Thursday, September 1, 2005

yet another question about my story
the ghoul thing being different then usual. yeah, im wierd i know, i just like calling a ghoul what a vampire makes u if it doesnt kill u, but doesnt turn u into a vampire. so u still rot, but just very slowly. if a ghoul has not impressed their master by the time they are about to completely rot away, they simply die for real. but if they were really cool they finally become a vampire!!!! but wouldnt it just be better to be a vampire from the start instead of doing all that ghoul crap? yeah it would! but saygram is a loser so he has to be a ghoul first lol.
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Tuesday, August 30, 2005

why is blanco still healig?
ok, blanco is a werecreature. in my world, when a were creature is hurt they can heal almost instantly in their animal form. the only thing that stops this is silver. to heal from a silver wound they have to switch to human form. unfortunately for them they heal alot slower in human form a lot slower. its still faster than a normal person, but its taking blanco months to heal his lopped off arm. thats why hes still healing. i will do my best to answer all the questions u guys ask me about my stories.
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part eleven, not twice as much as seven
“So the young pup hasn’t killed himself, yet. That is shocking. I figured the loss of his latest friend would surely drive him over the edge. Not that it truly matters. This spell is almost done. Now that the king is under my control, and the map and Eve are in my possession, all will go well. It’s only a matter of time before the entire world knows the name, Saygram.” Behind him, Eve’s head drooped from exhaustion. Her body drained from being the focal point of a spell for months. “The girl isn’t even awake any more. Not that it matters. Her dread parents will never have the Dark Falcon. And as long as they don’t have it, I will be the only one capable of casting the spell. I think it’s very funny that this girl wanted to find the statue as well. She had no idea that to use it, she would have to kill herself. It is not as if there are many half-vampire, half-succubus in the world. Hehe.” A shadow moved in the corner. “Who’s there?” His mind reached out to attack whomever it was. Saygram felt that mercy was very overrated.
“I’m not sure you want to find my mind, but if you insist.” A darkness reached back across the connection Saygram had formed and touched his mind.
“Ahhhh! Nexto-Samas!,” and a fireball shot from Saygram’s hands and then flashed harmlessly away on the shadowy figure approaching him.
“The advantage a vampire has over all other forms of life, if you can call yourselves that, is that vampires actually have power. Unfortunately for you, you do not have that one thing. So now you will belong to me. I can’t believe I’ve come down to using you as my ghoul.”
As it got closer, Saygram began to have a hard time breathing. The room began to swim, and blood ran from his nose. “You decided to use my daughter as a toy, I will have to do the same to you.” Its hand reached out, covered in wisps of blackness, and wrapped around his throat. Where it touched, the flesh went cold and numb, and then simply went away.
“Ggrjaiehahehe,” was all Saygram could say as his throat was corroded away. Then the fangs sank in, and suddenly Saygram felt fine. The one odd thing being that his point of view was of his own headless body. “I’m dead?”
“No. A ghoul. My ghoul to be exact. Now stand up. I have some animals I would like you to hunt for me.” The shadow said this as it glided over to the unmoving form of Eve. The restraints on her body simply fell off and allowed her to fall forward. The darkness did not catch her physically, but she was stopped from hitting the ground. “The ones you’re going to kill are two weres. I believe you already know them well. So go now.” Saygram found himself unable to disobey.
“Yes ,Master,” and with that he picked up his head and left.

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Sunday, August 28, 2005

part ten, my name is sven!
“Hey ,Stumpy! ,” the oversized idiot slapped him hard on the back. “Where did the rest of your arm go. I see it goes down to your elbow, and then it just stops!” His remarks met with a roar of laughter from the rest of the bar.
You know I gave up looking pretty fast. I guess I’ve just given up on finding a home. Hehhahahhae. Like I’m ever going to have a home. A true home. Not just some place I pay for.
“Answer me ,Stumpy! I asked you a question. Where’s the rest of your arm?”
“Get your hand off of me. If you ever touch me again, I’ll eat you alive,” the bottle went back to his lips.
Another deafening peel of laughter. “You’re going to eat me? With what?”
Blanco smiled and laughed quietly. “I’m not just going to eat you, I’m going to eat everyone in this bar. Maybe the town if I feel like it.”
A slapping sound rang through the air. Blanco turned, and gave a different smile. Silence feel like a weight in the room. The three legged wolf jumped from one person to the other, killing them with one bite. An old woman passing by heard the screams. “Those ruffians. Always making so much racket. One day they’ll get theirs. You wait and see, they’ll get theirs.”
A blood covered man walked out of the bar.
It’s always so hard to find clothes that aren’t covered in blood after a kill. I mean, even though I took mine off, the blood just came off on me any way. There’s just no winning in times like this.
He walked out of town.

