Tuesday, October 10, 2006

   My story XD (UPDATED ON 10/14/06!)
Trapped Within

My POV: As I walked down the road to The Hokage’s house, I passed this strange kid sitting on the railing. He was about my age, maybe two or three years younger. He had black pointy hair that had larger points towards the middle, cold and black eyes without pupils, a navy blue t-shirt, beige to white shorts, white arm and leg bands with navy blue bands holding them on, a Konoha hitae-ate headband, and the typical little ninja-sandal thing. God how I hate those ninja-sandals. I myself prefer closed-toe shoes because they allow for more chakra to wrap around them to make my kicks more powerful. He glared at me as I walked by him. I flashed him a quick evil glare and as he looked into my eyes, I sensed fear in his eyes.
I kept on walking, and I finally arrived at The Hokage’s house.

Sasuke’s POV: I was just minding my own business at my usual hang-out, when this girl walked by. She had blood all over her as if she had just gotten out of a humongous fight, had bright red eyes, a torn-up long-sleeved black shirt with a torn-up leather jacket over it, torn-up black jeans, weird hair that had no points or spikes to it at all and almost looked like if you felt it that it would feel like you were holding finely brushed cotton, an oversized kunai knife in her right hand, a small hole through her stomach about an inch from her side, and she looked very determined. I glanced over at her to see if I could see what was with her eyes, and as she glared back into my eyes, she all of a sudden put huge effort into blinking, and when she reopened her eyes, they had at least 1,000 spinners in each eye- 1,000 spinners in each Sharingan eye. I was so taken aback by this that I couldn’t help but be somewhat frightened. It was as if she was some sort of demon sent from hell.

Naruto’s POV: I was just minding my own business jumping from rooftop to rooftop training, when something caught my eye. I jumped down to a closer rooftop to get a better look. She had this weird hair that didn’t look like anything I’ve ever seen before, an oversized kunai knife in her right hand attached by a thin piece of what looked like fishing line, a nice black shirt with an incredible leather jacket over it, nice black jeans, her hair was crimson red with black streaks, and she had pale, soft green eyes. I then noticed that Sasuke was sitting on the wall on the other side of the road from me, tossing stones into the air and then catching them. As she walked by, Sasuke glared at her, and then she flashed a quick glance back. She seemed to be on her way to The Hokage’s house, so I followed her on the rooftops.

