit me?" Kiba said rubbing his head.

Suddenly the same ripped figure attacked from up above. Kiba backflipped and dodged the attack. But the man kept coming and attacked again. Kiba didn't have time to dodge. Suddenly a shield of bugs appeared and blocked the attack.

"Thanks alot Shino!" Kiba said.

The man backed away shaking the bugs off. Suddenly a tidal wave of bugs came after him. The man pulled up part of the ground and made a shield. The bugs hit it. Then two vortexes came outta both sides. "Fang over Fang!" But the attack didn't work as the man caught them by the neck and slammed into the rock wall very hard. Their bodies stayed there limp. Then the man backed away and charged the two punching them through the wall.

"Aaahhh!!!" Kiba screamed as his headband went flying as he landed.

Kohaki saw Kiba get pummeled then she ran towards him.

"No stay back!" Kiba yelled.

The man sought the opportunity to strike Kohaki and put an end to her life. Akamaru pushed her outta the way and recieved the bone-crushing attack instead.

"No Akamaru!!!" Kiba cried out. Kiba charged the man and got chokeslammed into the ground. Blood spat outta Kiba's mouth. The man jumped away. Kiba stood up and dashed back to Akamaru and Kohaki is crying over him. "Whats wrong Kohaki?"

Kohaki looked at Kiba with tears streaming down her cheeks. "Its Akamaru! He's dead!"

Kiba's heart skipped a beat. "No...Akamaru can't be dead!" Kiba clenched his fist and grinded his teeth as the tears ran down. "No..." Pictures of them together when they were younger ran through his head. "Shino! Take Kohaki and get to a safe place! Im doing that Jutsu!"

"No you could very much die from that Jutsu Kiba!" Shino pointed out.

"No don't do it Kiba! I want you to live!" Kohaki cried as she ran and hugged Kiba's back, then she turned him around and kissed him on the lips.

The liplock ended as kiba walked away from her. "If i do make it out alive.......remind me to take you out sometimes thats if i survive the after effects.." Kiba found his headband and tied it on tight. Then Shino took Kohaki and took her to the roof but she struggled alot.

"No Kiba No!" Kohaki yelled.

Kiba ate a food pills and then made a hand signs. "Inuzuka Style! Man-Beast Transformation! Wolf Mimicry!" Kiba then fell to his knees and shouted in pain. Kiba's eyes turned yellow and his pupil got sharper and keener. His bones cracked and his face turned that of a wolf as brown fur covered his entire body. His muscles bulged and grew larger. His claws grew longer and his fangs reached his chin. As soon as the transformation was over with Kiba ripped his shirt and howled at the sky.

Meanwhile Ino and the rest were battling Mali.

"Expansion Jutsu!" Choji said as his body puffed up like a balloon. "Human Boulder!" Choji rolled his head inside his shirt as did arms and legs. He then rolled at a fast speed towards Mali.

Mali then put his hands together. "Earth Molding Jutsu!" Suddenly he held out his left and the earth started to break apart and he grabbed it. He pulled it out and molded it into a huge bat. He swung it as soon as Choji attacked. The earth bat hit Choji with such a force that it broke the expansion jutsu. Choji's body hit Shikamaru and they both hit the wall. The two emerged from the wreakage bleeding and bruised.

"We need a plan and fast!" Shikamaru said.


Meanwhile Naruto's Rasengan was overpowering Raz's katana until suddenly he started getting stronger. Suddenly glowing marks appeared on Raz's body.

"Oh no! Naruto be careful! Its a curse mark!" Sasuke yelled.

"What!" Naruto said as he looked at Raz's newly emerged tribal marks on his body. Suddenly Raz's katana glowed as he forced the Rasengan to dissipate.

"That's right! and now die!" Raz kicked Naruto in mid-air who hit the wall and broke through it.

"Sakura! Go heal Naruto! I'll take of Raz!" Sasuke ordered.

"Got it!" Sakura and Hinata ran to Naruto.

Sasuke's curse mark started to glow and cover his body. Sasuke stood in a defensive stance with his katana.

"Well well seems like im not the only one with a curse mark! And its the Heaven curse mark as well!" Raz chuckled. "Seems only fitting that I would have the Hell curse mark!" Raz put himself in a defensive position as well.

