Wednesday, December 12, 2007

   NARUTO: THE EPIC ADVENTURE!!!!
i pretty much had a good day. im kinda happy. and i realize myself more as an author than a artist......i want to make more stories like this and publish them but i cant do naruto....and what? get sued up the ass? You're crazy! anyway since i dont own naruto in any way *bows head* ill just give big ups to Masashi Kishimoto (the maker of naruto) and beg him not to sue me....yay! anyway heres chapter 3.


CHAPTER 3: I HAVE A PLAN!! JOURNEY TO THE VILLAGE HIDDEN IN THE STARS!


Somewhere in a dirty old dungeon, Hinata woke up peacefully but quickly realized she couldn't yawn because her mouth was duct taped then she notices shes tied up......"What the...." she thought.

Then someone grabs her. She screams a faint scream because of the duct tape. She turns around to face her assailant kicking at the air but completely misses her mark.

"Calm down Hinata! Its me Sakura!" The voice spoke.

Hinata slowly opened her eyes to find a pink-haired girl in her pajamas. Sakura then untied Hinata and took off the tape.

"Ye-ow!!!" Hinata yelped at the pain of tape to skin.

"Whoops! Sorry about that!" Sakura apologized.

"Sakura, Sakura! Where are we!" Hinata asked shaking Sakura.

"I dont know.....please..calm...down." Said a dizzy Sakura after being shaken around.

Hinata then noticed Ino over by the cell door. "Tenten! Temari! come here!" Ino commanded.

She whispered something to them. They agreed. Ino then made a oval with her hands and aimed it at the sleeping guard. "Mind Transfer Jutsu!" She said. The two girls held Ino's lifeless body and soon the guard's body shook a little.

"Yes! Direct hit!" Said Tenten.

The guard slowly got up and stared at the the girls in the cell.

"Whoops! Maybe not!" Said Temari.

"Heehee....I totally got you guys! You should have seen the look on your faces!" Said Ino in the guard's body.

"GRRR....We are going to kill you Ino!" Tenten and Temari both said.

soon Ino went looking for the keys to the cell and found them in the bottom drawer. "Oh Yeah! Tada!" Ino said as she jingles the keys to the girls.

"Way to go Ino! Now let us out!" Said Sakura.

Ino walked over to the girls but soon notices two other guards walking towards her. "Shit!!" Ino swored at her bad luck.

"Hey Yashimaru!" The brown-haired guard on the left said as he waved.

"Hey you guys" Ino replied trying not to blow her cover.

"Are you ready? Its time to report to the big guy." The black-haired guard on the right said.

"Shit! Shit!" Ino thought. "Sure you guys! lets get this over with already!"

"Wow! usually you would be sleep by now but now you're ready to report in, im impressed!" The brown-haired guard said.

The two guards turn around to walk out of the dungeon but Ino tried to stay and unlock the door .

"Hurry up Ino!" Sakura whispered at Ino who was flipping through and trying keys but none worked until one was left.

"Oh no you don't!" The black-haired guard said.

"Aww Crap!" Ino thought. Had her cover been blown?

"You know the rules! No flirting with the prisoners!" The guard said as he tugged Ino away by the shirt.

"Damn it! Let me go!" Ino yelled at the guard.

"Nope! we have to report in now." The guard reminded Ino in disguise.

The guard tugged away a struggling Ino out of the room a pressed some buttons on the alarm system and it beeped.

"Well there goes our escape outta here." Sakura pointed out.

"Now what?" Hinata asked.

"I'll bust us outta here myself!" Sakura scoffed.

She walked up to the cage door and put up a fighting stance. She focused her chakra in her right fist, remembering her training with Tsunade, and lunged her fist at the door. "Hee-yah!" Sakura yelled. Her fist hit the door only to find it coarsing with electricity. "!!!!!!!....Eeep!" Sakura said as she got stunned.

Sakura fell unconscious but Hinata caught her and placed her next to Ino on the floor.

"Now what!" Temari asked.

"I don't know! we can only hope Ino comes back with the keys" Tenten hoped.

Meanwhile at the grand room of the castle. Ino was surrounded by more guards kneeling before a fat guy on a throne.

"My lord! we have secured the prisoners like you asked" The brown-haired guard from before said.

