Sunday, July 22, 2007

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Okay this is my fic, anyone who reads it (except for kirby, i know she hates writting fics) i need help thinking up a 4th chapter or something to help me start the 4th chapter ^^;;;; so heres my fic again.

Okay this was inspired by the Music of Chaos Legion, ~Iku City~ Welcome to the darkness. And if that don’t help you, Go the www.bluelaguna.net Go to Chaos Legion part and download the song so you’ll know what it is.
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In a very battle scared city, a 5 man squad from Konoha are spilt up all over, The squads teacher/sensei dead center of all the Chaos (no pun intended), The Hyper active knuckle head ninja stuck with the strongest of the monsters, Their EMO prince of the team stuck dealing with immortal creatures, The lovely cherry blossom of the team left to deal with invisible creatures. The last 2, the ice demons assistant and the Impurity of the planet are left to deal with the one who caused all this mess.

In the main part of the city, where the squads teacher is, Millions of arrow Legions are scouting out for him, being their the intruders. “Well, This wasn’t part of the mission description…” Kakashi says, moving back against the rock as 2 arrow legions pass by. Sighing kakashi takes out a kunai, though he’s found out their pointless to use against all metal enemies.

As soon as the legions see kakashi all of them start to rain down arrows, which blot out the sun. Using a substitution jutsu at the last second kakashi manages to get out of that hell hole, well part of it anyways, being the whole city was like that. “This really isn’t going to be easy I see……damn” Kakashi says to himself as he tries to find a safe place to recover for now.

With Naruto fleeing from all the stone legions, who actually withstand the rasengan at full force. “CRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAP!!!!!!! WHERE ARE THE OTHER WHEN YOU NEEED THEEEEEEEM?!!!!!” Naruto yells loudly just barely able to avoid the boulders being chucked at him as he runs. Skidding around a tight corner naruto finds himself at a dead end, as more stone legions show up. “Awwwwww COME ON GIVE ME A FRIGGIN BREAK!!!!!” Naruto yells as he activates the nine-tailed foxes power and goes on a total slaughtering spree

After all the stone Legions are dead naruto plops down against the wall near him. “Ya..know…..Tsunade Sama……wasent kidding……when she said……this would…make us think…..twice about……life” Naruto says with a slight smile on his face.

With sasuke and the immortal Legions, All of them fire based, so hes basicly screwed. Growling Sasuke stands up performing his handsigns again and tries dragon fire jutsu for the 10th time, getting very low on chakra. “My…..god…..they wont stop…..coming….” Sasuke pants out and takes off running again, which is pointless being all the legions can appear in any fire nearby, and the section sasukes in is in a total sea of flames.

With Sakura whos been captured by the invisible Legions. Shes being held in what looks like an old cathedral, the stained glass still in tact, the rest of it not so good, 2 men stand near the cell shes in talking, both of them clad in black. Though they both speak perfect Japanese and English, so sakura understand them somewhat through her drug induced sleep.

Finally with Haku and Nate, Both beaten into just about nothing. Hakus sides shreaded open, right leg almost broken and has a severe concussion, though he keeps getting back up to fight. Nate has sever silver poisoning running through him, deep gashes in his most vital points and loseing a ton of blood quickly. “…H..h….hey…..haku…..i think……we should retreat……for n-----“ Cringes as the poison takes hold and falls to the ground unconscious. “Great…..now its just me left……” Haku says getting up for thr 60th time, though hes beyond weak, can barely keep a grip on his needles.

Zeig, The man who made all this happen is laughing hysterically, looking down at the 2 boys who are near death, though they wont give up. “Come on boy, learn when to stop, your both just dead men walking…….what do you have to keep you fighting?” Zeig asks more taunting them.

Haku glares at zeig as he answers. “I have my friends to fight for…….as for the…one I care for…..” Haku says attempting to throw a needle at Zeig but passes out before it ever leaves his hand. Zeig laughs more seeing as how neither Haku or Nate are moveing anymore.

Back with Kakashi, whos finally be forced to fight, being he got pinned between the ocean and a ton of Arrow Legions. “didn’t think id have to use this attack so soon, I just developed it after all” Doing the handsigns Kakashi makes millions of shadow clones who charge up the Chiori “FINAL STAND JUTSU, LIGHTNIGN STORM!!” Kakashi yells as he and his clones rush into the waiting legions, the only thing seen from that part of the city is a giant white flash. When the light dies down, it shows kakashi managed to take out the legions, though he ended up getting 6 arrows stuck in him. “At…leas those…things are……..gone…….” Kakashi says before passing out from the pain of the arrows.