"Shut up and lets fight already!" Sasuke said with the Sharingan activated.

"You're right! Lets fight! Heaven versus Hell!" Raz said as the two jumped at each other and their katanas clanged at each other as sparks flew from the metals.


~End of Chapter 8~

thats was exciting as always! who win Sasuke or Raz? Will Kiba's transformation actually kill him in the end? Is Tenten alive? Will Ino-Shika-Cho find a way defeat this powerful enemy? Find out Monday!

CHAPTER 9: HEAVEN VS. HELL: NARUTO ASCENDS!


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Saturday, December 15, 2007

Naruto: The Epic Adventure!
Today was ok but i cant for tonights Naruto episodes Rock Lee returns bitches! Anyway heres chapter 7 for my friends to read.


CHAPTER 7: BATTLE FOR MY LIFE! THE RETURN OF TEAM FORMATION: INO-SHIKA-CHO!


"Huh? Shikamaru? Naruto?" Choji said.

Shikamaru went and greeted his best friend and teammate. "How did you get here? We left during your honeymoon."

"I came back at apparently the same time you guys left and the hokage caught me and told me Ino had been taken by rogue ninja so i ran off after you guys....." Choji said before getting interrupted.

"But how did you find us here?" Neji asked.

A little pig jumped onto Choji's head. "Oink"

"Tonton here sniffed out your scent for me" Choji said as he smiled.

"That's great that you're here! Now we have the manpower to support our plan" Shikamaru stated.

Choji looked at Naruto on the bed. "Hey Naruto long time no see!"

Naruto rubbed the back of his head and smiled. "Its great to see you too Choji"

"Now what was it you going to tell us Naruto?" Neji asked.

Naruto bowed his head again. "Well what i was goin to say was...."

"Save it.....tell us tomorrow. Right now we have to rest up cause tomorrow we strike at dawn." Sasuke said.

Kiba sulked. He wanted to know really bad.

"Alright whatever you say Sasuke" Lee said.

"Oh yeah you need rooms well Naruto you have this one and everyone else follow me please." Kohaki explained.

Naruto laid back down grateful that he didn't have to tell them today and hopefully maybe never. Everyone left the room and walked down the hall to find bedrooms once occupied by rebel soldiers but not anymore.

"Why are most of these rooms empty Kohaki?" Shino asked.

"Well we tried to attack my uncle a second time after he came into power needless to say we lost most of our men." Kohaki replied.

"But those Star village ninja can't be that powerful since we totally whupped their asses!" Kiba said.

"No....not those guys....my uncle hired some other ninja to protect him." Kohaki said.

"Bodyguards?" Neji said.

"Correct and they are nothing to laugh at. they slaugthered my men like they were cattle. They called themselves the "Elites" " Kohaki said.

"Elites?" Sasuke said.

"Yes. Elite Jonin level Ninja from various villages who ran away years ago." Kohaki responded.

"Great! More rogue ninjas." Kiba said as he cracked his knuckles.

"What should we know about these ninjas?" Shikamaru asked.

"Well first there's Mali of the village hidden in the Mountains, he can mold and control the earth to his liking. Then theres Zaraku of the village hidden in the Rocks, who can expand his muscle strength tenfold or more and its also been said he can crush large mountains. Next is the only female of the of the group, she may seem lady-like at first but she's a great assassasin, with her jutsu she control the gravity level on the earth around her perfected in the grass village. And last the most ruthless of them all, Raz a master swordsmen who is from the village hidden in the Mist. He is also one of the seven swordsmen of the Mist with his special sword the Blood Katana. No one knows what that sword does, cause once you get a good look at it you're....already dead." Kohaki said.

"Thanks Kohaki we now have all the information we need." Shikamaru said.

"You're welcome" Kohaki said with a little uneasiness in the pit of her stomach.

Everyone then said their goodnights and went in their own separate rooms. Kiba and Akamaru went into their own happy to finally have a bed to sleep in. Akamaru found a couch big enough for him and settled himself in it and quickly went to sleep Kiba didn't go to sleep as fast as Akamaru did. He stood looking at the dark town and saw a couple walking down the street holding hands. He was jealous of them and soon enough it started to rain and lightning erupted. Kiba took off his jacket and shirt and pants and laid them on the floor and laid under the sheets on his bed. Lightning crashed again as Akamaru slept soundly alseep, But Kiba couldn't. The lightning and thunder kept him awake.

