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Sunday, May 27, 2007


one of my more crappier stories
Okay this is one of my lesser stories..

Chapter 1: Ties Broken

While waiting in the forest of death for night to fall, Haku Sasuke, Sakura, Naruto and Shadow are talking about how to go about getting the scrolls from the other teams. “…what if we waited till like they got really tired and couldn’t fight, wouldn’t that work?” Naruto asked while fidgeting where he was sitting at. “..You loser, we are going to wait till the right time….but not until its completely dark, if we did that we’d never be able to see where we’re going.” Sasuke says while hitting naruto in the back of the head. Haku and shadow start to move ahead to be look outs for their squad. “hey Haku, why do you fight now, like what keeps you fighting?” Shadow asks while resting against a tree. “..Ummm, well I guess I fight for Jill and to keep her safe, but I’m also fighting to become as strong as you.” Haku says while taking a spot next to shadow. Looking at Haku slightly surprised, shadow just laughs to himself. “Haku, you wouldn’t last through half the hell I went through to get to my strength” He says while leavening to go up farther ahead. Off with shkimaru Ino Choji and Glenn, Glenn is getting nervous and pissed about having to face off against Shadow. “Hey Glenn what’s with you, not many teams are gonna bother with us” Shikamaru says while sitting around a little fire with the others. “Don’t worry about it shikamaru, It’s nothing.” Glenn says while getting up and walking into the forest. “.GLENN WAIT, WHERE ARE YOU GOING!!?” Ino asks getting a little worried. “I’m going to go find another heaven and earth scroll so we can get to the tower already.” Glenn responds as he disappears from his teams sight. “He’s a weird kid *chomp* Wonder why Asuma Sensi let him on our team?” Choji says while eating some berries he found. Off somewhere in the middle of the forest Glenn comes upon Shadow walking around alone, trying to find food for his squad. *Thank god I asked Kanna for her silver knifes….its going to make killing Dad a lot easier* Glenn thinks to himself. “Glenn, I know your up there. I can read minds remember?” Shadow says while turning to face his son. Glenn jumps down from the tree he’s in and has one of the knifes out and ready to attack. Shadow jus looks at Glenn, not really bothering to take up a fighting stance. “Finally, I found you dad….hope your ready for me to prove you wrong.” Glenn says hate dripping from every word. Sighing and turning to actually face him, shadow draws one of his knifes. “Glenn, what’s it goanna take for you to realize you can’t beat me?” Shadow asks and finally takes a light fighting stance. “LIKE I CARE!!!!” Glenn yells while rushing Shadow. Taking up a stronger stance, Shadow counters Glenn’s first thrust of his knife and catches his hand before he has a chance to make the second attack. Flipping Glenn over his shoulder, Shadow pins him down by the neck with his boot. “LISTEN TO ME YOU IDIOT, I DON’T WANT TO FIGHT YOU. YOU GOT THAT!!?” Shadow says while trying to contain his anger on a safe level. Glenn in the meantime is struggling in vain to get free from under his dads weight and to be able to breathe too. Suddenly Jade drops in on the 2 of the boys getting Shadow off of Glenn. “SHADOW, WHATS WRONG WITH YOU, HES YOUR SON!!” Jade yells while helping Glenn recover. “Hmp, he’s the one who came after me Jade, all I was doing was showing him that he wasn’t at the right level to take me on.” Shadow says while walking off towards his squad again. “DON’T YOU WALK AWAY FROM ME…YOU DIDN’T HAVE TO SHOW HIM THAT HE WASENT READY IN SUCH A ROUGH WAY!!” Jade continues to yell. All Shadow does is shrug and continue walking, holding the scrolls that him and his squad need to get into the tower. “..H-h-he….r-really…..h-h-hates….me…doesn’t….h-he?” Glenn asks before passing out.

