Sunday, September 24, 2006

chapters 3-4 combined
"i dident have time to do anything to it i just typed it fast and dident get to edit it cuz critter is telling me to put it up faster on the phone so here it is just edit it in your heads :/"

Hi!!! this is mewmewichigo and I just edited it for him. All credit for editing goes to me! ^^

Chapter 3+4-Why Me

I stand still for a moment then follow him. Dead bodies every where, all my friends and family. I feel myself start to cry, but force myself to hold it inside. I see my brother in the distance and start to walk over to him. As I get closer, I see its not him but one of the men from the church. He puts his hand out slowly and mutters something under his breath. A ball of swirling darkness appears and forms the head of a dog it then lunches out of his hand. Huge teeth ready to tear me apart. I feel a force on my shoulder and am pushed aside. I twist my body to see who pushed me. It’s my brother. The dog shape plows through him, ripping him apart. Then just as soon as it was created it, disappears. My brother’s hand falls to the ground, landing in a pool of his own blood, his fingers still twitching. I feel myself about to throw up, but manage to hold it back. I turn to the man, he points a finger at me and vanishes. This never happened. Why was it happing now? I feel my body start to shake uncontrollably, then I make myself stop. I hear crying. Turning around I see a girl no younger then me.
“What’s happing?” she asks quietly, still crying. Before I can answer a huge ball of fire blows into the building behind her. I spin around fast. It is the man again, hand out fire ball forming. I jump to my feet and ready my sword.
“Stay behind me, I’ll protect you until I find out what’s going on,” I promise. The fire ball flies out from his hand and speeds forward straight for me. Timing it perfectly I hit it with my sword but it’s to strong and it blows my sword backwards, disintegrating it. Then I look back up, another ball of fire closing in on me fast. I turn, grab the girl, and jump sideways dodging it this time. When I look up, two are hurdling towards me one a little ahead of the other. The first one hits on the right and we go flying into the other. I grab the girl once more and spin her in front of me, taking the attack in the back but saving her. Pain shoots throughout my body as we hit the ground. I stand up and summon my sword again. I charge blindly at the man. He chuckles and shoots another fire ball at me. This one is the biggest yet. It hits directly in front of me, blowing me backwards. I hit the ground but keep rolling back. I try to stand, but fall on my hands and knees. Looking at the ground I see how much I am bleeding, then I black out.

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wow
wow every year the world gets more and more lame :/ i dont think it can get any more retarted i got banned from all the dances for giving my Gf a hug omg i g2g my mom is yelling at me
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Thursday, September 14, 2006

Chapter 2
Chapter 2-Reliving Memories

Suddenly I find myself in a barracks cafeteria with my brother sitting next to me. His name is Kensei I remember this day it is the beginning of the war between the soul users and humans. Soul users are humans who can shape there souls into weapons. This war should have never happened many people have died who would have lived much longer if this war had never happened.
Kensei calls to me: Come on Fujio its time to go, the last battle is about to start the fate our people is about to be decided. Just as he finishes his last word 5 arrows fly through the walls hitting five people killing them instantly. As there bodies hit the floor time seems to slow down and without any warning a sword appears in my right hand. The sword is a black broad sword and pulsing with electricity. 2 people rush through the door and draw there swords. One ninja jumps through the window and starts throwing shurikans at me. I instantly spin and my left hand fly’s out caching them all, I had almost forgot how good my reflexes where. I don’t know what’s happening or why I’m reliving my life, but I start throwing them back, hitting both his hands while he is blinded by pain. I jump up bringing my sword down hard, cutting him in two. I stop, shocked at what I just did. I turn to see my brother has already killed both the other men. He turns and looks at me, then without saying anything walks outside. (I dont think its as good as the first)


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Tuesday, September 12, 2006

hope you like it be honest need to know what to change
Soul
Chapter 1-Awakaning
Darkness surrounds me everywhere, then in one over whelming flash existents floods back to me. I am in a church I can not recall memories of anything. I try to move, but don’t have the strength. There are people filling every seat. They are in black hoods which are masking there faces. They are chanting something inhuman it is getting louder and louder and faster and faster, until I feel like my head is going to explode.
Then all at once, it stops, I look to see what is happening all the people are gone. Only three remain and are standing in the middle isle of the church. They take one synchronized step, as soon as there feet hit the floor, all my memories start flooding back to me. My name is Fujia I am 17 years old. I have been dragged into a war I did not wan to fight Images start flashing in my head of blood, sweat and tears. Then they all stop and as these memories settle in my mind, tears fill my eyes and I don’t know why. A great sorrow fills me. It feels as if I have lost someone dear to me. They take another step more memories; more sorrow fills my mind this time. I see a demonic looking shadow then a flash and it has changed into a more human figure. With every step they take more memories come rushing back to me. They seem to be forming the movie of my life with each step. Every time the memories it get longer, every step they take seems to move them no farther towards me, yet no farther away. Pieces of the room start to disappear until I am in a dark void. All my memories seem to have come back. I am still not able to move or scream like I have wanted to for what seems to have been hours.
More Soon
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Saturday, September 9, 2006

my bro
i went to my bro's hous last weekend and me him and my uncle who is 24 like my bro went to a store and my brother took someone elses cart whene he wuzent paying atention so he put it back and we got food then whene we where leaving there wuz an old lady standing by the door and my brother wuz joking around and said he wuz going to hit her with his cart then whene we left the car next to us had all the stuff in it the cart he took b4 had in it then the old lady he wuz saying he wuz going to hit with his cart got in the car so my brother thoght it wuz weird so he followed her and she went to another store and he parked next to her and she thoght we where going to rob her car it wuz funny you just had to be there
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Wednesday, September 6, 2006

Sorry
Sorry for not posting in a while, I've been busy with school and stuff. I've started writing a story, so I've decided to post it on MyO. I'll post it in chapters everytime I finish one. I just need your help with one decision: Who should win? Good or Evil? That's it for now.
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Monday, August 28, 2006

   moving
YAY im not moving i get to stay her with everyone aand i forgot what else i wuz going to say.......:/
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$$
spent my money on the new final fantasy and the new elder scrolls they are both awsome
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Friday, August 25, 2006

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sorry for not posting yesterday i wuz on the phone all day one of the things i couldent do at my grandparents anyway my mom is making me do 3 hours of work for her every day untill school starts it sucks but good news is my best freind who i have known since kindergarding is coming over my house for the weekend :D
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Wednesday, August 23, 2006

New Member
you should all go to darkdragon1234's site he is my freind and a new member i just figured he could use some awsome freinds like you guys
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