Friday, December 14, 2007

Naruto: The Epic Adventure!
CHAPTER 6: NARUTO'S CURSE!

"HAHAHAHAHA" The demonic voice rang out in Naruto's mind. Naruto's face wrinkled with pain still unconscious on Sasuke's back. The gang ran and jumped through the forest. Neji noticed something up ahead. "Byakugan!" Neji's vision zoomed ahead and saw a village with a gigantic castle in the back.

"I think i see it! Kiba sniff ahead!" Neji ordered.

Kiba sniffed the air. "Yeah i smell them but its extremely faint though i can't get a fix on where they are."

"Alright team! we search the town for the girls and meet back at the entrance with any information we have!" Shikamaru said.

"Alright then everyone lets get to work!" Sasuke said.

The gang split up into teams of two as Sasuke stayed back with Naruto. "This sucks!"

Meanwhile Neji and Lee found no one was willing to talk to them.

"What's with these people?" Lee asked.

"I don't know Lee..its almost like they are afraid of us." Neji responded.

Shino and Shikamaru had similar luck. Kiba walked through the village with his large companion Akamaru and had no luck himself until....

"Hey you!" A voice spoke out.

"Huh?" Kiba turned around to find a beautiful long haired brunette standing there.

"Are you a ninja of the leaf village?" She asked.

Kiba stuttered "Uhh...uh...Why yes am i i mean yes i am!"

She giggled and walked over to Akamaru and rubbed his head. Akamaru loved it when people petted him.

"Is this your dog?" She asked.

"Yes his names Akamaru and i'm Kiba Inuzuka" Kiba replied.

"Well nice to meet you Kiba! Im Kohaki Yisuragi and i'm glad you're here!" She said.

"You are?" Kiba said with confused look.

"Yes i think i know what you're here for!" Kohaki exclaimed.

"How's that?" Kiba asked.

"You're here to find those girls from the hidden leaf village aren't you?" She responded.

"Why yes! Wait till i tell the guys!" Kiba cried out.

"Theres more of you! you must take me to them!" Kohaki commanded.

"Ok then hop on Akamaru!" Kiba said as he jumped on Akamaru's back. Kohaki nervously walked and sat down on Akamaru behind Kiba and without thinking she wrapped her arms around him and felt his rock hard abs. they both noticed it and blushed alot but she didn't let go.

Shino, Shikamaru, Neji, Lee, Sasuke and an unconscious Naruto waited for Kiba's return.

"Wheres that Kiba?" Shino asked.

Suddenly Akamaru barked and skidded to a stop flinging dust as the gang by accident.

"cough cough....Oh great we're on a rescue mission and you're out picking up women at a time like this!" Neji yelled.

"Its not what you think! Kohaki here holds information on where the girls are!" Kiba said

"Well in that case she might be of use to us after all." Neji said.

Kohaki let go of Kiba's waist and introduced herself as the niece of the tyrant King Yunko. She was a leader of a band of underground rebels trying to overthrow the king.

"So that's why people are afraid to talk to us! For fear of being put to death." Shikamaru pointed out.

"Yes and if you follow me i can help you get inside the extremely guarded fortress." Kohaki said as she walked to an adbandoned building and walked inside she then opened a secret door and that has staircase leading downstairs. The gang followed.

Meanwhile in the dark recesses of Naruto's mind. He was trying to fight off the darkness in his heart. "Kill Kill Kill Kill Kill Kill!" The fox yelled.

"NO i can't!" Naruto said grabbing his head. "Get outta my head you stupid fox!"

Naruto then saw his younger counterpart crying adbandoned by the villagers left on his own cause of that damn monster inside of him. "Stop showing me this! I left that life behind!" Naruto shouted.

"No you didn't it stuck with you! They still hate you! Do you really think that if you become Hokage things will get better! Only a fool would want that job!" The Fox said.

"No!" Naruto shouted.

"Do you really think that people will stop calling you the nine-tailed fox!" The fox shouted.

"No! Stop it! Get outta my head! Get outta my head!" Naruto shouted out in pain.

"Do you really think that she would love a monster like you?" The Fox asked.

Naruto opened his eyes as his heart skipped a beat and then he fell on his knees.

"Yes.....She wouldn't love you at all once she finds out you're the nine-tailed child...in fact she will hate you! Like all the rest will when they find out your dirty little secret!" The fox said.

Naruto bowed his head as the fox chakra surrounded him. It created the same aura as before.

"Yes Naruto you must embrace your true destiny and destroy the leaf village!!! You are the ultimate weapon of destruction and together you and I, we can take over this land and ruled over it for all time!" The Fox shouted.

Naruto then stood up all zombie like with long claws and fangs.

"Yes! Yes! Now I'm in control here and i say destroy the leaf village!" The Fox commanded.

".....No..." A zombiefied Naruto said.

"What did you say!" The fox said.

"I said NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Naruto screamed as he sucked in the fox chakra and made it his own. The fangs shortened. The claws receded. His whiskers went back to normal size.

"Why do you keep resisting the dark charkra!" The fox said.

"Because I made a promise....a promise to Neji that i would save Hinata and would let nothing....not even you get in my way!!!!!!!" Naruto shouted to the fox.

"Cause i never go back on my word! That's my nindo! My Ninja Way!" Naruto said.

The fox gasped surprised that Naruto could retain such power inside of him.

"And don't diss my dreams ever again! I'm gonna be Hokage BELIEVE IT!" Naruto yelled.

"Damn it! This kid's spirit is more powerful than i thought! I guess i really can't beat this boy" The fox thought.

"Now if you don't mind I have a promise to keep!" Naruto said as he left the dark recesses of his mind and return to the real world sitting up.

"Well well well...look whose awake!" Sasuke greeted him.

"Hey Sasuke! Where are we?" Naruto asked.

"An underground base for a group of rebels. They are helping us plan out our next strategy." Sasuke stated.


"How did we end up here?" Naruto asked.

"Kiba met a girl named Kohaki..and..."

"Kiba met a girl!" Naruto said.

"Whats that supposed to mean!" Kiba said agitated.

"O nothing! I didn't see you there next to your girlfriend!" Naruto teased.

"Shut up! She's not my girlfriend!" Kiba yelled.

Kohaki blushed at the fact someone called her Kiba's girlfriend. Shikamaru then walked in.

"Hey Naruto are you ok?" Shikamaru asked.

"Sure why wouldn't I be?" Naruto said.

"Oh....well for a minute there we thought you kinda went evil on us" Shikamaru said with a sigh of relief.

"Oh" Naruto said as he bowed his head. "You guys I have to tell you something....something important i think you should know.."

"What is it?" Neji asked on the opposite side of the room.

"Well I have a secret that Ive been hiding for my whole life...." Naruto took a deep breath. "That i'm the Nine-tai......"

"Madame Yisuragi!" A fellow rebel yelled.

"What is it now!" Kohaki said annoyed.

"We found a stranger wearing a leaf headband as well outside of the village and we brought him here." The rebel reported.

The guys looked around at each other wondering who could that be? there were only 7 of them when they left. the guard ran up the steps opened the door and told the stranger to come in. suddenly the rebel moved outta the way for the man to come through. The boys all looked at the doorway to find a chubby young man with a red long sleeve shirt with the Akimichi symbol on the front, red pants and samurai armor on. The boys' eyes widen they knew exactly who it was.

"CHOJI!!!" The boys yelled.

~End of chapter 6~

That's it for today but stay tuned for tomorrow's special climatic episode.

CHAPTER 7: BATTLE FOR MY LIFE! THE RETURN OF TEAM FORMATION: INO-SHIKA-CHO!
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Thursday, December 13, 2007

NARUTO: THE EPIC ADVENTURE!!!! YEAH!!!!
Hey y'all! Im just having another great day! Im so ready for Christmas Break!!! And i know all my friends are too......whoops im rambling again heres my chapter 5 of my naruto epic or else my friends will break my legs!


CHAPTER 5: STAR VS. LEAF: NARUTO LOSES IT!!!


As Naruto slept, He felt a darkness in his soul. An uneasiness in the pit of his stomach, a familiar feeling.

"Hello, How's my favorite idiot doing?" A dark ominous voice spoke from the back of Naruto's head.

"What do you want now Fox?" Naruto responded.

"I just wanted to have a friendly chat with my friend, that's all" The Nine-Tailed Fox said.

Naruto then opened his eyes and stood up in the shallow waters of the corridor in his soul. He walked to the door with steam pouring out of it and opened it.

"Naruto Uzumaki!" The fox said

"What's up with you?" Naruto asked with a puzzled look.