My POV: As I arrived at The Hokage’s house, this strange kid popped down from the rooftop in front of me. He had some sort of orange ski suit thing, yellow spiky hair, those dang ninja-sandals, a Konoha hitae-ate headband, and blue eyes with large, curious pupils. Does everybody here have spiky hair?
“Hi, I’m Uzumaki Naruto. What’s your name?” asked the strange boy as he walked over to me.
“My name is Ayokai Mitorado,” I replied coldly.
“Nice to meet you. I see you are here for The Hokage?”
“Yes, now step aside before I have to hurt you.” He didn’t budge. “Move, idiot.” Nothing. “Alright then, I guess you have to learn the hard way,” I said as that kid I saw earlier glaring at me walked up beside Naruto.
“I am Uchiha Sasuke. Why do you have so many wounds?” he asked quite rudely.
“Woah, woah, woah, wait. Wounds? I don’t see any wounds,” Naruto butted in.
“Alright. I guess it’s best I explain. Only certain people can see my wounds. I have many demons and curses inside of me, one of which I am guessing Sasuke has inside him too. Either you don’t have a demon or curse inside you, or I have not yet fought with one of whatever demon you have inside of you. That is how I acquire demons. I fight them, and then part of the demon is trapped inside of me. Right now, I have trouble controlling when and if the demons come out so I have to work extra hard each time I use a Jutsu so that the demons don’t come out and kill everyone. I also pick up bloodline traits in the same way, but they end up being magnified,” I explained.
“So you have the same curse mark that I do. Interesting. Where is yours?” Sasuke inquired.
“Left shoulder blade,”
“That’s the same place mine is. Have we met before?”
“Maybe. I got the curse about a year ago during the time that the rest of my clan was preparing for the Chuunin Exams and I was roaming around looking for fights and I wandered over to what was—a long time ago—the Uchiha clan. I think we fought then because I remember seeing a kid like you,” I replied. Sasuke then walked off down the road.
“Let’s fight!” Naruto said as he made the hand seals for the Mass Shadow Clone Jutsu. I nodded my head and sprung up into the air, where a mass of black chakra surrounded me about a foot thick, whipping around as if windswept. “Oh, s***.” I thought as I strained to keep the demons under control. I used the same Jutsu that Naruto did, but made twice as many clones. I took my oversized kunai knife, and each clone threw it at Naruto and his clones. They sprung up into the air, each kunai missing by- at the most –an inch. My shadow clones disappeared, all the Narutos landed, and twenty of them came and surrounded me, used the Mass Shadow Clone Jutsu again, and then I had a ring of Narutos around me. I concentrated for a minute, and then opened my eyes with my 1,000 spinner Sharingan Mirror Wheel eyes. The Narutos all lunged forward throwing punches and kicks from all angles, I drew kunai knives- one on each finger on both hands. I started to deflect the punches, and then one by one as I hit them, the shadow clones disappeared. I started panting, and I glanced over at the real Naruto. He had red chakra flowing from him and he was struggling to keep it in control it seemed. It slowly formed the shape of a fox around his body like the black chakra on me from before. I decided that this was probably his demon, so I waited for him to finish. He started to mold his chakra in his right hand, and I figured that he was using Rasengan, so I immediately followed suit, and made the hand signs for Chidori. My Chidori got really huge compared to some of the Chidori I’ve seen, but that is because of my demons inside of me. He charged at me, and I just held my extremely oversized Chidori out in front of me, and it immediately blasted him backwards, sliding up against the door, and slumping downwards.
“Okay, okay. The Hokage is up the stairs and in the room to the left.” He said as he slowly got up and limped away, the red chakra disappearing as he got up. I then felt the usual flow of energy in me whenever I am attaining a new demon. I called after Sasuke because he had just stopped to see the battle.
“Hey you! Sasuke! What’s the demon inside Naruto called?”
“The Nine-Tailed Demon Fox,” he replied.
I then walked inside The Hokage’s house, went up the stairs, and in the room to the left, where he was looking out the window at Naruto as he limped away slowly.

The Hokage’s POV: I had heard that there was a new student coming to Konoha, but I had no idea that she had demons inside of her until I overheard her conversation outside my window to Naruto and Sasuke. I watched her every move in the battle that I just knew would happen because Naruto’s too curious. She impressed me a lot. I wonder what age she is? Her ability to control all the demons inside of her is quite strong. I would enjoy seeing her fight Sasuke, Rock Lee, Gaara, or maybe even Kakashi.
“Hokage the Fourth, I am here, as you requested,” A voice said from behind, which I was assuming belonged to Ayokai Mitorado, seeing as it was a female voice and I rarely request to see a student without their sensei.
“Ayokai Mitorado, I have been waiting, I am quite impressed at the fact that you can control your demons,” I replied.
“Oh, so you overheard my conversation with Sasuke and Naruto and watched my battle with Naruto?”
“Yes, and I would like to comment on how large your Chidori is. How do you do that? Is it because you have so many demons inside of you that you can use some of their chakra?”
“Yes, yes it is. I was wondering, could I join those young Genin in their training?” She seemed to want something because not many people like Naruto.
“Actually, they’re Chuunin, now,” I replied, expecting her to be surprised because they are so young, and she must be of Jonin rank because of her strength.
“Oh, then there’s no way I could ever match up to Uchiha Sasuke, considering that Naruto looks like the weakest of them. I myself just graduated and moved to Genin rank, see?” She showed me her extra-shiny hitae-ate headband , which had been hidden by her jacket she was wearing over it (she was wearing it like some sort of sash). It had no clan sign though. It instead had the letters “A” and “M” intertwined in a nice design. I was quite surprised, considering I have never seen someone’s initials engraved on their hitae-ate headband instead of a clan sign.
“What clan are you from again?” No answer. “Ayokai?” Still no answer. I could somehow just tell that she was an orphan, like some of the others in Konoha. “I see. I will allow you to train with Naruto and Sasuke. Their other teammate is Haruno Sakura. She’ll be glad to have another girl on the team,” I said.