.....

Miles and miles away, Eve was alone in the darkest place on Earth.

.....

Slap. “You idiots! I told you if you slapped me again-oh. It’s just you, Vaughn,” Blanco’s head hit the forest floor again.
“Can I ask why you refuse to walk around in wolf form? Or why you insist on killing random drunks? Not that many people seem to care. But in Fionna you killed a statesmen celebrating his appointment. They want you dead for that. And are you still going by Blanco? Not that it matters. Kraken isn’t your real name either. You know you never told me your true name.”
“To answer your first question, it is because, as you already know, no were heals from a silver inflected wound in their alternate form. Only a human form can heal from that.”
“And the second question?”
“I don’t know.”
“You don’t know your real name?”
“I don’t know my true name. The pack you first found me with wasn’t my true family. They found me in the wreckage of my village. Some one had burned it to the ground, and taken all of the bodies with them. And you can ask me ‘How do you know they’re dead if they were taken away?’ Everywhere. The blood was everywhere. Years after they found me, the other pups would taunt me. Saying they could still smell the blood of my family on my fur. And then it happened again. But you know about this time already. It was worse. I had the strength to fight, but I wasn’t even there. So when I met Eve. I promised myself, that I would always protect her. And even though I was there this time, even though I killed the enemy, the one who was trying to hurt her, I still couldn’t protect her.”
“Where did you bury her?”
“Huh?,” Blanco stared unbelievingly at his friend, sitting up on his elbows.
“Well. You obviously know she’s dead, too. Or you would be out there right now looking for her. So where did you bury this woman that you love so much?”
“There was no body.”
“So then it was like your first pack, you found blood everywhere. And you know this may be out of line for me to say, but why in the name of Crom did they have to tell you about the blood? That seems pretty cold to me.”
“You were born under the moon of Crom?”
“Yeah. You?”
“Ur.”
“Ouch. Well that explains that. Any way. You’re coming with me.”
“Why?”
“I know you didn’t follow my advice about going to someone who could tell you about our totems. So we’re going to do that right now. Ok.” When Blanco, or whatever his name is, didn’t move Vaughn dragged him through the forest. They went like this for about three weeks. Fun.


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hey guys
it could be a few days before i can post on anyones site again. im not even really going to have the time to post on my own. im gonna try to work two or three jobs while going to college, so yeah. sorry again, buh bye.
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Saturday, August 27, 2005