With sasuke still fleeing from the immortal legions. All of them appearing in the flames at his side until they lead him to a dead end, and a very tall wall of flames, that would kill him if he tried bending it. “Well…aint this a kick in the ass, Those things managed to out smart me” Sighing sasuke turns to face his makers, with the chiori charged up attempting the same attack kakashi used on the arrow legions.

Once the light fades, it shows sasuke out cold the legions dead somehow, though 1 of the 2 men who had Sakura held captive appears near sasuke. “Heh, this is getting to easy” The man says as he picks sasuke up and disappears.

Where ever kakashi was, the other man found him and took him back to their lil hide out as well. Both appear at the same time happy to see they got 3 out of the 5. “So that just leaves the Hyper one that we need to find doesn’t it?” The taller man asks. The shorted one just nods as he tosses sasuke and kakashi into their cells. Where ever naruto was at, he ran into more Legions and going completely insane with the nine tailed fox getting out more than he should be, naruto almost looking completely demonic. By the time hes done, millions of lifeless legions are laying around him as he finally passes out, though the fox protects him by putting up a barrier.

Nate and Haku are left where their at, being neither were important at the time, though soon theyd be collected too just as their other team mates had been.

~Chapter 1 End~

Yea yea okay, this was really inspired by ALL the music from chaos Legions, but the one I said at the start was the main one I listened to while writing this ^_^. I might put up chapter 2 later if ya’ll like this, well SEEYA!!

Vince





~Chapter 2: Reminisce~

~3 days before naruto and them got the mission~

Normal bright sunny day in konoha, like any other day, kids of the village running about, the older kids and ninjas training and the jonin(pardon my spelling please) keeping watch over everything. Though 1 squad is slacking off, well, Not really slacking off, just waiting for 2 of the last members. One of them being waited on is Naruto, who is glued to the ramen stand, being they were having a special for all you could eat, The other member is Nate, who’s still on the ship sleeping in, completely forgetting they had training that day.

“Well, I’ll give them both five more minutes before I get them personally” Kakashi says looking at his watch. Sasuke and Sakura snicker a little knowing Kakashi would have to get Nate if jade didn’t drag him there herself, which she’s had to do twice. Almost as soon as that memory goes through all 3 of their heads, Sakura sees jade coming up off in the distance, dragging nate by his shirt, still sleeping.

Sasuke falls off the bench laughing his head off. “I KNEW SHED HAVE TO DRAG HIM AGAIN” Sasuke laughs out until he sees jades shadow over him, then he shuts up real quick. Dropping nate Jade glares at sasuke before leaveing. Sasuke grabbing his chest feeling his heart stop for about 5 minutes. Getting over the comedy act, Kakashi gets up and disappears to get naruto.

Working on his 50th bowel of ramen, Naruto never notices Kakashi show up. “Alright Naruto, you’ve had enough to last you for at least 6 weeks or more, we need to start training again, or I’ll have you face off against Demon form Nate again” Kakashi says trying to scare naruto. Naruto turns pale hearing this, drops his chopstick and flees to the training grounds. Laughing a little kakashi follows afterwards.

Finally once everyones there and awake, team 7 starts their training, which is basicly 1 on 4 fighting, Sasuke,Sakura,Naruto, And Haku VS. Nate, though it normally ends with just Haku VS. Nate, even if ir does take 3 hours for it to happen. Finally once the trainings over, Haku and Nate nearly killing each other again, Kakashi notices Shizune standing off to the side, her face also pale from seeing how deadly all of them were.

“Oh, Shizune, what brings you here?” Kakashi asks from the trees above the Hokages assistant. Sizune snaps back to attention hearing him “Oh uhhhh….oh yes, there was a mission request put in for your squad specifically, Tsunade is waiting to breife you on the other details” Shizune says before walking back to the Hokages mansion. “You all hear that, We got a mission again” Kakashi says hopping down, as his squad pulls themselves off the ground.

“Oh joy, another mission” Sasuke says with sarcasim behind his voice, being hed rather spend time with Kairi than risk his life again. Naruto however is jumping for joy. “OH BOY ANOTHER MISSION, AND ANOTHER CHANCE TO GET STRONGER SO I CAN BE HOKAGE!!” naruto yells right next to nates ear. Growling nate glares at naruto which says “If you wish to keep your voice box, and life for that matter……..SHUTUP!!!!.” Seeing the glare naruto calms down and backs up a little ways from nate.

