Thursday, December 13, 2007

NARUTO: THE EPIC ADVENTURE!!!! YEAH!!!!
Hey y'all! Im just having another great day! Im so ready for Christmas Break!!! And i know all my friends are too......whoops im rambling again heres my chapter 5 of my naruto epic or else my friends will break my legs!


CHAPTER 5: STAR VS. LEAF: NARUTO LOSES IT!!!


As Naruto slept, He felt a darkness in his soul. An uneasiness in the pit of his stomach, a familiar feeling.

"Hello, How's my favorite idiot doing?" A dark ominous voice spoke from the back of Naruto's head.

"What do you want now Fox?" Naruto responded.

"I just wanted to have a friendly chat with my friend, that's all" The Nine-Tailed Fox said.

Naruto then opened his eyes and stood up in the shallow waters of the corridor in his soul. He walked to the door with steam pouring out of it and opened it.

"Naruto Uzumaki!" The fox said

"What's up with you?" Naruto asked with a puzzled look.

"O...nothing....I've just made a decision" The fox proclaimed.

"What are you talking about Fox?" Naruto asked.

"When the fourth Hokage sealed me in your wretched body, he had the intention of us merging and working together and working as one. So i've decided since I'm forever cursed to be in here I'll take your power to the next level" The Fox explained.

"Wow! Thanks Fox! Maybe you're not so bad after all!" Naruto exclaimed.

"No problem kid" The Fox said.

Naruto then closed his eyes and opened them again to find him back to the real world excited that with more power he could save everyone faster!

Meanwhile the Fox chuckled. "Little does that knucklehead know that if he can't control the power perfectly, my personiality leaks into him. If i can't break the seal here, I'll just break his spirit! MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!"

Soon afterwards the gang headed off into the direction Akamaru headed following the scent of the rogue ninja. "Ruff Ruff!"

"Akamaru says the kidnappers are up ahead!" Kiba said as sniffed the air. "But i don't smell the girls with them at all."

"Well we might have to ask them politely where they are" Sasuke said.

"Yeah with my fist!" Naruto replied.

"Hold on Naruto and Sasuke, I have a plan" Shikamaru said.

"What's the plan then Shikamaru?" Naruto asked.

Shikamaru then explained the plan to everyone as they reached the rogue ninja camp. The ninja partied inside a huge tent celebrating their spoils.

"Good job men! Another mission accomplished!" A ninja yelled.

Meanwhile outside the tent, two ninja stood guard out of the tent. Then Naruto leaped into the bushes and made a hand sign. The guard on the right saw the bush move a little and he signaled his partner to come investigate. They both walked slowly to the bushes, kunai drawn and one of them said "Come on out!"

Then a girl in blonde pigtails wearing Naruto's black and orange jumpsuit stood out of the bushes. "Oh thank goodness you're here! I'm lost and wondering if you two big strong ninja can help me?" Naruto said in his sexy jutsu form.

The two ninja smiled and gave each other high fives at their great luck. "Sure we'll help you out ma'am! My name's Riku!" the ninja on the left said. "And i'm Kai!" the one the right said.


"Oh thank you!" Naruto smirked. "Suckers!"

The two were confused but it was too late, Sasuke was already behind them and hand chopped them unconscious.

"Good job Naruto! Now for the second part of the plan" Sasuke reminded Naruto.

Naruto and Sasuke made hand signs. "Transform!" They both turned into the two guards Riku and Kai. Shikamaru then popped out and hid the two bodies in the bushes as the disguised Naruto and Sasuke went inside the tent. They found ninja everywhere partying, drinking.

"These kidnapping missions get more easier than the last isn't that right Kai?" One passing ninja asked.

"Yeah they sure do!" Sasuke disguised as Kai said.

"What did you think of that pink haired girl Riku? A hot piece of ass isn't she? Too bac she has a big forehead though" Another passing ninja said.

Naruto disguised as Riku didn't respond. The two just kept walking toward an large individual. He was 7 feet tall with muscles and black spiky hair like blades.

"He must be the leader!" Naruto whispered to Sasuke.

"Yeah no kidding! but he's nothing we can't handle!" Sasuke whispered back.

"Yo boss!" Sasuke yelled to the man.

The man was playing poker with the other ninja smoking a cigar, but he didn't respond.

"Boss!" Sasuke yelled again.

"What!" a different individual stood up. a toned yet scrawny man.

"That's the leader! He's so small!" Naruto said to himself.

"What is it Kai!" The leader said.

"Umm....Can someone else guard the front? I mean no one is going to attack us" Sasuke in disguise said.

"Fine, you two come play poker with us." The leader proposed.

"Sure!" Naruto in disguise said.

The two walked up and sat down and played poker. Sasuke then saw the bandage of the big guy's arm like someone scratched him. "Where did you get that from?"

"Some girl with puffs in her scratched me bad but then i took control of the situation." The big guy responded.

Naruto knew he was talking about Tenten, but kept playing.

"Hey how was that purple haired girl? a nice piece of ass huh?" the leader asked.

That sure got Naruto's attention.

"Yeah of course! I would love to hit that anytime!" Other ninja agreed. Then everyone started to talk about the girls and disrespecting them. Naruto was getting angry. The leader noticed the tension.

"How's your hand do you hold or fold?" The leader asked.

"I fold" Naruto responded annoyed.

"Say, how's your girlfriend Riku?" The leader asked another question.

"She's alright" Naruto said.

The leader then made a signal to the big guy. Then they both stood up. The big guy made the first move and grabbed sasuke by the neck.