"O...nothing....I've just made a decision" The fox proclaimed.

"What are you talking about Fox?" Naruto asked.

"When the fourth Hokage sealed me in your wretched body, he had the intention of us merging and working together and working as one. So i've decided since I'm forever cursed to be in here I'll take your power to the next level" The Fox explained.

"Wow! Thanks Fox! Maybe you're not so bad after all!" Naruto exclaimed.

"No problem kid" The Fox said.

Naruto then closed his eyes and opened them again to find him back to the real world excited that with more power he could save everyone faster!

Meanwhile the Fox chuckled. "Little does that knucklehead know that if he can't control the power perfectly, my personiality leaks into him. If i can't break the seal here, I'll just break his spirit! MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!"

Soon afterwards the gang headed off into the direction Akamaru headed following the scent of the rogue ninja. "Ruff Ruff!"

"Akamaru says the kidnappers are up ahead!" Kiba said as sniffed the air. "But i don't smell the girls with them at all."

"Well we might have to ask them politely where they are" Sasuke said.

"Yeah with my fist!" Naruto replied.

"Hold on Naruto and Sasuke, I have a plan" Shikamaru said.

"What's the plan then Shikamaru?" Naruto asked.

Shikamaru then explained the plan to everyone as they reached the rogue ninja camp. The ninja partied inside a huge tent celebrating their spoils.

"Good job men! Another mission accomplished!" A ninja yelled.

Meanwhile outside the tent, two ninja stood guard out of the tent. Then Naruto leaped into the bushes and made a hand sign. The guard on the right saw the bush move a little and he signaled his partner to come investigate. They both walked slowly to the bushes, kunai drawn and one of them said "Come on out!"

Then a girl in blonde pigtails wearing Naruto's black and orange jumpsuit stood out of the bushes. "Oh thank goodness you're here! I'm lost and wondering if you two big strong ninja can help me?" Naruto said in his sexy jutsu form.

The two ninja smiled and gave each other high fives at their great luck. "Sure we'll help you out ma'am! My name's Riku!" the ninja on the left said. "And i'm Kai!" the one the right said.


"Oh thank you!" Naruto smirked. "Suckers!"

The two were confused but it was too late, Sasuke was already behind them and hand chopped them unconscious.

"Good job Naruto! Now for the second part of the plan" Sasuke reminded Naruto.

Naruto and Sasuke made hand signs. "Transform!" They both turned into the two guards Riku and Kai. Shikamaru then popped out and hid the two bodies in the bushes as the disguised Naruto and Sasuke went inside the tent. They found ninja everywhere partying, drinking.

"These kidnapping missions get more easier than the last isn't that right Kai?" One passing ninja asked.

"Yeah they sure do!" Sasuke disguised as Kai said.

"What did you think of that pink haired girl Riku? A hot piece of ass isn't she? Too bac she has a big forehead though" Another passing ninja said.

Naruto disguised as Riku didn't respond. The two just kept walking toward an large individual. He was 7 feet tall with muscles and black spiky hair like blades.

"He must be the leader!" Naruto whispered to Sasuke.

"Yeah no kidding! but he's nothing we can't handle!" Sasuke whispered back.

"Yo boss!" Sasuke yelled to the man.

The man was playing poker with the other ninja smoking a cigar, but he didn't respond.

"Boss!" Sasuke yelled again.

"What!" a different individual stood up. a toned yet scrawny man.

"That's the leader! He's so small!" Naruto said to himself.

"What is it Kai!" The leader said.

"Umm....Can someone else guard the front? I mean no one is going to attack us" Sasuke in disguise said.

"Fine, you two come play poker with us." The leader proposed.

"Sure!" Naruto in disguise said.

The two walked up and sat down and played poker. Sasuke then saw the bandage of the big guy's arm like someone scratched him. "Where did you get that from?"

"Some girl with puffs in her scratched me bad but then i took control of the situation." The big guy responded.

Naruto knew he was talking about Tenten, but kept playing.

"Hey how was that purple haired girl? a nice piece of ass huh?" the leader asked.

That sure got Naruto's attention.

"Yeah of course! I would love to hit that anytime!" Other ninja agreed. Then everyone started to talk about the girls and disrespecting them. Naruto was getting angry. The leader noticed the tension.

"How's your hand do you hold or fold?" The leader asked.

"I fold" Naruto responded annoyed.

"Say, how's your girlfriend Riku?" The leader asked another question.

"She's alright" Naruto said.

The leader then made a signal to the big guy. Then they both stood up. The big guy made the first move and grabbed sasuke by the neck.

"You don't have a girlfriend! Now tell me who you are or your friend gets it!" The leader yelled. All the ninja looked at the fueding ninja at the poker table.

"Ok you got me" Naruto said as he poofed back into his original form as did Sasuke. "But that doesn't mean you can beat me!!!" Naruto threw a punch and the leader ducked.

The leader made a hand sign. "Flash Jutsu!" Suddenly a flash of light hit Naruto square in the eyes. Naruto growled in pain as he grabbed his eyes "What is this!" Naruto cried out. Then the leader punched him in the stomach and kicked him in the face sending flying into the tables.

"Naruto!" Sasuke yelled. Then Sasuke took out a kunai.

"What are you going to do with that little man!" The big guy yelled.

"This!" Sasuke yelled out as he stabbed the big guy in the bandaged area. The big guy let go of Sasuke.

"AWWWW FUCK!!!" He cried out. "You will pay for that!"

"Bring it on!" Sasuke said as he activated the Sharingan.

The big man and other ninja charged Sasuke. "LEAF HURRICANE!!" A voice cried out as he kicked away the charging ninja.

"Lee? Where's Shikamaru and the others?" Sasuke asked.

"Here we are!" Said Kiba holding a ninja in his hands then he dropped him on the ground. More ninja charged Kiba.

"HYAA!" Neji yelled out as he punched them back.
Even more came. But then stopped cold in their tracks. they all looked over next to Neji. Shikamaru had them in the Shadow possession jutsu. Then more jumped over the frozen bodies. Shino then raised his hands and bugs came out of his jacket and went flying towards the airborn ninja and knocked them away.

"Ok you ready Akamaru!" Kiba yelled as he threw up a food pill then Akamaru jumped up and ate it and his fur turned red. Kiba made a hand sign. "Beast Mimicry!" Kiba's nails grew longer as Akamaru transformed into Kiba's transformed state. The two pushed off each other and charged the ninja. "Fang over Fang!" they pummeled the last of the ninja until only the leader and big guy stood. "Only two are left! Lets get them Akamaru!" Kiba said but Neji put his hand in front of Kiba to stop him. "Look over there!" Neji said.

Red chakra poured outta Naruto's laying body. It covered him as it made fox ears and two tails. Suddenly his eyes opened and showed a demonic look as it turned blood red. His wounds healed and his nails grew longer as he stood on a four legs position. "Where are they" Naruto said in a demonic voice.

"Like we will tell you!" The big guy said. That was a mistake to make.

Naruto then stared at the big guy then instantly disappeared in a puff of smoke then reappeared in big guy's face and clenched his fist as it glowed and then punched the big guy in the face breaking it and sending him flying into some trees breaking them in half. "I said.....where are they!!!!!" Naruto yelled as his eyes glowed at the leader.

The leader pissed his pants in fear. He was shaking real bad. Naruto held out his left hand and a flaming red Rasengan appeared as he walked towards the leader. "I'm not going to repeat myself........where the fuck are they!!!!!!!!!!" The leader stepped back and tripped over the chair. He was hyperventilating in fear. Naruto grabbed him with his right and forced him to stare into his eyes glowing ever so red.

"Ok ok! there are at Mizuke Village 50 miles east of here! Just please don't kill me!" The leader cried out in fear.

"And why should I!! Scum like you don't deserve to live!" Naruto said as he geared his Rasengan to attack but Sasuke grabbed his arm.

"Naruto calm down! We got what we need! Forget him!" Sasuke yelled.

Naruto's Rasengan dissolved as he pulled his arm away from Sasuke and grabbed his head in pain. "AAAHH!!!!" Naruto growled. "My head! My head!" Memories of his horrible childhood entered his mind.

"Yes Yes! Use that hatred and kill him! The Fox ordered.

"No No No!" Naruto refused. "Do it!!" The Fox yelled.

"NOOOO!!!!!!" Naruto said as the fox chakra slowly dissapeared. Once it was all gone his eyes changed back to normal and he passed out.

"What the hell was that?" Kiba asked in fear.