"Maybe i should count sheep......1...2...3...4..." Lightning crashed again. "Damn it!"

The door suddenly creeped opened as Kiba sat up wide awake.

"Kiba are you awake?" Kohaki's voice spoke softly.

"Uh....yeah" Kiba said as he pulled the covers over his head.

"Do you think i can sleep with you tonight....I mean stay in here until the storm clears." Kohaki asked.

"Sure but why? You're not afraid of the thunder and lightning are you?" Kiba asked.

"Uhhh.....No! I just figured you would be frightened by the storm yourself so i came to comfort you." A pitiful lie made by Kohaki.

"Whatever!" Kiba said as he slid over a bit for the girl.

Kohaki in her black nightgown got into the side beside Kiba and pulled the covers over herself also.

"Stupid girl! Why is she in my bed! Get ahold of yourself Kiba! You are a man and will treat the situation as such!" Kiba thought to himself.

Kiba then opened his mouth to speak but Kohaki spoke first. "Thanks alot Kiba for helping me out today. I might have never found anyone else to help out my cause...i mean after the last battle we went through many of the surviving rebels lost hope and left. So it really means alot that you guys will help out."

"Sure no problem Kohaki..." Kiba said.

"I like you Kiba. I think you're kinda sweet." Kohaki said as she lightly blushed.

"..I like you too Kohaki" It was the only thing Kiba could say. "Maybe when this is all over we could.....I don't know.....go out sometimes?"

"......Sure i would like that. I would like that alot." Kohaki said.

Kiba couldn't believe it. did she say yes? Yes she did! "Ok goodnight Kohaki"

"Goodnight Kiba" She said back. "Oh and Kiba?"

Kiba shifted around and faced her. "Yes?"

"Here's a thank you present" Kohaki said as she passionately kissed Kiba on the lips and stroked his ripped abs but quickly stopped and turned around.

Kiba blushed all over his face. He didn't want that kiss to end so fast. but he didn't want to overstep his boundaries. so he just turned back around and went to sleep.

At 5 in the morning Shikamaru woke everyone up until Kiba and Naruto were left. Shikamaru knocked on the door as it creaked open. "Come on Kiba wake up!"

Kiba sat up very quickly and rubbed his eyes. "What is it Shikamaru?"

Kohaki yawned and sat up as well. "What is it Kiba?"

Shikamaru raised his eyebrow. "Oh Kiba! tell me you didn't do what i think you just did last night!"

Kiba quickly knew what he meant and fell outta the bed on his butt. "Its not what you think Shikamaru! It was the storm and the lightning and stuff and she was scared and and and....."

Kohaki kissed Kiba on the forehead. "Thanks for last night Kiba-kun" then she walked out to go find a pair of clothes.

"I swear nothing happened Shikamaru!" Kiba pleaded his case.

But Shikamaru only shook his head in disapproval. "Just hurry and get dressed playboy" Shikamaru then walked outta the room.

"Why yes Hinata! I would love some ramen!" Naruto said out loud dreaming.

Shikamaru and Choji stood beside Naruto's bed with raised eyebrows.

"Do you want me to kick him or you?" Choji asked.

"Nah i have a better idea." Shikamaru said as he leaned towards Naruto's ear. "Oh Naruto i just love making you ramen!" Shikamaru said in a girl voice.

"And i love watching you make it! it tastes so much better when you make it Hinata!" Naruto responds still dreaming.

"Oh thank you Naruto-kun! can you do me a favor honey?" Shikamaru still pretending to be Hinata.

"Why anything for you Hinata!" Naruto said.

"Well....I need you to WAKE UP!!!" Shikamaru shouted back in his own voice.

Naruto jumped up and fell outta his bed flat on his face. "owww!!!"

Choji fell over laughing his ass off pointing at Naruto. "You should have seen the look on your face Naruto when Shikamaru told you to wake up!"

"What a dirty trick!" Naruto said.

