Friday, September 1, 2006

Friday, more to the story
ok here is another part of my story. please leave your opinion

In the vast forest of valtana, live an 18 year old boy, Vahn, and his 13 year old sister, Shaya. Vahn is quite tall and has a normal build for his height. He has black hair, and his eyes are quite unique, they are multi colored. His left eye is red, green, yellow, and black. His right eye is blue, brown, white, and silver. Shaya is about half of Vahn’s height, but she is still growing. She has a normal build for a 13 year old girl. Her hair is light brown, and here eyes are green. They have there own little tree house that they both live in. Ran is waiting in a tree for a carriage that looks to be very profitable. He gets ready to ambush the carriage. But it is ambushed first by three other bandits. He hears the woman in the carriage scream.

Vahn Damn it all. That was my target.
Woman SOMEONE HELP US!!!
Bandit Shut your mouth women
Vahn Hmm….maybe there will be a reward for helping her.

Vahn jumps out of the tree and slashes at the head of one of the bandits, with his swallow, killing him. The other two ran away in fear thinking they were out matched.

Woman oh thank you young man. What ever can I do to repay you?

Vahn *ignoring the lady* Wow that was a lucky shot. I’ve never done that before. HA HA HA wow they must have been scared watching there friends head get chopped off.

Woman (was that an accident? Him killing that bandit)

Vahn Oh sorry about that lady. Are you okay?

Noble man *comes out of the carriage.* why thank you young man you have done a great debt to us this day. Do you require anything I can get it for you.

Vahn (aw I hate people like him thinking they own everything) no old man nothing you can give me anyway. I bid you farewell *runs into the forest*

Vahn runs threw the trees. He stops running when he comes to a clearing in the forest. There is a little rustle in the busses. He quietly goes over to the bush and pulls the bush back

and to pull every anime trick in the book im gonna leave it hanging untill monday
Muhahahahahahaha suffer

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