Chapter 1 end

Kneeling over Glenn to make sure he’s alright, Jade is trying to contain her anger. *This isn’t like him, Shadows never shown that much hate towards anyone except neo* Jade thinks to herself while picking Glenn up and taking him back to the ship. Later on in the Tower Sasuke and his squad finally make it, their the second team there. “So ummm s-s-should we open the scrolls now…or not?” Naruto asks while looking around for gaara and his team. “Yes idiot, we have to to figure out what to do next” Sasuke says while takeing one of the scrolls from shadow. “So this is it huh,…whatever.” Shadow says while opening the scroll hes holding. As Sasuke and Shadow open the scrolls smoke and a strange buldge appear on the scrolls. “IT’S A SUMMONING JUTSU, GET RID OF THEM!!” Sasuke yells once he figures it out and throws the scroll, Shadow does the same. Smoke fills the room then disappears and where the scrolls where kakashi is now standing in their place. “Well you guys made it here faster than the last squad I had, by the way shadow, you need to learn how to contain your anger.” Kakashi says never looking up from his book. “Why don’t you just keep out of what I do and focus on your job, okay kakashi?” Shadow asks with a little harshness behind his voice. Off on the ship, Glenn is starting to wake up again. “Hey there pup, how you feeling?” Jade asks while holding a wet cloth to glenns forehead. “W-w-…where….am….i?” Glenn asks his head still buzzing somewhat. Jade smiles at glenn with some sympathy behind it. “Your somewhere safe for now pup….shadow wont come after you again…for now” Jade says while wetting the cloth again. Glenn just keeps trying to get his eyes to focus. “Just relax Glenn, take your time trying to open them.” Jade says while trying to figure out what caused all the hate shadow had in him to come out on Glenn. “..Can…you….t-t-t-take….me….back to…..the academy…..mom?” Glenn asks weakly. Jade looks at Glenn with surprise in her eyes “You think you can continue with the test glenn?” Jade asks with a little worry behind her voice. “Y-y-y-yea mom..i can…continue……dad wont keep me down.” Glenn says while smiling weakly at jade. Back at the tower Glenns squad finally gets there, their like almost the last ones to arrive. “..*pant pant pant*…where…..the…..hell…is….glenn?” Shikamaru asks while trying to catch his breath. “Who knows but when I see him again im gonna murder him!!” Ino says already back to her bitchy self. Choji had passed out from all the running and had to be carried by shikamaru, one of the reasons he was pissed off. Out of nowhere glenn appears right next to ino. “Hey guys sorry im late.” Glenn says with a slight smile on his face. Ino and Shikamaru just about jump down Glenns throat with everything they’re yelling at him. “Geez, calm down guys….we’re here aren’t we?” Glenn asks trying to get off the topic of where hes been. After a few minuites of waiting Anko finally shows up. “Aright all you rookies, looks like most of you made it here in one piece, good job. The last proctor is out with the flu so until hes better your all dismissed!!” anko says before disappearing again. After most of the other students have left Shadow appears in front of Glenn wanting to say something. “What do you want now dad?” Glenn asks while takeing up a slightly defensive stance. “I want to talk with you Glenn, will you let me?” Shadow asks while moveing closer to glenn. Glenn takes out Anarch, the blade shadow and airo will eventually make along with dante. “..LET OUR BLADE DO THE TALKING!!!” Glenn yells while charging Shadow. “*sighs* glenn, wont you ever learn?” Shadow says while drawing defiance. When he’s barely an inch from Shadows face Glenn pulls off the million stab with Anarch, hoping one of them lands on the desired target. Shadow counters the million stab with judgment cut which he learned from vergil, then strikes with the stinger move aiming for glenns dominant arm. Glenn counters the stinger move by making the 2 swords tips meet each other half way, then jumps onto the main part of shadows blade and attempts to kick him in the side of the head. Shadow quickly drops the blade and draws the 2 pain in the ass twin talking blades angai & ranmi, the pulls off the whirlwind move throwing glenn back and off balance. The battle keeps up for a good 3 hours before shadow finally desides to end it. “ENOUGH GLENN TIME FOR YOU TO LEARN YOUR NOT READY TO TAKE ME!!!” Shadow says making it look like hes going to really kill glenn this time. Shadow brings defiance up above his head and starts a straight downward swing then stops right before hitting glenn, with anarch going through his stomach. “..I…I…I won’t….run…from….you….anymore….dad” Glenn says trying to get over what he just did. Shadow just smiles at glenn, with a little blood falling from his lip. “It’s about time you said those words Glenn, I won’t push you anymore from now on” Shadow says while pulling glenns blade out of himself and handing it to his son. Glenn just looks at his dad and then suddenly hugs him relizeing everything his mom told him about the harshness was true. Off in the trees somewhere Vergil watches in utter disgust as the 2 finally get along. *I do believe it’s time to end this little party, and show them what true power is* Vergil thinks to himself while disappearing. Chapter 2 end.


