myOtaku.com
• Join Today!

My Pages
• Home
• Portfolio
• Guestbook
• Quiz Results

Contact Me

E-mail
• Click Here

Vitals

Birthday
• 1992-05-20
Gender
• Female
Location
• *frowns* An oven that contains nothing but dirt and rocks.. and some cactus.. and some lizards..
Member Since
• 2006-06-10
Occupation
• High school student
Real Name
• Bird

Personal

Achievements
• Made it to state solo and ensemble for viola
Anime Fan Since
• 2005
Favorite Anime
• DEATH NOTE!!! Trigun, Wolf's rain, Howls moving castle, bleach, cowboy bebop, Naruto, Fruits Basket
Goals
• Graduating high school with my associates degree
Hobbies
• drawing, music, danceFan: Writing
Talents
• Viola, my life and love.




Jump to User:

myOtaku.com: voiceinsidemyhead


Thursday, February 1, 2007

I hate it when I'm sure I'm right and they won't listen so we end up in a fight because they won't listen to me or let me explain my reasoning. My sister asked to edit my essay for english on Of Mice and Men. So I let her. But instead of just marking off what was wrong, she sat and tried to explain everything. Okay, it was

Every time Lennie would swear and cuss at first, then lead into a methodical epic of what life could be like if only they had a place of their own. George knew that this dream made both of them happy and longing, and gave them hope for the future.
I can understand that maybe I could take the comma out or something, but isn't it okay to use , and and not necessarily have the sentence fragment after the comma be a full sentence?
Oh my gosh its just a stupid paper I don't know why she got angry. If someone could explain why it's wrong it would be greatly appreciated.
Comments (0)

« Home