"It was the same chakra from before at the Chunin Exams" Neji replies.

"Whatever it is it scared the hell outta Akamaru!" Kiba cried out.

The rest were scared too. That wasn't Naruto at all.

"Well he's okay now." Sasuke said as he lifted up Naruto's unconscious body and put him on his back. "We will ask him later when he wakes up"

"Well what if he turns back into that thing and kills us all!" Kiba asked.

"Don't worry Kiba! If i know Naruto i know that would never hurt his friends." Sasuke reassured everyone.

"Mizuke Village is where we head now....50 miles east right?" Shikamaru asked the leader but he was gone out the back way.

"I'm home free from that monster!" The leader said. but he ran into Lee who was waiting for him.

"And where do you think you're going?" Lee said.

The leader took a shuriken and threw it at Lee but missed as Lee ran and punched the man in the stomach knocking him out.

Later the gang tied up all the ninja and left. "We'll be back for you guys later!" Kiba shouted out.

Naruto still passed out on Sasuke's back dreamt of his memories. He saw a little boy crying and soon realized it was him. "Why do they all hate me" Little Naruto said. Naruto then bowed his head. Little Naruto's shadow formed the fox and it swallowed up Naruto in darkness. "Why do they all hate me" Little Naruto said again. He wiped his eyes and they glowed red. "Cause i'm the Nine-Tailed Fox!!!!" Little Naruto said in a demonic voice as he laughed a evil laugh. Then darkness.

~End of chapter 5~

Man that was exciting! Stay tuned for tomorrow's episode.

CHAPTER 6: NARUTO'S CURSE!



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Wednesday, December 12, 2007

   NARUTO: THE EPIC ADVENTURE!!!!
i pretty much had a good day. im kinda happy. and i realize myself more as an author than a artist......i want to make more stories like this and publish them but i cant do naruto....and what? get sued up the ass? You're crazy! anyway since i dont own naruto in any way *bows head* ill just give big ups to Masashi Kishimoto (the maker of naruto) and beg him not to sue me....yay! anyway heres chapter 3.


CHAPTER 3: I HAVE A PLAN!! JOURNEY TO THE VILLAGE HIDDEN IN THE STARS!


Somewhere in a dirty old dungeon, Hinata woke up peacefully but quickly realized she couldn't yawn because her mouth was duct taped then she notices shes tied up......"What the...." she thought.

Then someone grabs her. She screams a faint scream because of the duct tape. She turns around to face her assailant kicking at the air but completely misses her mark.

"Calm down Hinata! Its me Sakura!" The voice spoke.

Hinata slowly opened her eyes to find a pink-haired girl in her pajamas. Sakura then untied Hinata and took off the tape.

"Ye-ow!!!" Hinata yelped at the pain of tape to skin.

"Whoops! Sorry about that!" Sakura apologized.

"Sakura, Sakura! Where are we!" Hinata asked shaking Sakura.

"I dont know.....please..calm...down." Said a dizzy Sakura after being shaken around.

Hinata then noticed Ino over by the cell door. "Tenten! Temari! come here!" Ino commanded.

She whispered something to them. They agreed. Ino then made a oval with her hands and aimed it at the sleeping guard. "Mind Transfer Jutsu!" She said. The two girls held Ino's lifeless body and soon the guard's body shook a little.

"Yes! Direct hit!" Said Tenten.

The guard slowly got up and stared at the the girls in the cell.

"Whoops! Maybe not!" Said Temari.

"Heehee....I totally got you guys! You should have seen the look on your faces!" Said Ino in the guard's body.

"GRRR....We are going to kill you Ino!" Tenten and Temari both said.

soon Ino went looking for the keys to the cell and found them in the bottom drawer. "Oh Yeah! Tada!" Ino said as she jingles the keys to the girls.

"Way to go Ino! Now let us out!" Said Sakura.

Ino walked over to the girls but soon notices two other guards walking towards her. "Shit!!" Ino swored at her bad luck.

"Hey Yashimaru!" The brown-haired guard on the left said as he waved.

"Hey you guys" Ino replied trying not to blow her cover.

"Are you ready? Its time to report to the big guy." The black-haired guard on the right said.

"Shit! Shit!" Ino thought. "Sure you guys! lets get this over with already!"

"Wow! usually you would be sleep by now but now you're ready to report in, im impressed!" The brown-haired guard said.

The two guards turn around to walk out of the dungeon but Ino tried to stay and unlock the door .

"Hurry up Ino!" Sakura whispered at Ino who was flipping through and trying keys but none worked until one was left.

"Oh no you don't!" The black-haired guard said.

"Aww Crap!" Ino thought. Had her cover been blown?

"You know the rules! No flirting with the prisoners!" The guard said as he tugged Ino away by the shirt.

"Damn it! Let me go!" Ino yelled at the guard.

"Nope! we have to report in now." The guard reminded Ino in disguise.

The guard tugged away a struggling Ino out of the room a pressed some buttons on the alarm system and it beeped.

"Well there goes our escape outta here." Sakura pointed out.

"Now what?" Hinata asked.

"I'll bust us outta here myself!" Sakura scoffed.

She walked up to the cage door and put up a fighting stance. She focused her chakra in her right fist, remembering her training with Tsunade, and lunged her fist at the door. "Hee-yah!" Sakura yelled. Her fist hit the door only to find it coarsing with electricity. "!!!!!!!....Eeep!" Sakura said as she got stunned.

Sakura fell unconscious but Hinata caught her and placed her next to Ino on the floor.

"Now what!" Temari asked.

"I don't know! we can only hope Ino comes back with the keys" Tenten hoped.

Meanwhile at the grand room of the castle. Ino was surrounded by more guards kneeling before a fat guy on a throne.

"My lord! we have secured the prisoners like you asked" The brown-haired guard from before said.

The fat guy raised his hand to signal the guards to stand up, then he looked over to his left to find ninjas from the star village. The leader stepped forward.

"King Yunko, i believe we made a deal" the leader said to remind the king.

"Why yes of course!" The king sighed.

The king reached behind him and pulled out a large sack of money and threw it towards the ninja. The leader caught it and kneel.

"Thank you, my king" The leader said then instantly disappeared and the other ninja followed.

"What should we do, my lord?" the black-haired guard asked.

"Get the prisoners ready tomorrow morning and bring them here by noon. you are dismissed back to your posts" King Yunko ordered.

"Yes my lord!" The black-haired guard replies with a bowed head.

"Crap!!! I've gotta get back to the gang!" Ino thought. Ino got dizzy soon after leaving. "Oh no! the jutsu has taken alot of me! I have to stop the jutsu now before...i lose it"

Ino put her hands together and focused her chakra. "Release!" Ino then left the guard's body lying on the floor and her soul went flying back to her body in the cell. Her body shook.

"Ino what happened?" Tenten asked.

"King......kidnapping.....ninja.....tomorrow." Ino said out of breath and passed out.

"Fuck! now we are stuck in here!" Tenten snarled.

"At least the boys may try to find us and save us, isn't that right Hinata?" Temari asked.

But Hinata wasn't paying attention she was daydreaming as she look out the barred window. "Naruto-kun.....where are you?"

Meanwhile Naruto, Sasuke, Shikamaru, Kiba and Akamaru, Shino, Neji and Lee gathered at the entrance of the Leaf village.

"Ok! We got the permission we needed from Grandma Tsunade now can we go already?" Naruto asked.

The boys shook their heads toward Naruto.

"Alright then! Lets go save the girls!" Naruto yelled.

Akamaru sniffed the ground and gained a scent of the kidnappers. "Ruff!"

"Akamaru has a fix on the kidnappers! follow me!" Kiba said.

Kiba hopped onto the large dog and rode into the forest soon followed Naruto and the rest.


~End of Chapter 3~

that was a great chapter! and because i can i'll y'all give another one!

CHAPTER 4: CONFESSIONS OF A TEENAGE NINJA!!!


The day grew darker as Naruto and the boys began their journey to find the criminals who kidnapped the girls.

"Hey Naruto!" Shikamaru yelled out. "We should set up camp soon, its getting dark now"

Naruto frowned. He didn't want to stop now not until he had Hinata again. but he stopped on tree branch and pulled a kunai. he threw it towards the ground as it stayed there.

"Ok we set up camp here! Neji! Lee! Firewood! Kiba! Shino! make tents! And me Sasuke and Shikamaru are to get food and water! is that clear?" Naruto commanded.

The boys just stared at Naruto. He actually sounded like a chunin.

"What is it?" Naruto asked.

