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Sunday, August 13, 2006


   story I'm doing
The Waiting Room
A Murder Flick Finally Told

CHAPTER ONE: On the Way

Tory Kepper had just left his desk. He was on his way to the hospital, to be examined after feeling as though he was stabbed in the stomach. “I don’t think I’ll need these papers, so I’ll leave them here for Vikki to file.” He said in a tired voice. After dropping off the papers on his desk, he headed out to the hospital. He was glad to see that his Mini Cooper was still there, gleaming in the sunlight, but not for long.

He got into his brand new car, taking in a long whiff of the new car smell. He started the car, BBBRRM BRRM was the sound. A new car. He pulled out of the parking lot, and headed onto the highway. He needed to get to the hospital, for the pain in his stomach grew worse each second. While he was driving, he could have sworn he heard someone say his name, and it sounded almost as though the person was right next to him, just sitting there in the passenger’s seat.

He tried to ignore the voice, but it kept saying his name. When he finally was fed up, he told it to stop. The voice started fading away, a mere whisper now. “Some prank, the kid doesn’t even know how to keep the voice secretive!” he yelled in his new car. As he sped up, the voice began to speak again, this time almost as though it were telling a story, or perhaps trying to have a good long conversation with him to stop him from being on his way to the hospital of which he was half-way to.

The voice grew louder this time, and it wasn’t only saying his name, it was also saying the name of his sister and mother. What was it that seemed to be with him at the time, trying to communicate with him in a time that he needed to get along somewhere? He didn’t care, he was busy worrying about how much longer it would take him to arrive at the hospital. The voice suddenly stopped saying the names of his sister and mother, and began to fade away again. As he drove, he saw a car at the side of the road, and pulled over. When he looked through the window, what he saw was not a family speaking to each other and getting on each other’s nerves, but blood on windows and only two people inside of the car.

He got out of his car to see what had happened. When he got to the car, the two people he had seen were gone!

(I'm still typing it,so you'll have to wait for the rest...)
~TSU~

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