"Sorry Naruto. It was just too good to pass up." Shikamaru apologized.

Soon after everyone got their bearings they headed out towards the giant fortress and hid in the forest behind it. They formulated a plan as they stood along the wall.

"Neji use your Byakugan to find the girls." Shikamaru said softly.

"Byakugan!" Neji use his x-ray vision to scope the fortress till he found the girls awake and a male figure at the cell door. "I found them straight ahead and they are not alone."

"Ok Kiba its your turn!" Shikamaru stated.

"Ok Akamaru!" Kiba said.

"Ruff!"

Kiba put his hands together. "Beast Mimicry!" Kiba grew fangs and claws. He took a step back and then ran at the wall. "Tunneling Fang!" Kiba spun a high velocity and tore through the brick wall.

"Ok everyone follow Kiba and be on guard! That blast might bring the welcoming committee!" Shikamaru ordered as he and the rest ran through the open hole Kiba made.

"Im coming to save you Hinata!" Naruto thought to himself.

Meanwhile the girls had a harsh first day at being slaves to the insane King Yunko. Then they were escorted back to their cells by Raz.

"Hey you purple-haired girl!" Raz said.

"Who me?" Hinata said.

"Yeah you! come here." Raz ordered.

Hinata walked over to him not trying to pick a fight. Not when she sensed she was completely outmatched here.

Raz touched her face but Hinata turned away. "Aww don't be that way baby! Give Razzy here a kiss good morning!"

Hinata still looked away. "Don't refuse bitch!" He raised his hand to slap her but then a blast sounded and dust flew everywhere. The girls looked behind them to find a familiar face.

"You stay away from her, you jerk!" Naruto shouted as the smoke cleared.

"Naruto!" Sakura cried out.

"Who the hell are you!" Raz yelled.

"Im Naruto Uzumaki, your worst nightmare!" Naruto shouted.

Raz grabbed Hinata. "Take another step and she gets it!"

"Coward!" Naruto yelled.

Raz ran away with Hinata down the hall. "Hey get back here!" Naruto shouted as he ran after them

Sasuke came in the room through the hole.

"Sasuke!" Sakura yelled.

"Come on Sakura! Knowing Naruto like we do he's going to need our help." Sasuke said.

"Right." Sakura agreed. They both ran after Naruto.

"Ino! Temari! Tenten! Come on! Lets get outta here!" Shikamaru yelled through the hole.

"Right!" The three replied.

Shikamaru, Choji, Kiba, Neji, Lee, Shino, Tenten, Temari and Ino ran through the hall through the hole. They ran a all long way towards the courtyard entrance but someone stood in the way. It was Mali.

"Where do you punks think you're going!" Mali yelled.

"What a drag!" Shikamaru said. "Ino can you fight?"

"Of course i can!" Ino said as she rubbed her belly.

"I got you Ino!" Choji sensing this stepped in front of Ino. "Shino go and save your teammate I'll protect Ino!"

"Alright Choji I trust you to keep her safe! Kiba! Akamaru! Lets go get Hinata!" Shino ordered.

Kiba, Akamaru and Shino dashed away.

"Neji Lee Tenten! Follow them!" Shikamaru ordered.

"Got it!" Lee said. Those three dashed away as well.

"Im staying Shikamaru!" Temari said.

"Wouldn't have it any other way." Shikamaru said.

"Ok you guys ready! Prepare team formation!" Ino yelled.

"Ino-Shika-Cho!" The three said in unison.

Meanwhile Naruto stopped to find that Raz stopped as well. Raz holding his blood katana and Hinata stood in the training field on the east side of the huge fortress.

"Give Hinata back!" Naruto shouted.

"Try to take her back!" Raz yelled.

Hinata then bit Raz's arm and dashed away and landed in front of Naruto. "Naruto-kun i always knew you would come and save me!"

"Its ok Hinata i got you.....Watch out!" Naruto said as he pushed Hinata out of the way of Raz's attack.

"Slash!" blood went everywhere. A girl's scream was heard.


~End of Chapter 7~

Do you want to know what happened? Too Bad! read what happened tomorrow!

CHAPTER 8: KIBA'S FINAL ATTACK!
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