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Tuesday, December 11, 2007


   Naruto: The Epic Adventure Continues!!!
Heres the second chapter for all my fanfic fans! O and for anyone who thinks something wrong with my story.....just remember its Japan....everything is topsy-turvy there.....


CHAPTER 2: DISAPPEARANCE!!! MY HEART'S LOVER!

Naruto woke back up to drink some warm milk to help him sleep and laid back on his bed. "Why would Hinata kiss me? Am i in love? I thought Sakura was the one for me but that was a losing battle a long time ago or maybe i missed something?" Naruto said to himself as he looked at the moon outside his bedroom window.

~Flashbacks~

At the Chunin prelims 5 years ago.

Naruto got angry at the utter brutality at Neji Hyuga's disrespect for Hinata, his own cousin.

"No one can change! No matter how hard they try!" a younger Neji taunted.

"No, you're wrong! I....I believe I have changed. maybe if its only a little bit. cause that's my nindo......my ninja way!" Hinata responded with confidence in her eyes even though she was barely breathing and coughing up blood. Watching this display of courage and bravery Naruto had the utpmost belief in Hinata.


Before the Chunin finals at the training field.

"You know Hinata.....I may act tough but actually im totally nervous outta my mind. I mean Neji's the genius and im....im just a complete failure." Naruto told Hinata as he bowed his head.

"Dont say that Naruto-kun! You're not a failure! Cause at my match hearing you root for me gave me confidence to continue the match and i didn't give up cause of you." Hinata confessed.

"Thanks Hinata!" Naruto said with a smile on his face. "You know i used to think you were creepy but now i think i kinda like people like you!"

Hinata's eyes widened. Her heart stopped. Did he just say he liked me?

"You should see me blow Neji away!" Naruto exclaimed as he waved goodbye to Hinata.

Then at the Chunin Finals against Neji.

Naruto just recieved a devastating 64 palms attack, but he was still standing even though he was coughing up blood and feeling weak.

The thought of Hinata's bravery ran through his mind.

"Even thought she's in the main branch, Hinata has been suffering just as much as you! She's trying so hard to change herself to earn respect......that's why she hung in there during that fight with you, even though she was coughing up blood!" Naruto cried out.

"Thats why i vow to win!!!" Naruto held up his fist.

~Flashbacks end~

Naruto looked at his alarm clock, it was midnight already. "I better get to sleep and think about what i'm going to deal with this tommorrow"

He closed his eyes. Minutes passed as Naruto slowly drifts to sleep. But suddenly loud knocks rang out from the apartment door.

"Who could that be at this hour?" Naruto asked himself.

Naruto got up from his bed in his white tee and black boxers and opened his door annoyed.

"Hell...whoa!!" Naruto was grabbed in a flash and thrown to his couch as his door slammed shut. Naruto was freaked out! He stared at the mysterious figure.

"Don't be afraid.....Naruto-kun" The voice spoke.

Naruto then realized only one person called him "Naruto-kun" all the time. "Hinata? Is that you?" Naruto asked the figure.

"Yes....Naruto-kun! It's me" Hinata responded as she stepped out the shadows wearing only a jacket that barely clothed her. Hinata walked seductively over to Naruto. Hinata was hot! Naruto never saw what under those baggy clothes she always wore. She spread her legs over Naruto's lap and sat down. His heart was beating so fast. Then she kissed him passionately. He couldnt defend himself or rather he didnt want to fight back. Her kiss! Her tounge! It felt so amazing! Two hearts beat as one. Naruto's hand ran up her jacket and felt the smooth skin. Hinata caresses his spiky hair. "ooo....Naruto-kun i just couldn't stay away!" Hinata apologized.

"It's okay Hinata i kinda like it" Naruto whispered.

Naruto was at the end of his rope. Naruto couldnt hold back his passion anymore. He unzips her jacket and it falls to the floor. He kisses her again as her naked body rubbed up against him.

"Oh yes..yes Naruto...im all yours!" Hinata moaned as Naruto kissed her neck but then.....

KNOCK KNOCK!!!
"Naruto! Wake up!" Neji yelled out.