"Nothing......you just sounded like a real leader there for a minute." Kiba responded.

Naruto rubbed the back of his head. "Well you can't expect me to be the same knucklehead forever don't ya?"

Kiba smiled. "About time if you ask me!"

Naruto smiled as the gang split up to do their assigned jobs. Naruto, Shikamaru, and Sasuke arrived at a lake a half mile away. Naruto then jumped in it and swam to the bottom. He held out his left hand and used his right to spin the chakra around. He had created a whirlpool which swallowed up the fish then he detonated the Rasengan and a explosion rang out as the fish flew out. Sasuke then took off his shirt to reveal a muscular chest and use it to catch the fish in it. And shikamaru got the water for the camp. "Man what a drag! I had to do the lame job" Shikamaru muttered to hisself.

Naruto, Sasuke, and Shikamaru returned thirty minutes later to find a big pile of firewood and tents made of branches and giant leafs.

"Ok Sasuke start the fire up so we can chow down" Naruto ordered.

Sasuke made a flurry of hand signs. "Fire style: Fireball Jutsu!" Sasuke then blew fire that hit the pile and it instantly lit up. Everyone then got situated as they sat by the fire.

Neji had his head between his knees thinking of Tenten. Naruto was up in the tree watching the moon thinking of Hinata. Shikamaru was laid back thinking of Temari. Sasuke was polishing his katana blade to try to not worry himself but he couldn't help it. Lee and Kiba played Rock Paper Scissors for the last of the fish. Kiba won but gave the fish to Akamaru. Shino watched a family of deer scurry through the woods and he let a tear drop but no one saw because of the shades he wore. Obviously no one was happy. Lee walked to a distraught Neji and sat down beside him.

"Lee i just don't know what to do if i lose Tenten" Neji confessed.

"It will be okay Neji, we will save her" Lee reassured his teammate.

"Thanks Lee. but i also worry for Lady Hinata as well" Neji added.

"Don't worry about a thing Neji!" Naruto said. "I'll bring Hinata back and i will risk my life for that!"

"Hmph....Naruto you still have better eyes than mine" Neji admitted.

Neji read Naruto's body language thanks to the Byakugan. "You must really like her? don't you?" Neji asked.

Naruto blushed a very light red and turned away to playfully poke his fingers. "Well.....maybe a little...."

Kiba chuckled. "Its nothing to be shy about Naruto, that girl has always liked you for as long as i can remember!"

Naruto decided to play stupid, he couldn't let them know he already knew that, and look even more stupid. "Really Kiba?"

"Of course! But i guess you were too dimwitted to notice at the time." Kiba replied.


"Well.....i didn't realize I liked her until just the other day when i walked her home, I felt at home with her, like i could tell her everything and she listened to every word! If it wasn't for her, I would have never passed the Chunin exams 5 years ago." Naruto confessed. "Every step of the way she was always there for me even though we were on different teams, she gave me hope, confidence, courage, and i tooked that to heart."

Kiba smirked.

~Flashback~

At the chunin preliminaries.

"Ok! Now for my new technique!" Naruto said as he formed a hand sign. "Shadow-Clone Jutsu!" Six clones popped up. the first clone ran and punched Kiba sending him flying, then the real Naruto jumped up off the first clone, the other four slided under kiba's floating body and kicked him up in unison saying "NA-RU-TO!!" Kiba went upwards towards the real naruto. "UZUMAKI BARRAGE!!!" Naruto kicked Kiba in the face with a his might sending Kiba falling fast to the ground face first.

"And the winner is.....Naruto Uzumaki!" Hayate said.

~Flashback ends~

Neji closed his eyes and sneaked a smile.

~Flashback~

At the arena during their chunin match.

Naruto placed his hands together and focused out the fox chakra as his injuries healed. "ARRGH!!!" Naruto screamed as the red chakra form a flamy aura.

"No way! his chakra points were pressed!" Neji thought to himself frightened.

"Here I come!" Naruto warned Neji.

Everyone at the arena was shocked at this display of power from Naruto. Naruto then charged Neji with kunai in hand. Neji pulled out one as well.

"When i become Hokage, I'll change the Hyuga Clan!" Naruto yelled.

"Rotation!!" Neji said as he spun a shield of chakra and Naruto's attack connected with it then a huge explosion! "KABOOM!"

The two bodies crashed into the ground. but only Neji stood up and walked over to Naruto's unconscious body. "Hmph...sorry failure! This is called destiny!" Neji proclaimed.

Suddenly the ground rumbled as Neji looked down but it was too late. Naruto dove from underground and uppercutted Neji in the face with all his might. The limp Naruto in the crater poofed away, a clone.

"And the winner is....Naruto Uzumaki!!" The proctor yelled out to the crowd.

The crowd celebrated and roared. Naruto felt the love he always wanted.

~Flashback ends~

Naruto bowed his head and tears ran down his cheeks. "If anything bad happens to Hinata, I could never live with myself!"

Sasuke then placed his hand on Naruto's shoulder. "Its ok Naruto we will save her and the girls"

"Gee....Thanks Sasuke" Naruto said as he wiped his face.

"Lets get to sleep everyone cause we leave first thing in the morning!" Sasuke ordered.

Everyone walked to their tents and went to sleep. Naruto threw water on the fire and went back to his branch and looked at the moon again.

Hinata at her cell watched the moon also, it reminded her of her kiss. Then simultaneously they both raise their hand as if to call out to each other's hearts. Naruto then closed his eyes and went to sleep as did Hinata.

~End of chapter 4~

Whew! that last one was a tearjeaker. anyway stay tuned for the next action-packed episode!

CHAPTER 5: STAR VS. LEAF! NARUTO FINALLY LOSES IT!!
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   NARUTO: THE EPIC ADVENTURE!!!!
i pretty much had a good day. im kinda happy. and i realize myself more as an author than a artist......i want to make more stories like this and publish them but i cant do naruto....and what? get sued up the ass? You're crazy! anyway since i dont own naruto in any way *bows head* ill just give big ups to Masashi Kishimoto (the maker of naruto) and beg him not to sue me....yay! anyway heres chapter 3.


CHAPTER 3: I HAVE A PLAN!! JOURNEY TO THE VILLAGE HIDDEN IN THE STARS!


Somewhere in a dirty old dungeon, Hinata woke up peacefully but quickly realized she couldn't yawn because her mouth was duct taped then she notices shes tied up......"What the...." she thought.

Then someone grabs her. She screams a faint scream because of the duct tape. She turns around to face her assailant kicking at the air but completely misses her mark.

"Calm down Hinata! Its me Sakura!" The voice spoke.

Hinata slowly opened her eyes to find a pink-haired girl in her pajamas. Sakura then untied Hinata and took off the tape.

"Ye-ow!!!" Hinata yelped at the pain of tape to skin.

"Whoops! Sorry about that!" Sakura apologized.

"Sakura, Sakura! Where are we!" Hinata asked shaking Sakura.

"I dont know.....please..calm...down." Said a dizzy Sakura after being shaken around.

Hinata then noticed Ino over by the cell door. "Tenten! Temari! come here!" Ino commanded.

She whispered something to them. They agreed. Ino then made a oval with her hands and aimed it at the sleeping guard. "Mind Transfer Jutsu!" She said. The two girls held Ino's lifeless body and soon the guard's body shook a little.

"Yes! Direct hit!" Said Tenten.

The guard slowly got up and stared at the the girls in the cell.

"Whoops! Maybe not!" Said Temari.

"Heehee....I totally got you guys! You should have seen the look on your faces!" Said Ino in the guard's body.

"GRRR....We are going to kill you Ino!" Tenten and Temari both said.

soon Ino went looking for the keys to the cell and found them in the bottom drawer. "Oh Yeah! Tada!" Ino said as she jingles the keys to the girls.

"Way to go Ino! Now let us out!" Said Sakura.

Ino walked over to the girls but soon notices two other guards walking towards her. "Shit!!" Ino swored at her bad luck.

"Hey Yashimaru!" The brown-haired guard on the left said as he waved.

"Hey you guys" Ino replied trying not to blow her cover.

"Are you ready? Its time to report to the big guy." The black-haired guard on the right said.

"Shit! Shit!" Ino thought. "Sure you guys! lets get this over with already!"

"Wow! usually you would be sleep by now but now you're ready to report in, im impressed!" The brown-haired guard said.

The two guards turn around to walk out of the dungeon but Ino tried to stay and unlock the door .

"Hurry up Ino!" Sakura whispered at Ino who was flipping through and trying keys but none worked until one was left.