"You don't have a girlfriend! Now tell me who you are or your friend gets it!" The leader yelled. All the ninja looked at the fueding ninja at the poker table.

"Ok you got me" Naruto said as he poofed back into his original form as did Sasuke. "But that doesn't mean you can beat me!!!" Naruto threw a punch and the leader ducked.

The leader made a hand sign. "Flash Jutsu!" Suddenly a flash of light hit Naruto square in the eyes. Naruto growled in pain as he grabbed his eyes "What is this!" Naruto cried out. Then the leader punched him in the stomach and kicked him in the face sending flying into the tables.

"Naruto!" Sasuke yelled. Then Sasuke took out a kunai.

"What are you going to do with that little man!" The big guy yelled.

"This!" Sasuke yelled out as he stabbed the big guy in the bandaged area. The big guy let go of Sasuke.

"AWWWW FUCK!!!" He cried out. "You will pay for that!"

"Bring it on!" Sasuke said as he activated the Sharingan.

The big man and other ninja charged Sasuke. "LEAF HURRICANE!!" A voice cried out as he kicked away the charging ninja.

"Lee? Where's Shikamaru and the others?" Sasuke asked.

"Here we are!" Said Kiba holding a ninja in his hands then he dropped him on the ground. More ninja charged Kiba.

"HYAA!" Neji yelled out as he punched them back.
Even more came. But then stopped cold in their tracks. they all looked over next to Neji. Shikamaru had them in the Shadow possession jutsu. Then more jumped over the frozen bodies. Shino then raised his hands and bugs came out of his jacket and went flying towards the airborn ninja and knocked them away.

"Ok you ready Akamaru!" Kiba yelled as he threw up a food pill then Akamaru jumped up and ate it and his fur turned red. Kiba made a hand sign. "Beast Mimicry!" Kiba's nails grew longer as Akamaru transformed into Kiba's transformed state. The two pushed off each other and charged the ninja. "Fang over Fang!" they pummeled the last of the ninja until only the leader and big guy stood. "Only two are left! Lets get them Akamaru!" Kiba said but Neji put his hand in front of Kiba to stop him. "Look over there!" Neji said.

Red chakra poured outta Naruto's laying body. It covered him as it made fox ears and two tails. Suddenly his eyes opened and showed a demonic look as it turned blood red. His wounds healed and his nails grew longer as he stood on a four legs position. "Where are they" Naruto said in a demonic voice.

"Like we will tell you!" The big guy said. That was a mistake to make.

Naruto then stared at the big guy then instantly disappeared in a puff of smoke then reappeared in big guy's face and clenched his fist as it glowed and then punched the big guy in the face breaking it and sending him flying into some trees breaking them in half. "I said.....where are they!!!!!" Naruto yelled as his eyes glowed at the leader.

The leader pissed his pants in fear. He was shaking real bad. Naruto held out his left hand and a flaming red Rasengan appeared as he walked towards the leader. "I'm not going to repeat myself........where the fuck are they!!!!!!!!!!" The leader stepped back and tripped over the chair. He was hyperventilating in fear. Naruto grabbed him with his right and forced him to stare into his eyes glowing ever so red.

"Ok ok! there are at Mizuke Village 50 miles east of here! Just please don't kill me!" The leader cried out in fear.

"And why should I!! Scum like you don't deserve to live!" Naruto said as he geared his Rasengan to attack but Sasuke grabbed his arm.

"Naruto calm down! We got what we need! Forget him!" Sasuke yelled.

Naruto's Rasengan dissolved as he pulled his arm away from Sasuke and grabbed his head in pain. "AAAHH!!!!" Naruto growled. "My head! My head!" Memories of his horrible childhood entered his mind.

"Yes Yes! Use that hatred and kill him! The Fox ordered.

"No No No!" Naruto refused. "Do it!!" The Fox yelled.

"NOOOO!!!!!!" Naruto said as the fox chakra slowly dissapeared. Once it was all gone his eyes changed back to normal and he passed out.

"What the hell was that?" Kiba asked in fear.

"It was the same chakra from before at the Chunin Exams" Neji replies.

"Whatever it is it scared the hell outta Akamaru!" Kiba cried out.

The rest were scared too. That wasn't Naruto at all.

"Well he's okay now." Sasuke said as he lifted up Naruto's unconscious body and put him on his back. "We will ask him later when he wakes up"

"Well what if he turns back into that thing and kills us all!" Kiba asked.

"Don't worry Kiba! If i know Naruto i know that would never hurt his friends." Sasuke reassured everyone.

"Mizuke Village is where we head now....50 miles east right?" Shikamaru asked the leader but he was gone out the back way.

"I'm home free from that monster!" The leader said. but he ran into Lee who was waiting for him.

"And where do you think you're going?" Lee said.

The leader took a shuriken and threw it at Lee but missed as Lee ran and punched the man in the stomach knocking him out.

Later the gang tied up all the ninja and left. "We'll be back for you guys later!" Kiba shouted out.

Naruto still passed out on Sasuke's back dreamt of his memories. He saw a little boy crying and soon realized it was him. "Why do they all hate me" Little Naruto said. Naruto then bowed his head. Little Naruto's shadow formed the fox and it swallowed up Naruto in darkness. "Why do they all hate me" Little Naruto said again. He wiped his eyes and they glowed red. "Cause i'm the Nine-Tailed Fox!!!!" Little Naruto said in a demonic voice as he laughed a evil laugh. Then darkness.

~End of chapter 5~

Man that was exciting! Stay tuned for tomorrow's episode.

CHAPTER 6: NARUTO'S CURSE!



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