The fat guy raised his hand to signal the guards to stand up, then he looked over to his left to find ninjas from the star village. The leader stepped forward.

"King Yunko, i believe we made a deal" the leader said to remind the king.

"Why yes of course!" The king sighed.

The king reached behind him and pulled out a large sack of money and threw it towards the ninja. The leader caught it and kneel.

"Thank you, my king" The leader said then instantly disappeared and the other ninja followed.

"What should we do, my lord?" the black-haired guard asked.

"Get the prisoners ready tomorrow morning and bring them here by noon. you are dismissed back to your posts" King Yunko ordered.

"Yes my lord!" The black-haired guard replies with a bowed head.

"Crap!!! I've gotta get back to the gang!" Ino thought. Ino got dizzy soon after leaving. "Oh no! the jutsu has taken alot of me! I have to stop the jutsu now before...i lose it"

Ino put her hands together and focused her chakra. "Release!" Ino then left the guard's body lying on the floor and her soul went flying back to her body in the cell. Her body shook.

"Ino what happened?" Tenten asked.

"King......kidnapping.....ninja.....tomorrow." Ino said out of breath and passed out.

"Fuck! now we are stuck in here!" Tenten snarled.

"At least the boys may try to find us and save us, isn't that right Hinata?" Temari asked.

But Hinata wasn't paying attention she was daydreaming as she look out the barred window. "Naruto-kun.....where are you?"

Meanwhile Naruto, Sasuke, Shikamaru, Kiba and Akamaru, Shino, Neji and Lee gathered at the entrance of the Leaf village.

"Ok! We got the permission we needed from Grandma Tsunade now can we go already?" Naruto asked.

The boys shook their heads toward Naruto.

"Alright then! Lets go save the girls!" Naruto yelled.

Akamaru sniffed the ground and gained a scent of the kidnappers. "Ruff!"

"Akamaru has a fix on the kidnappers! follow me!" Kiba said.

Kiba hopped onto the large dog and rode into the forest soon followed Naruto and the rest.


~End of Chapter 3~

that was a great chapter! and become i can i give another one!

CHAPTER 4: CONFESSIONS OF A TEENAGE NINJA!!!


The day grew darker as Naruto and the boys began their journey to find the criminals who kidnapped the girls.

"Hey Naruto!" Shikamaru yelled out. "We should set up camp soon, its getting dark now"

Naruto frowned. He didn't want to stop now not until he had Hinata again. but he stopped on tree branch and pulled a kunai. he threw it towards the ground as it stayed there.

"Ok we set up camp here! Neji! Lee! Firewood! Kiba! Shino! make tents! And me Sasuke and Shikamaru are to get food and water! is that clear?" Naruto commanded.

The boys just stared at Naruto. He actually sounded like a chunin.

"What is it?" Naruto asked.

"Nothing......you just sounded like a real leader there for a minute." Kiba responded.

Naruto rubbed the back of his head. "Well you can't expect me to be the same knucklehead forever don't ya?"

Kiba smiled. "About time if you ask me!"

Naruto smiled as the gang split up to do their assigned jobs. Naruto, Shikamaru, and Sasuke arrived at a lake a half mile away. Naruto then jumped in it and swam to the bottom. He held out his left hand and used his right to spin the chakra around. He had created a whirlpool which swallowed up the fish then he detonated the Rasengan and a explosion rang out as the fish flew out. Sasuke then took off his shirt to reveal a muscular chest and use it to catch the fish in it. And shikamaru got the water for the camp. "Man what a drag! I had to do the lame job" Shikamaru muttered to hisself.

Naruto, Sasuke, and Shikamaru returned thirty minutes later to find a big pile of firewood and tents made of branches and giant leafs.

"Ok Sasuke start the fire up so we can chow down" Naruto ordered.

Sasuke made a flurry of hand signs. "Fire style: Fireball Jutsu!" Sasuke then blew fire that hit the pile and it instantly lit up. Everyone then got situated as they sat by the fire.

Neji had his head between his knees thinking of Tenten. Naruto was up in the tree watching the moon thinking of Hinata. Shikamaru was laid back thinking of Temari. Sasuke was polishing his katana blade to try to not worry himself but he couldn't help it. Lee and Kiba played Rock Paper Scissors for the last of the fish. Kiba won but gave the fish to Akamaru. Shino watched a family of deer scurry through the woods and he let a tear drop but no one saw because of the shades he wore. Obviously no one was happy. Lee walked to a distraught Neji and sat down beside him.