“Hey dad, if you only wanted me to do better…why were you so rough?” Glenn asks while walking back to the hidden leaf village with shadow. “Well, if I went easy on you, you never would have found your…strength to actually strike me like you did” Shadow replies sensing someone getting near them and quickly. Suddenly glenn is sliding backwards on his back and shadow is doing the same only still on his feet with vergil appearing in between the 2 of them with yamato drawn. “VERGIL, WHY ARE YOU HERE….YOU SHOULD BE DEAD!!” Shadow yells regaining his composure. “Hmp…your useless to us now shadow…where did your darkness go?” Is all vergil says before turning to face glenn. Glenn is desperately looking for Anarch which he dropped when he was flung backwards. “You looking for this boy?” Vergil says as he holds up the anarch. “..HEY GIVE THAT BACK ITS MINE” Glenn yells takeing out a kunai and throwing it at Vergil. All Vergil does is side step the kunai not thinking glenn was going to charge afterwards. “NEVER DROP YOUR GUARD!!!” Shadow says while rushing Vergil at the same time with defiance nearly hitting vergils side. Glenn tackles Vergil into a tree when shadow misses and starts to beat the crap out of him for a few seconds before being flung back again. “..Heh heh, I got it back bitch.” Glenn says while standing up with Anarch in his hands. All vergil does is glare at glenn and shadow before standing up and pulling off rapid slash aiming for all of glenns vital points. Glenn attempts to use the stinger move from a kneeling position and fails getting hit 6 times on his right side. “Useless child, did you really think you could stand against me?” Vergil says while walking up to glenn. While vergil is occupied with Shadow uses the doopelganger trick and clone jutsu, giving the 2 other “shadows” one of the pain in the ass twin blades. The 3 fighters sneak up on vergil and when all have him encircled they strike. “HEY VERGIL NEVER LEAVE YOURSELF OPEN TO THE ENEMY!!” all 3 shadows yell as they bring their blades down. Vergil uses air trick at the last second to escape the trios attack and appear behind the real shadow running yamato through his chest. Shadow coughs out a little blood but still turns and nails vergil in the face with a full fist, while glenn manages to get up and strike vergils back twice before he disappears again. “damn it, he cant stay still for more than a few seconds” Shadow says while helping glenn up and takeing a defensive stance. “What should we do about this dad, if we keep this up by the time he does deside to hold still we’ll be to tired to actually fight” glenn says while doing the same as shadow. Both glenn and shadow keep up their defenses until a barrage of sword strike start to rain down on them. After 5 minuites both glenn and shadow are face down in the forest floor. “So weak, and yet they lived this long.” Vergil says while walking up to the 2 unconscious teens. Right as vergil is hoveing over the 2 boys both of them spring up and catch vergil off guard pulling the dark aura attack. Both shadow and glenn pull million stab at the same exact time, followed by attacks by energy blades and finished with a quick x-slash to vergils chest. “..*huff huff huff*….that was….sweet” glenn says while resting on his knees. “Y-y-y-yea it…was…..glenn…..he…never saw it…comeing” Shadow says while leaning against a tree. After they get back to the village Glenn and Shadow say their good byes as glenns goes with rai back to the future where they should be.

Chapter 3 end



The end, hope ya’ll liked it ^_^

~vince~

Glenn~ *bites tongue to keep from asking about the pic*

Me~ -_- smart move pup, thats all i got seeya

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