"Oh no you don't!" The black-haired guard said.

"Aww Crap!" Ino thought. Had her cover been blown?

"You know the rules! No flirting with the prisoners!" The guard said as he tugged Ino away by the shirt.

"Damn it! Let me go!" Ino yelled at the guard.

"Nope! we have to report in now." The guard reminded Ino in disguise.

The guard tugged away a struggling Ino out of the room a pressed some buttons on the alarm system and it beeped.

"Well there goes our escape outta here." Sakura pointed out.

"Now what?" Hinata asked.

"I'll bust us outta here myself!" Sakura scoffed.

She walked up to the cage door and put up a fighting stance. She focused her chakra in her right fist, remembering her training with Tsunade, and lunged her fist at the door. "Hee-yah!" Sakura yelled. Her fist hit the door only to find it coarsing with electricity. "!!!!!!!....Eeep!" Sakura said as she got stunned.

Sakura fell unconscious but Hinata caught her and placed her next to Ino on the floor.

"Now what!" Temari asked.

"I don't know! we can only hope Ino comes back with the keys" Tenten hoped.

Meanwhile at the grand room of the castle. Ino was surrounded by more guards kneeling before a fat guy on a throne.

"My lord! we have secured the prisoners like you asked" The brown-haired guard from before said.

The fat guy raised his hand to signal the guards to stand up, then he looked over to his left to find ninjas from the star village. The leader stepped forward.

"King Yunko, i believe we made a deal" the leader said to remind the king.

"Why yes of course!" The king sighed.

The king reached behind him and pulled out a large sack of money and threw it towards the ninja. The leader caught it and kneel.

"Thank you, my king" The leader said then instantly disappeared and the other ninja followed.

"What should we do, my lord?" the black-haired guard asked.

"Get the prisoners ready tomorrow morning and bring them here by noon. you are dismissed back to your posts" King Yunko ordered.

"Yes my lord!" The black-haired guard replies with a bowed head.

"Crap!!! I've gotta get back to the gang!" Ino thought. Ino got dizzy soon after leaving. "Oh no! the jutsu has taken alot of me! I have to stop the jutsu now before...i lose it"

Ino put her hands together and focused her chakra. "Release!" Ino then left the guard's body lying on the floor and her soul went flying back to her body in the cell. Her body shook.

"Ino what happened?" Tenten asked.

"King......kidnapping.....ninja.....tomorrow." Ino said out of breath and passed out.

"Fuck! now we are stuck in here!" Tenten snarled.

"At least the boys may try to find us and save us, isn't that right Hinata?" Temari asked.

But Hinata wasn't paying attention she was daydreaming as she look out the barred window. "Naruto-kun.....where are you?"

Meanwhile Naruto, Sasuke, Shikamaru, Kiba and Akamaru, Shino, Neji and Lee gathered at the entrance of the Leaf village.

"Ok! We got the permission we needed from Grandma Tsunade now can we go already?" Naruto asked.

The boys shook their heads toward Naruto.

"Alright then! Lets go save the girls!" Naruto yelled.

Akamaru sniffed the ground and gained a scent of the kidnappers. "Ruff!"

"Akamaru has a fix on the kidnappers! follow me!" Kiba said.

Kiba hopped onto the large dog and rode into the forest soon followed Naruto and the rest.


~End of Chapter 3~

that was a great chapter! and become i can i give another one!

CHAPTER 4: CONFESSIONS OF A TEENAGE NINJA!!!


The day grew darker as Naruto and the boys began their journey to find the criminals who kidnapped the girls.

"Hey Naruto!" Shikamaru yelled out. "We should set up camp soon, its getting dark now"

Naruto frowned. He didn't want to stop now not until he had Hinata again. but he stopped on tree branch and pulled a kunai. he threw it towards the ground as it stayed there.

"Ok we set up camp here! Neji! Lee! Firewood! Kiba! Shino! make tents! And me Sasuke and Shikamaru are to get food and water! is that clear?" Naruto commanded.

The boys just stared at Naruto. He actually sounded like a chunin.

"What is it?" Naruto asked.

"Nothing......you just sounded like a real leader there for a minute." Kiba responded.

Naruto rubbed the back of his head. "Well you can't expect me to be the same knucklehead forever don't ya?"

Kiba smiled. "About time if you ask me!"

Naruto smiled as the gang split up to do their assigned jobs. Naruto, Shikamaru, and Sasuke arrived at a lake a half mile away. Naruto then jumped in it and swam to the bottom. He held out his left hand and used his right to spin the chakra around. He had created a whirlpool which swallowed up the fish then he detonated the Rasengan and a explosion rang out as the fish flew out. Sasuke then took off his shirt to reveal a muscular chest and use it to catch the fish in it. And shikamaru got the water for the camp. "Man what a drag! I had to do the lame job" Shikamaru muttered to hisself.

Naruto, Sasuke, and Shikamaru returned thirty minutes later to find a big pile of firewood and tents made of branches and giant leafs.

"Ok Sasuke start the fire up so we can chow down" Naruto ordered.

Sasuke made a flurry of hand signs. "Fire style: Fireball Jutsu!" Sasuke then blew fire that hit the pile and it instantly lit up. Everyone then got situated as they sat by the fire.

Neji had his head between his knees thinking of Tenten. Naruto was up in the tree watching the moon thinking of Hinata. Shikamaru was laid back thinking of Temari. Sasuke was polishing his katana blade to try to not worry himself but he couldn't help it. Lee and Kiba played Rock Paper Scissors for the last of the fish. Kiba won but gave the fish to Akamaru. Shino watched a family of deer scurry through the woods and he let a tear drop but no one saw because of the shades he wore. Obviously no one was happy. Lee walked to a distraught Neji and sat down beside him.

"Lee i just don't know what to do if i lose Tenten" Neji confessed.

"It will be okay Neji, we will save her" Lee reassured his teammate.

"Thanks Lee. but i also worry for Lady Hinata as well" Neji added.

"Don't worry about a thing Neji!" Naruto said. "I'll bring Hinata back and i will risk my life for that!"

"Hmph....Naruto you still have better eyes than mine" Neji admitted.

Neji read Naruto's body language thanks to the Byakugan. "You must really like her? don't you?" Neji asked.

Naruto blushed a very light red and turned away to playfully poke his fingers. "Well.....maybe a little...."

Kiba chuckled. "Its nothing to be shy about Naruto, that girl has always liked you for as long as i can remember!"

Naruto decided to play stupid, he couldn't let them know he already knew that, and look even more stupid. "Really Kiba?"

"Of course! But i guess you were too dimwitted to notice at the time." Kiba replied.

"Well.....i didn't realize I liked her until just the other day when i walked her home, I felt at home with her, like i could tell her everything and she listened to every word! If it wasn't for her, I would have never passed the Chunin exams 5 years ago." Naruto confessed. "Every step of the way she was always there for me even though we were on different teams, she gave me hope, confidence, courage, and i tooked that to heart."

Kiba smirked.

~Flashback~

At the chunin preliminaries.

"Ok! Now for my new technique!" Naruto said as he formed a hand sign. "Shadow-Clone Jutsu!" Six clones popped up. the first clone ran and punched Kiba sending him flying, then the real Naruto jumped up off the first clone, the other four slided under kiba's floating body and kicked him up in unison saying "NA-RU-TO!!" Kiba went upwards towards the real naruto. "UZUMAKI BARRAGE!!!" Naruto kicked Kiba in the face with a his might sending Kiba falling fast to the ground face first.

"And the winner is.....Naruto Uzumaki!" Hayate said.

~Flashback ends~

Neji closed his eyes and sneaked a smile.

~Flashback~

At the arena during their chunin match.

Naruto placed his hands together and focused out the fox chakra as his injuries healed. "ARRGH!!!" Naruto screamed as the red chakra form a flamy aura.

"No way! his chakra points were pressed!" Neji thought to himself frightened.

"Here I come!" Naruto warned Neji.

Everyone at the arena was shocked at this display of power from Naruto. Naruto then charged Neji with kunai in hand. Neji pulled out one as well.

"When i become Hokage, I'll change the Hyuga Clan!" Naruto yelled.

"Rotation!!" Neji said as he spun a shield of chakra and Naruto's attack connected with it then a huge explosion! "KABOOM!"

The two bodies crashed into the ground. but only Neji stood up and walked over to Naruto's unconscious body. "Hmph...sorry failure! This is called destiny!" Neji proclaimed.

Suddenly the ground rumbled as Neji looked down but it was too late. Naruto dove from underground and uppercutted Neji in the face with all his might. The limp Naruto in the crater poofed away, a clone.