"Lee i just don't know what to do if i lose Tenten" Neji confessed.

"It will be okay Neji, we will save her" Lee reassured his teammate.

"Thanks Lee. but i also worry for Lady Hinata as well" Neji added.

"Don't worry about a thing Neji!" Naruto said. "I'll bring Hinata back and i will risk my life for that!"

"Hmph....Naruto you still have better eyes than mine" Neji admitted.

Neji read Naruto's body language thanks to the Byakugan. "You must really like her? don't you?" Neji asked.

Naruto blushed a very light red and turned away to playfully poke his fingers. "Well.....maybe a little...."

Kiba chuckled. "Its nothing to be shy about Naruto, that girl has always liked you for as long as i can remember!"

Naruto decided to play stupid, he couldn't let them know he already knew that, and look even more stupid. "Really Kiba?"

"Of course! But i guess you were too dimwitted to notice at the time." Kiba replied.

"Well.....i didn't realize I liked her until just the other day when i walked her home, I felt at home with her, like i could tell her everything and she listened to every word! If it wasn't for her, I would have never passed the Chunin exams 5 years ago." Naruto confessed. "Every step of the way she was always there for me even though we were on different teams, she gave me hope, confidence, courage, and i tooked that to heart."

Kiba smirked.

~Flashback~

At the chunin preliminaries.

"Ok! Now for my new technique!" Naruto said as he formed a hand sign. "Shadow-Clone Jutsu!" Six clones popped up. the first clone ran and punched Kiba sending him flying, then the real Naruto jumped up off the first clone, the other four slided under kiba's floating body and kicked him up in unison saying "NA-RU-TO!!" Kiba went upwards towards the real naruto. "UZUMAKI BARRAGE!!!" Naruto kicked Kiba in the face with a his might sending Kiba falling fast to the ground face first.

"And the winner is.....Naruto Uzumaki!" Hayate said.

~Flashback ends~

Neji closed his eyes and sneaked a smile.

~Flashback~

At the arena during their chunin match.

Naruto placed his hands together and focused out the fox chakra as his injuries healed. "ARRGH!!!" Naruto screamed as the red chakra form a flamy aura.

"No way! his chakra points were pressed!" Neji thought to himself frightened.

"Here I come!" Naruto warned Neji.

Everyone at the arena was shocked at this display of power from Naruto. Naruto then charged Neji with kunai in hand. Neji pulled out one as well.

"When i become Hokage, I'll change the Hyuga Clan!" Naruto yelled.

"Rotation!!" Neji said as he spun a shield of chakra and Naruto's attack connected with it then a huge explosion! "KABOOM!"

The two bodies crashed into the ground. but only Neji stood up and walked over to Naruto's unconscious body. "Hmph...sorry failure! This is called destiny!" Neji proclaimed.

Suddenly the ground rumbled as Neji looked down but it was too late. Naruto dove from underground and uppercutted Neji in the face with all his might. The limp Naruto in the crater poofed away, a clone.

"And the winner is....Naruto Uzumaki!!" The proctor yelled out to the crowd.

The crowd celebrated and roared. Naruto felt the love he always wanted.

~Flashback ends~

Naruto bowed his head and tears ran down his cheeks. "If anything bad happens to Hinata, I could never live with myself!"

Sasuke then placed his hand on Naruto's shoulder. "Its ok Naruto we will save her and the girls"

"Gee....Thanks Sasuke" Naruto said as he wiped his face.

"Lets get to sleep everyone cause we leave first thing in the morning!" Sasuke ordered.

Everyone walked to their tents and went to sleep. Naruto threw water on the fire and went back to his branch and looked at the moon again.

Hinata at her cell watched the moon also, it reminded her of her kiss. Then simultaneously they both raise their hand as if to call out to each other's hearts. Naruto then closed his eyes and went to sleep as did Hinata.

~End of chapter 4~

Whew! that last one was a tearjeaker. anyway stay tuned for the next action-packed episode!

CHAPTER 5: STAR VS. LEAF! NARUTO LOSES IT!!
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