would u..
would u guys like to see a full metal alchemist fan fic? i think ill call the main character the Templar Alchemist. all hes really good at is making different weapons out of his surroundings and then fighting with them. his opponent would be an alchemist gone crazy. i dont know what he would use, but i was thinking he could be called TheTraitor. id cut off the Alchemist part of his name cuz everyone hates his guts and wouldnt give him the respect of being called an alchemist.
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part nine, its more than fine!!
“So where do we go now?,” asked Blanco once they were a safe distance from the town.
“How should I know?!?,” snapped Eve.
“The map.”
She stared at him and said “,You are so clueless it’s sad.” Then she just started to walk. Blanco shed his clothes, shifted, and then shot between her legs to carry her. She patted his head and said “,Good boy ,Blanco, good boy.” With this encouragement he picked up the pace.
“Hello there!”
Blanco ignored the male voice, but Eve instinctively turned to it. “Go to it, I’m hungry.” Blanco whimpered. “I’m sorry I can’t make love to you. But it’s only because I love you that I don’t suck your soul as well as your penis. Now come on, I’ll take his blood and his soul quickly. Please.” He turned and began to walk towards the newcomer.
I wish she would let me decide what was best for me. Maybe I consider my soul fair trade for being her lover. Heck! Do I even have a soul, I’m not human. And here comes this idiot. He thinks he’s the greatest thing to happen to women I bet, with his shining armor and his really big horse. The fool has no idea what is about to happen to him. Hehe.
“Well you are an odd sight,” he proclaimed loudly as he rode up on his horse.
“I hope your not hoping to win my heart with a line like that.”
“I simply mean that I have never once seen a goddess riding on a dog before.” Blanco growled and bared his fangs at the word dog.
I’ll show you who the dog is.
“Bad boy ,Blanco. He’s just being friendly. I’m sorry. He’s very loyal and sometimes too protective.” She shot daggers at him with her eyes.
Fine, ignore the fact that he just insulted me. Well, she is going to kill him. I guess that’ll be enough.
“Loyalty should always be rewarded with kindness. To be honest, I was hoping you would reward me today for the loyalty I would show you tomorrow.”
“Something tells me the reward you want would be expected tonight and not today.”
He smiled while leaning towards. “Why wait till tonight?”
That’s the best you can do. I should kill you myself just for saying something as stupid as that.
“Ok.” And with that she was off of Blanco and riding in front of the “white knight.” His arms wrapped around her.
I know she has to eat, but does she have to eat such garbage. And now what am I going to do. You know she didn’t say I was allowed to follow at a distance. If she sees me, I’ll just say that I was going to give her a ride when she was done with her food. I hope her mother told her it was wrong to play with her food. Oh yeah, her mother didn’t tell her any thing. Damn it.
They soon arrived a small cabin in the middle of the forest. “Isn’t it perfect?” She stared, frowning with one eyebrow raised in disbelief.
“It’s.....quaint,” and she giggled infectiously. She turned and kissed him.
HEY! She never kissed me. And she can’t tell me that kissing is enough to take your soul! Or is it? Don’t actually know now that I think about it. I give up.
By now he was carrying her in the door, both of them smiling. The door shut, and he could see nothing going on within the dark cabin.
I could always sneak up to the window to...to what? Watch someone else take what I want? No. I’ll just stay here. It’s not as if I have any where else to go. Home died years ago.
Inside the cabin Eve was already pining the white knight to the bed, both of them completely nude. “Now just enjoy it while I...nibble your neck a little okay , Love.”
“I think not vampire. Or succubus. Or whatever you like to call yourself.” She stopped dead, letting her senses scan the room around her one more time, checking for other possible enemies.
“You do realize that we are alone, and you have no way of defending yourself, your dead. No. You’re more than dead. I’m not just going to take your blood. I’m going to take your soul. And then I’m going to turn you into my ghoul servant so you can spend the next thousand years following me around while you slowly rot away to the unholy dust you came from!” And then she sank her fangs into his neck while thrusting her hips to take his soul. The tattoos on her body began to glow as the blood flowed into her. And then her eyes opened wide with surprise. Her fangs pulled away from his neck, and the blood that welled out of the wound was a bright orange. His head turned, and his eyes had gone totally white.
“You do realize that we are alone, and you have no way of defending yourself. Oh wait, your dog!” And with that he threw the now choking Eve off of himself and lunged out the door with a sword made of silver. “DOG!! Come here and die with your master!”
“Bla-Blanco!! Run!,” was all she could get out before the darkness overtook her.
Run! You have to be kidding me. I’m going to tear him apart. And yes I know that the sword is silver, but I don’t care. Blood is going to be on the ground today, and it’s going to be his.
With that Blanco was jumping at his throat, not caring about the incoming sword. His left foreleg was removed with one swipe, but his teeth caught firmly around the skull of his opponent.
Now you’re going to die.
A pleasing cracking sound met Blanco’s ears as his teeth meshed together with the flesh of his enemy. Shards of skull went flying through the air, and Blanco gave the bloodiest smile of his life.
Mess with someone I love, and you end up dead. But I guess you get that already. Hehahehahehahe!
Blanco wobbled oddly on his three remaining legs into the cabin, ignoring the twitching headless form.
There’s no one here? How is that possible?

Once he had a human mouth he started to scream at the top of his lungs. “EVE!!! EVE WHERE ARE YOU!?!!? DAMN IT!! ANSWER ME, EVE! EVEEEE!!!” He spent the rest of the month wandering through the woods looking for her. He spent the six months after that in a bar.

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Friday, August 26, 2005

the end is especially right!

YOU ARE ... MYSTERIOUS HERO! (Squall Leonhart from
FFVIII [ff8])


What Kind of Anime Character Are You?
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u notice all the quiz pics are of girls lol

What color are you? (Anime Pictures)
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scary darkness oooOOOooOOooOoooOo

your the dark card....a dark sense of humour and
quite mysterious to other people...but you have
a caring side...wohooo dark card looks cool
huh?! you can control the dark bwahahaha!!


What Clow Card are u? :)
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