"And the winner is....Naruto Uzumaki!!" The proctor yelled out to the crowd.

The crowd celebrated and roared. Naruto felt the love he always wanted.

~Flashback ends~

Naruto bowed his head and tears ran down his cheeks. "If anything bad happens to Hinata, I could never live with myself!"

Sasuke then placed his hand on Naruto's shoulder. "Its ok Naruto we will save her and the girls"

"Gee....Thanks Sasuke" Naruto said as he wiped his face.

"Lets get to sleep everyone cause we leave first thing in the morning!" Sasuke ordered.

Everyone walked to their tents and went to sleep. Naruto threw water on the fire and went back to his branch and looked at the moon again.

Hinata at her cell watched the moon also, it reminded her of her kiss. Then simultaneously they both raise their hand as if to call out to each other's hearts. Naruto then closed his eyes and went to sleep as did Hinata.

~End of chapter 4~

Whew! that last one was a tearjeaker. anyway stay tuned for the next action-packed episode!

CHAPTER 5: STAR VS. LEAF! NARUTO LOSES IT!!
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Tuesday, December 11, 2007

   Naruto: The Epic Adventure Continues!!!
Heres the second chapter for all my fanfic fans! O and for anyone who thinks something wrong with my story.....just remember its Japan....everything is topsy-turvy there.....


CHAPTER 2: DISAPPEARANCE!!! MY HEART'S LOVER!

Naruto woke back up to drink some warm milk to help him sleep and laid back on his bed. "Why would Hinata kiss me? Am i in love? I thought Sakura was the one for me but that was a losing battle a long time ago or maybe i missed something?" Naruto said to himself as he looked at the moon outside his bedroom window.

~Flashbacks~

At the Chunin prelims 5 years ago.

Naruto got angry at the utter brutality at Neji Hyuga's disrespect for Hinata, his own cousin.

"No one can change! No matter how hard they try!" a younger Neji taunted.

"No, you're wrong! I....I believe I have changed. maybe if its only a little bit. cause that's my nindo......my ninja way!" Hinata responded with confidence in her eyes even though she was barely breathing and coughing up blood. Watching this display of courage and bravery Naruto had the utpmost belief in Hinata.


Before the Chunin finals at the training field.

"You know Hinata.....I may act tough but actually im totally nervous outta my mind. I mean Neji's the genius and im....im just a complete failure." Naruto told Hinata as he bowed his head.

"Dont say that Naruto-kun! You're not a failure! Cause at my match hearing you root for me gave me confidence to continue the match and i didn't give up cause of you." Hinata confessed.

"Thanks Hinata!" Naruto said with a smile on his face. "You know i used to think you were creepy but now i think i kinda like people like you!"

Hinata's eyes widened. Her heart stopped. Did he just say he liked me?

"You should see me blow Neji away!" Naruto exclaimed as he waved goodbye to Hinata.

Then at the Chunin Finals against Neji.

Naruto just recieved a devastating 64 palms attack, but he was still standing even though he was coughing up blood and feeling weak.

The thought of Hinata's bravery ran through his mind.

"Even thought she's in the main branch, Hinata has been suffering just as much as you! She's trying so hard to change herself to earn respect......that's why she hung in there during that fight with you, even though she was coughing up blood!" Naruto cried out.

"Thats why i vow to win!!!" Naruto held up his fist.

~Flashbacks end~

Naruto looked at his alarm clock, it was midnight already. "I better get to sleep and think about what i'm going to deal with this tommorrow"

He closed his eyes. Minutes passed as Naruto slowly drifts to sleep. But suddenly loud knocks rang out from the apartment door.

"Who could that be at this hour?" Naruto asked himself.

Naruto got up from his bed in his white tee and black boxers and opened his door annoyed.

"Hell...whoa!!" Naruto was grabbed in a flash and thrown to his couch as his door slammed shut. Naruto was freaked out! He stared at the mysterious figure.

"Don't be afraid.....Naruto-kun" The voice spoke.

Naruto then realized only one person called him "Naruto-kun" all the time. "Hinata? Is that you?" Naruto asked the figure.

"Yes....Naruto-kun! It's me" Hinata responded as she stepped out the shadows wearing only a jacket that barely clothed her. Hinata walked seductively over to Naruto. Hinata was hot! Naruto never saw what under those baggy clothes she always wore. She spread her legs over Naruto's lap and sat down. His heart was beating so fast. Then she kissed him passionately. He couldnt defend himself or rather he didnt want to fight back. Her kiss! Her tounge! It felt so amazing! Two hearts beat as one. Naruto's hand ran up her jacket and felt the smooth skin. Hinata caresses his spiky hair. "ooo....Naruto-kun i just couldn't stay away!" Hinata apologized.

"It's okay Hinata i kinda like it" Naruto whispered.

Naruto was at the end of his rope. Naruto couldnt hold back his passion anymore. He unzips her jacket and it falls to the floor. He kisses her again as her naked body rubbed up against him.

"Oh yes..yes Naruto...im all yours!" Hinata moaned as Naruto kissed her neck but then.....

KNOCK KNOCK!!!
"Naruto! Wake up!" Neji yelled out.

Naruto's eyes sprang open.
Panting and sweating. the sheets were soaked of sweat. It was only a dream. He rubbed his face of the sweat and tried to catch his breath. He got up and answered the door to find an estatic Neji and Kiba.

"Naruto! Get dressed! Tenten is gone!" Neji cried out.

"What!" Naruto's eyes widen as he ran to his closet. "What happened Neji!"

"Villagers have reported hearing screams and seeing ninjas run off in the night" Kiba explained. "It startled Akamaru"

Naruto came from the other room back to the living room struggling to get his pants on of his black and orange jumpsuit.

"Are you ok? You're sweaty." Neji asked.

"Huh?.....oh it's nothing Neji, let's just get going already and see if Hinata is wants to help us" Naruto tried to change the subject.

"Did something happened between you and Hinata when you walked her home last night?" Kiba asked.

A blank expression ran across Naruto's face and he tripped over his pants and fell on his face. He ignored the question and just put on his pants and tied on his black headband.

"Well...did something happen between you two?" Kiba asked again.

The trio dashed through the village towards Hinata's house. Neji and Kiba stared uneasily at Naruto.

"Look you guys......it's not like i had sex with her or anything......." Naruto chuckled a fake laugh but was kicking himself mentally.

Kiba made a kissy face. "Naruto and Hinata sitting in the tree! K-I-S-S-I-N....."

"SHUT-UP!" Naruto yelled not paying attention to the tree up ahead. BAM!!!! he accidently jumped in the way of the tree.

"oooo....thats gotta hurt!" Kiba snickered.

Minutes later the trio arrive at Hinata's house. Kiba knocks at the door. "Hey Hinata! Are you there?" Kiba asked.

"Hey look the balcony window is swinging open!" Neji pointed out. The trio jumps up there.

"Oh no! Not Lady Hinata too!" Neji cried out.

"Damn it!" Naruto swore.

"Ok we split up and search for clues to who the kidnappers may be." Neji suggested.

"I got the top floor" Kiba said.
"I got the bottom floor" Naruto said.
"And that leaves the backyard for me" Neji said. "We met back here at the balcony later"

"Ok Neji!" Naruto saluted him.

The trio then split up. Kiba ran through Hinata's bedroom and then got a little curious. So he opened Hinata's underwear drawer and pulled out a purple pair. "Man this girl loves her purple!" Kiba thought to himself.

"What are you doing?" Neji asked behind an unsuspecting Kiba.

"Uhhh....nothing!" Kiba quickly put everything back blushing.

"ok....." Neji replies. "And if you're wondering the color's lavender" Neji snickered. Kiba was really blushing red.

Meanwhile Naruto searched up and down as to who could have kidnapped Hinata? Why? and whoever did it I'll kill them! Naruto didn't find anything and leaned up against a bookcase in frustation. Naruto saw an interesting book in it. He took the book out but a click sounded and a trap door opened. Naruto fell to the bottom and the book he had fell on his head. "oww!....what is this place?" Naruto looked around and found a lamp on a wooden desk.....and the book he picked up read "Hinata's Diary" Naruto was tempted to read it....he slowly picked it up and open the cover. His academy picture was in the first page. Naruto gasped. He flipped through the book to the last written page which was yesterday.

