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Thursday, July 29, 2004


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I have decided that my stories should have more authentic aspects. I want the person who reads it to feel as if they are there with Vicious 2 when he is getting his ass beat. And I want the to also feel as if they are using more than one of their senses, i want them to smell the tension, feel it! so i have decided to put lyrics into my story, and i am working on description as well along with more awareness of surroundings, thanks to selena, i have decided to put lyrics in. she points things out so well. I might release the follow up to the phases tomorrow, or maybe tonight, i dont know,, it depends on what selena says. oh yeah, she told me not to do this, but i am a bad ass, if you like my writing, then you will love Selena's. She is working on a story now, but i am not sure when it will be done, but be sure to check that out. she is a great writer, she writes like luminae, plenty of description, and alot of things going on at the same time, i figure if you have those two components, you have mastered writing, someting that i have yet to do, but maybe i will learn to. Until I post the next story, see you later. I am now, going to focus in on writing a song, I might have to ask Tae, she writes songs for fun, and for her age, she does great work. Later, I hope to talk to some of you soon.

-The Fucking King of Lemons

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