“Alright, you all go rest up, I’ll go get the slip from tsunade.” Kakashi says and disappears. Appearing at the mansion kakashi walks into the room Tsunade was normally in, finding her with a puzzled look on her face. “Something wrong Tsunade?” Kakashi asks, noticeing the office was more of a mess than normal, with maps flung all over the place. “Yes actually, I cant find this damn city to save my life” Tsunade responds, keeping her eyes on the map.

“If you don’t mind me asking, What city is it?” Kakashi asks thinking he could help. “It’s called Iku city, I’ve never even heard of this city until this request came in” Tsunade responds. Kakashi finally gets a clueless look on his face. “I’ll ask Jade or Nate if they know where it is” Kakashi says as he takes the mission slip and disappears.

Next day when kakashi is asking nate and Jade about where the city is. Jade also clueless, though they got close to it once when her dad was alive and running the ship, also nearly got them all killed pissing off some of the sea legions. Jade and Kakashi notice nate is getting edgey while their talking about the city. “Hon, is there something wrong, your kinda skiddish” Jade asks looking over at nate whos looking very very white. “O.oh no dear…..just….really……….oh never mind just ignore me” Nate says, remembering his past experience with Iku City.

~Chapter 2 End~

Okay this Chapter probably sucked ^_^;;;;; but at least im going to go into how Nates Connected to Iku city and maybe I’ll get to what “Impurities of the planet” means when zeig and them connect it to nate as well ^^. Well that’s all I got for this chapter, and if you guys like it, I’ll start on Chapter 3: UNDERSTANDING

Vince

~Chapter 3: UnderStanding~

~Present day in Iku city, with nate and Haku~

Haku sits up feeling the wind kicking up, pushing him back aways. Sheilding his eyes, haku tries to look at whats happening, but almost goes into shock from when he sees nate. Nate is hunched over, red black and blue blood running from his wounds, his eyes pure white as cracks appear all over his body(Kinda like gaara and that). Pulling off the chain mesh, 2 deep black wings shoot out of nates back, as a silver claw over takes his whole right arm.

Both Zeig and Haku look on in fear as nate keeps transforming. “Guess they weren’t kidding when Kakashi sensei said he was the impurity of the planet” Haku says taking cover behind part of a buildings wall…..or whats left of it. Zeig just watches petrified with fear [so this is theory……the one destined to end all life……they never told me his aura was so powerful] Zeig thinks to himself and backs up some.

Moments after a dark tornado disappears, there’s a devil standing where nate had been, its wings spread wide open, with an effect like itachis going, its tail snapping with a long sharp blade infused at the end of it. And before zeig can blink, hes got the silver claw of the devils right arm ripping his heart out.

Haku falls back shocked that the devil could even get past zeigs barrier, when him and nate in demon wolf form couldn’t do jack to him. The devil, or theory as it was called turns and faces haku, Eyes full of cold hatred even though their on the same side. “Stay where you are boy……don’t want to kill an innocent victim again” Theory says before he disappears. Haku just sits there not able to comprehend what just happened.

With kakashi sasuke and sakura, the 2 men who caught them finally wakeing them up. Sosuken looks at sakura kinda wishing he could have some fun. Though his partner wont allow him to touch her. Sasuke and Kakashi glare at the other man(still thinking of a name for the guy). Though naruto hasent been gathered yet….him being one of the 2 reasons the put the request in for naruto and them, for his Nine-tail fox spirit.

Sosuken stand up and smirks as the alarms go off telling them theory has arrived. “Soon….we’ll be able to open hell whenever we want,,,,,and you idiots will have helped us” He says as he leaves the holding room.

~Chapter 3 End~

Yea okay that one sucked, im running out of ideas here, okay MISSION FOR ALL READERS!!!!!!! GIVE ME IDEAS FOR THIS!!! How should I have them break out, fight back and stop them? AND BE SERIOUS ABOUT THIS!!!!!!!! I want to TRY ending this in chapter 5. so please TELL ME WTF TO DO!!!!! Thanks I will be forever grateful ^_^
~Vince~

Then heres daisukes daughter, maybe sabis too, depends on how things work out with them ^^.



and then heres a pic i did for a friend on DA


Shadowkitsune-Animes Request by ~JadesWolfie on deviantART

and uhhhhhh i think thats it unless glenn has some pics ._.

Glenn~ :3 yup













-_- and thats all the lil pup h----- OH YEA i finally got everything for my cosplay ^.^ SEEYAS!!!!!
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