"Yesterday Naruto-kun returned to the leaf village i was kind of excited and afraid at the same time. The boy i had admired for a long time had returned looking better and stronger than 5 years ago. I almost told him how i felt for years but i froze up again but i didn't let it get to me as i gave him a little peck on the cheek. I felt really stupid afterwards maybe i pushed myself on him? I have to apologize for my actions tomorrow then.

Hugs & Kisses, Hinata

Naruto put the book down and clenched his fists and grinded his teeth together to stop from tearing up. But the tears ran down like waterfalls. "You always helped Hinata now it's my turn to do the helping.....I swear.....I'll save you!!!"

Naruto's eyes turned into that of the demon fox but changed back as he ran down the dark corridor of the secret room.

~End of chapter 2~

That was a great chapter!
Stay tuned for tomorrow's episode!
CHAPTER 3: I HAVE A PLAN!!! JOURNEY TO THE VILLAGE HIDDEN IN THE STARS!!!


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Sunday, December 9, 2007

   otakuites=fighting dreamers!
Nothing much today just a little bored but i got my fanfic to cheer me up as i go back to school tomorrow.....speaking of which i cant post it today....i know i know you were so excited but hey ill try to post it tomorrow so dont worry....and i hear amanda-sensei has a fanfic of herself mainly consists of graphic bump bump(sex). but hey i wish her luck with that.....but mines will be way better cause im Token!!! stormy-kun and i went to my brother's birthday at the ice rink the other day and we had a fun time and i didnt fall not once! and i went out and got guitar hero III yesterday and i spend alot of time training and i think that im getting really good! im surprised at my abilities but i guess nothing is unachievable without a little confidence and some help from my senseis! well i gotta go finish this fanfic of mine before certain people get real testy! ok goodbye and goodnite! *runs away but trips and falls*
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Saturday, December 8, 2007

   whoops
sorry! i was working on my naruto fan fiction novel all day and i almost forget to post......anyway im working a naruto novel...its a three part story which is full of drama action adventure romance and comedy that is sure to satisfy any naruto fan and if they dont like it well......shut up! i did it to make me happy so there! anyway its a story of when the genin kids grow up to the age of 20/21 years old and all are chunin in the leaf village. Part 1 begins when everyone celebrates Ino's baby shower and shino is the father...naruto isnt there he off training as always....sakura watches sasuke from afar wanting sasuke to be her baby's daddy hinata gains more confidence as she grows older but is still kinda afraid of naruto cause of her feelings for him. and everyone is having a great time but as the night grows darker and everyone goes home hired ninjas kidnapped the girls from the leaf village and disappears. the boys wake up in the morning and find the girls gone and soon a search team is assembled and the adventure that will change everyones lives begins! what happened to the girls? who would hire ninja to take them all away? and why does naruto suddenly wants to save a certain girl and express his feelings for her? stay tuned to find out when CHAPTER 1: DISAPPEARANCE! NARUTO AND THE SECRET ROOM! i will try to post the first chapter tomorrow and nine more chapters in the future and if i cant post the first chapter by tomorrow look for it monday afternoon....ok bye *runs away*
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Friday, December 7, 2007

Yay! RASENGAN!
today was boring until i drew portraits of various naruto characters which included that uber-sexy hinata *winks* anyway i still have that epic project to do so i still recieving votes and so far my friends are choosing sasuke so it might be him but im gonna wait until i have a majority decision. o and i have found a great love story of naruto and hinata its so great! and i want everyone to experience it! but if you dont like naruhina then turn away ive putting on two chapters a day and you dont have to read it! XD i love romance novels and this is my favorite! so scroll down to read chapters one and two of "naruto and hinata's lavender-eyed love!" its for true naruto fans! *disappears in a puff of smoke*

Chapter 1: Return

“FINALLY!” “We’re finally back!” Shouted a tall blond spiky haired boy, he was glad to be back to Konoha. He had grown considerably since he was last here. He was now about Six feet and had much more muscle to him then when he was a kid. He wasn’t overly muscular but he was defiantly toned well. He also got out of his bright orange jumpsuit into black pants and a half orange half black shirt. Naruto was so excited he was home, after being away for nearly 3 years with that perverted sage.

Though he had to admit a little bit rubbed off on him, but he wasn’t a pervert but he really did want a girlfriend, someone to hold, kiss, and just love. Sakura! He remembered having a crush on her when he was younger. So he decided to see if maybe, just maybe she would go on a date with him, he started to sprint to Sakura’s house before he was jerked backwards and fell to his butt.

He turned and stared at the old man holding his collar “What was that for?”

“Hold on spunky, we have to go visit Tsunade and as much as you want to visit your friends and talk about what they’ve been doing we still have to go talk to her first”

Naruto pouted and sat on the dirt, he was angry he couldn’t go see his friends right away but he could after seeing Tsunade, and she was kind of a friend, but more like an older sister. So he could go see her before his friends. He still wasn’t exactly trilled but he got up and started to follow the perverted old man.

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“Tsunade-sama!” Naruto yelled flinging the doors open.

Tsunade looked up in surprise not quite sure what was happening, she was up all night doing paper work. She didn’t get to see a face as a black and orange blur slammed into her with a tackle hug.

She didn’t know what was happening so she did what came naturally to her, she punched him, sending him flying across the room.

When she finally got a good look at who it was she was surprised to see Naruto in his new black and orange uniform rubbing his head where she hit him.

“What did I do??” “I’m gone for three years and when I get back you punch me?” He complained, still rubbing his head.

“N-Naruto?” “Is that really you” She questioned

“Yes, it’s really me!” Naruto stopped rubbing his head to stand and shout at her.

“Sorry Naruto I didn’t get any sleep last night, and when you busted open the door and came and gave me that tackle hug I didn’t really know what to do”

“Well you didn’t have to hit me so hard” And went back to rubbing his head.

“Well, you do look a lot different then when I last saw you” Tsunade said trying to defend her actions.

“Are you two already fighting?” Jiraiya said calmly stepping into the room.

Tsunade didn’t even bother answering the question, She simply held out a hand to the two seats in front of her desk and said “Have a seat”. Both of them quickly took a seat as Tsunade asked them how their training went.

Naruto leaped out of his chair “I’ve gotten really strong and learned all kinds of new jutsu!” Naruto stopped to show off his muscles, “Even if Jiraiya is really perverted”. Tsunade glared at Jiraiya.

“Oh come on Naruto stop goofing around, I wasn’t that perverted”

“What about all that stuff about Tsunade?” Jiraiya didn’t completely hear the comment Naruto was making but Tsunade’s glare became angrier. “That stuff was really perverted” Naruto continued, “That one part about how much you wished Tsunade would L…” Jiraiya Quickly jumped up and clasped his hand over Naruto’s mouth, reducing Naruto’s words to muffles.

Tsunade had a glare that looked like she was looking right through you, and if she saw completely through you, you were as good as dead… if you were lucky. Jiraiya gulped.

Tsunade stood up about to yell at Jiraiya, when the doors flew open again reviling 3 girls, a pink haired girl, who had black gloves on, like she was ready to punch anyone who got in her way. She wore the same pink outfit with black short shorts on and she still had her hair cut short, Sakura had to admit she liked it short..

The next was a blond haired girl who was in a purple t-shirt and purple skirt. Her hair was long with a flip of hair in front of her face. That flip of hair was almost a trademark of Ino. Though she didn’t look threatening, she could be scary if you get her mad.

The third girl was a brown eyed brown haired girl and did look scary, she had weapons everywhere. She had only ten weapons visible but she had about 1,000 hidden either by scrolls or she had them hidden in secret pockets of her outfit, which was now a white top with black pants. You didn’t want to get any of these three mad.

Naruto quickly realized one girl was missing, a very beautiful, shy, soft lavender eyed girl. Naruto was taken back a little when he though of her as very beautiful. She was pretty when he last saw her; but then he suddenly realized he really wanted to see how see was looking now.

He ran to the girls and greeted them all with a big group hug, a small blush crept across all of their faces, he was better looking then they remembered him. He was already asking them how they were and what they have been doing, but before they could even answer he released them from his grip.

“Where is Hinata-chan?” They were a little surprised that he even remembered her, he never paid any attention to her when they were younger, except during the Chunnin exams.

“Hinata, she couldn’t come she had to train, why do you want to know Naruto?” Sakura leaned closer curious to why he had asked.

“Uh… I just was hoping….. to...uh…. see my friends.” Naruto stammered Sakura didn’t believe him but she shook her head to show she took it as an answer. Naruto was glad he managed to dodge a bullet, but he still couldn’t figure out why he was always thinking about Hinata. Maybe he should ask Tsunade when no one else is around.