Naruto's eyes sprang open.
Panting and sweating. the sheets were soaked of sweat. It was only a dream. He rubbed his face of the sweat and tried to catch his breath. He got up and answered the door to find an estatic Neji and Kiba.

"Naruto! Get dressed! Tenten is gone!" Neji cried out.

"What!" Naruto's eyes widen as he ran to his closet. "What happened Neji!"

"Villagers have reported hearing screams and seeing ninjas run off in the night" Kiba explained. "It startled Akamaru"

Naruto came from the other room back to the living room struggling to get his pants on of his black and orange jumpsuit.

"Are you ok? You're sweaty." Neji asked.

"Huh?.....oh it's nothing Neji, let's just get going already and see if Hinata is wants to help us" Naruto tried to change the subject.

"Did something happened between you and Hinata when you walked her home last night?" Kiba asked.

A blank expression ran across Naruto's face and he tripped over his pants and fell on his face. He ignored the question and just put on his pants and tied on his black headband.

"Well...did something happen between you two?" Kiba asked again.

The trio dashed through the village towards Hinata's house. Neji and Kiba stared uneasily at Naruto.

"Look you guys......it's not like i had sex with her or anything......." Naruto chuckled a fake laugh but was kicking himself mentally.

Kiba made a kissy face. "Naruto and Hinata sitting in the tree! K-I-S-S-I-N....."

"SHUT-UP!" Naruto yelled not paying attention to the tree up ahead. BAM!!!! he accidently jumped in the way of the tree.

"oooo....thats gotta hurt!" Kiba snickered.

Minutes later the trio arrive at Hinata's house. Kiba knocks at the door. "Hey Hinata! Are you there?" Kiba asked.

"Hey look the balcony window is swinging open!" Neji pointed out. The trio jumps up there.

"Oh no! Not Lady Hinata too!" Neji cried out.

"Damn it!" Naruto swore.

"Ok we split up and search for clues to who the kidnappers may be." Neji suggested.

"I got the top floor" Kiba said.
"I got the bottom floor" Naruto said.
"And that leaves the backyard for me" Neji said. "We met back here at the balcony later"

"Ok Neji!" Naruto saluted him.

The trio then split up. Kiba ran through Hinata's bedroom and then got a little curious. So he opened Hinata's underwear drawer and pulled out a purple pair. "Man this girl loves her purple!" Kiba thought to himself.

"What are you doing?" Neji asked behind an unsuspecting Kiba.

"Uhhh....nothing!" Kiba quickly put everything back blushing.

"ok....." Neji replies. "And if you're wondering the color's lavender" Neji snickered. Kiba was really blushing red.

Meanwhile Naruto searched up and down as to who could have kidnapped Hinata? Why? and whoever did it I'll kill them! Naruto didn't find anything and leaned up against a bookcase in frustation. Naruto saw an interesting book in it. He took the book out but a click sounded and a trap door opened. Naruto fell to the bottom and the book he had fell on his head. "oww!....what is this place?" Naruto looked around and found a lamp on a wooden desk.....and the book he picked up read "Hinata's Diary" Naruto was tempted to read it....he slowly picked it up and open the cover. His academy picture was in the first page. Naruto gasped. He flipped through the book to the last written page which was yesterday.

"Yesterday Naruto-kun returned to the leaf village i was kind of excited and afraid at the same time. The boy i had admired for a long time had returned looking better and stronger than 5 years ago. I almost told him how i felt for years but i froze up again but i didn't let it get to me as i gave him a little peck on the cheek. I felt really stupid afterwards maybe i pushed myself on him? I have to apologize for my actions tomorrow then.

Hugs & Kisses, Hinata

Naruto put the book down and clenched his fists and grinded his teeth together to stop from tearing up. But the tears ran down like waterfalls. "You always helped Hinata now it's my turn to do the helping.....I swear.....I'll save you!!!"

Naruto's eyes turned into that of the demon fox but changed back as he ran down the dark corridor of the secret room.

~End of chapter 2~

That was a great chapter!
Stay tuned for tomorrow's episode!
CHAPTER 3: I HAVE A PLAN!!! JOURNEY TO THE VILLAGE HIDDEN IN THE STARS!!!


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