While Naruto and the girls conversed on what they have been doing and how they were doing. Tsunade was glad to see he was still the same kid, and that Jiraiya hadn’t rubbed off on him too much. She remembered that she got him a little gift for his return, but she would save that for when the girls left.

Jiraiya leaned over to Tsunade “Hey what are the chances of you and me going…”

“No” Tsunade snapped before he could even finish the sentence. “Which reminds me” Jiraiya realized he walked into a fire. “What was Naruto saying about those thoughts about me?” Jiraiya gulped and scrambled through his brain trying to find a good enough lie. Lucky for Jiraiya the girls had to leave so Naruto was back in the room talking to Tsunade. He sighed; he would have to buy that kid some ramen.

“I bet you’re eager to see you friends huh?” Tsunade said focusing her attention back to Naruto

“You Bet I am!” Naruto shouted.

“Well you better get going”

“Really I can go?”

“Of course you idiot now get going”

Naruto turned to take off out the door before he realized he had to ask Tsunade that question. Naruto quickly spun back around and leaned over the desk to Tsunade.

“Hey Tsunade since I’ve been back I’ve been thinking about a certain girl lately, and I don’t really know why, do you think you know?”

“In what way have you been thinking about her” She quickly glanced at Jiraiya who realized he was back into the fire.

“Not like pervy sage thoughts” Naruto shouted. Jiraiya was about ready to defend himself but thought he should not attract anymore attention from Tsunade.

“So you think you love her?” Tsunade inquired

“Is that it?” He said, he thought about it maybe that was it, no, it couldn’t be he liked Sakura…. didn’t he? “Thanks anyway Tsunade” as he turned and walked toward the door

“Oh here Naruto, it’s my welcome back present” She threw a pair of keys at him, smacking him squarely in the back of the head. Naruto fell face first into the ground. ‘Yeah he’s still the same kid’ She thought. Naruto got up and grabbed the keys, with so many thoughts going through his head he didn’t care that she had hit him. He looked at the keys on the key ring there was an address. “It’s your new house” Tsunade explained

“House!?!” Naruto was shocked she got him a house. “You didn’t have to get me anything”

“Well I did, so take it and enjoy you’re new home” He quickly thanked her and strode off. Jiraiya stood up and stared to walk out of the room as well. “Where do you think you’re going?” Tsunade asked raising an eyebrow.

“Uh I have to go meet up with some f-friends and you know, that type of stuff” He stammered quickly, putting his hand behind his head.

“You never told me what those thoughts were” She looked out the window then back at Jiraiya, or where Jiraiya was supposed to be, but he was gone. ‘Darn coward.’


Chapter 2: I’m Back!

Naruto walked down the street looking for his new house. He was going down the street looking at all the houses, some where huge some where smaller but nice. Then he finally found his.

It was a medium house, big for him considering he was only one person. It was two stories and a large front lawn. The house was an interesting color of tan he didn’t know what to call the color but he liked it. He walked down a cobble stone path finding every 5 steps or so there was a row of colorful Rocks some with pictures of leaves, fire, water, mountains, and other various things. He liked how they looked they were so intricate and on a rock, who puts that much time on a rock?

When he got to the front door he slid it open, kicking up a bunch of dust, he would have a lot of cleaning to do. He sighed, he wasn’t exactly thrilled about cleaning, but he continued to explore his new house. It was amazing there must have been at least 8 different bed rooms complete with furnishings. He was amazed to see his backyard, it was a sparing ground! He loved that, and couldn’t wait to try it out.

He found a bath house in room to the right of the sparring ground, it was big enough for a couple people and it was a large area. He found the bath to be a hole carved into the floor it was finely crafted. He was going to try this out after he finished cleaning.

After he finally stopped exploring the house he went out to get a broom and some dusters. He walked out of his new house and headed for the store.

He was thinking about what he needed, and hunted it down in the store. On his way for a broom he ran into a very beautiful, lavender eyed girl, she was just 2 inches shorter then him. Her dark hair long hair that stopped a little before her waist, made her beautiful eyes more… beautiful, if that was possible, he stood there starring at her and how much more beautiful she looked, she was….. hot, for lack of a better word. Her curves were amazing, they where everywhere they should, he was sure many girls envied Hinata because of them.

He suddenly realized she was staring at him to, then he finally got out of this trance she had on him. He smiled widely and hugged her; he picked her up off her feet and squeezed her in a bear hug.

She couldn’t believe he was back, and so much better looking then she remembered. She then realized she was getting a huge hug from him, and blushed a deep crimson red. He was asking her how she was but all she could focus on was the hug she was getting from Naruto.

He realized he was still holding her then quickly pulled away and blushed a little bit. She was still staring at him until finally he asked her how she was doing again. His words shook her out of her astonishment.

“N-Naruto-k-kun?” she managed a little stammer.

“Yeah it’s me alright, Hinata-chan” He wanted to say so much more but he found it oddly hard to say anything more. But he finally worked up enough courage to ask her something, though he wasn’t sure why he wanted to ask her, but he felt compelled to by those amazing lavender eyes she had. “Do you want to go grab so lunch with me Hinata-chan?”

Hinata blink rapidly, was he asking her on a date? No, it couldn’t be, it was just lunch but it was close enough. She was so still deep in thought and she hadn’t responded yet.

Naruto was worried she had not answer him yet. He turned his head a little “Hinata?” Did he offend her? Crap, maybe she hated him, maybe she was so shocked he would even try something like that, that she was insulted. He knew someone as beautiful as her would never fall for him. “I’m sorry Hinata-chan I didn’t mean to make you angry with me”

Her eyes widened ‘Oh no now he thought she was mad at him’. “I’m not mad at you, I would love to get lunch with you, it’s just been so long since I saw you last and now you look so…” She went back to a nervous habit of pushing her Index fingers together. Naruto saw her pushing her fingers together, he used to think that she was weird when she did that but now, now she looked so cute. He didn’t know why but he kept finding more and more things about her attractive, so much so that it scared him. “You just look so…h….different” She mentally kicked herself for not being able to compliment Naruto on how good he looked.

“Great I thought you were mad at me” He put his hand behind his head, relived that the beautiful girl in front of him, didn’t hate him.

“I could never be mad at you Naruto-kun” She whispered. Naruto was close enough to hear her, and sighed. He never wanted her to be mad at him.

They gathered what they needed to buy and headed to check out. Hinata started to go to another lane but Naruto quickly grabbed her hand and pulled her back into his lane. “Oh, no you don’t, I’m going to pay for both of us” He said smiling that big smile he had. Hinata blushed not only was he trying to pay for her but he was also holding her hand.

“It’s okay Naruto-kun I brought money, I can pay, you don’t have to.” She replied. Usually she wouldn’t have been able to respond, but while he was away she became a little less shy, she wasn’t confident like Naruto but she was confident.

“But I want to” He grinned. She nodded and allowed him to pay.

is it a dream come true for hinata? will hinata finally tell naruto how she feels since they were kids? will naruto tame that ass? sorry i just had to say that! stay tuned for chapter 3 and 4!
*runs away*
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Thursday, December 6, 2007

   yada yada HARUKA KANATA!!!!!
nothing much today just drawing a great pic of naruto! i must say all those days of training really paid off! but i cant slow down now i must get stronger.......or my senseis will break my legs and eat me! Its my brother's birthday tomorrow but i feel bad cause my girlfriend is sick today. i wanna make her feel better...........get your minds outta the gutter im not doing the "bump bump" to make her fell better........man.......anyway i have a writing project to do in my English 4 in which i have to write a draft of epic which is about a hero of my choice. i chose naruto (figured)......so i ask you all in my otaku land.....whos the bad guy in my epic? you can either vote for sasuke.......orochimaru.......kabuto.....itachi or someone else.......vote now and the results shall posted sunday night so tell your friends about it too and have them comment back. Then ill post the epic once its done next week. XD thanks alot for your services! you guys are the greatest ever!
SHADOW-CLONE JUTSU!! *holds out hand while clone spins chakra* RASENGAN!!! *aims toward wall and destroy it* BYE! *runs away outside*
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Wednesday, December 5, 2007

uhh.......
man training sure is tough! i never knew manga was so difficult! there is so many rules to this or else the whole drawing is out of proportion.....i cant quit now! what would everyone think of me then! i dont give up and i dont run away! thats my nindo! my ninja way! I vow to learn how to draw by christmas! hopefully i will.....but anyway the christmas assembly at school was kinda funny at some parts but other than that it was stupid as always......well i gotta get back to training before sensei breaks my legs! *runs away*
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