My POV: As I entered the room, I noticed he was watching Naruto walk away. I then assumed he had watched my battle. I engaged in conversation, only to lean that Naruto and Sasuke-and apparently another girl name Sakura-were all Chuunin. I accepted the offer to train with them because I had the sudden urge to fight Sasuke. I couldn’t believe that that was what I was feeling. I guess it was because I knew him and fought him before, but it also could be because my demons have just met up with Nine-Tails so they have an unusual bloodlust now. As I exited The Hokage’s house, a girl around Naruto’s age walked by me on the road. She had sugar-pink hair, some sort of red kimono thing, and those d*** ninja sandals! She also had SPIKY HAIR! What the h*** is with all these people with spiky hair and frikkin ninja sandals?! Is it like some form of religious belief or something?
“Um… Excuse me! Girl with the sugar-pink hair?” I called after her because I wanted to meet Sakura, and I figured she looked like someone who could help me.
“Uh… Me? Who are you?” The girl replied.
“Yes, you. I am Ayokai Mitorado, and I have just joined a team of Chuunin. I was wondering if you could show me to Haruno Sakura?” I asked in the nicest way possible because right now, I’m not wearing my favorite choice of clothes: these ones make me look too proper.
“Oh, um… I’m Sakura!” The girl replied. “Why do you need to talk to me?”
“Because I just joined your team. I was wondering…um…if we had anything in common, which I guess not because I’m gothic, and I guess you’re not. Uhh…I guess we could still be like friends and all so I don’t have to step as low as Naruto because judging by how quiet Sasuke is, he’d be a little bit hard to become a friend of,” I replied.
“Oh, well, you see…do you…like…erm…like-like Sasuke…?”
“A lit-erm…no” I almost let it slide…
“Oh, I’ll take that as a ‘yes’ because you hesitated,” she grinned at that “Because I do, too,” She finished.
“I just noticed that you-wait. Never mind,” I tried not to insult her.
“I what?”
“No, really, it’s nothing, forget I ever even started to say anything, really!”
“Alright, then.” She continued walking, and I ran after her.
“Do you know where Sasuke usually hangs out?”
“Yeah. Over on that wall over there,” She said as she pointed over to where I first saw him.
“Thanks,” I said as I looked over to the wall, and saw Sasuke there, tossing some small pebbles up into the air and catching them. I walked over to him.
“Hey you, Sasuke. You up for a spar? I want to see what you’re capable of, seeing as you’re the strongest one on our team,” I said somewhat rudely.
“Our team? Since when was it our team?”
“Since Hokage the Fourth assigned me to it,” I replied.
“Alright then. Just don’t let your demons out,” Sasuke replied as he got up and started to walk down the road the way Sakura was going. I jogged to catch up to him.
“Is this the way to the training arena?”
“No. It’s the way to the Forest of Death-or whatever it’s called. I don’t know if that’s its real name because the called it that during the Chuunin Exams. That’s where we’re going to spar. Is that ok?” I had to think about that for a minute. After a minute or so, I said
“How large is it?”
“Huge. But we’ll try to make boundaries with kunai knives attached to fishing line, ok?”
“Yeah. Ok. We should make like spider-web patterns so if we try to go out, it catches us so we don’t get lost, ok?”
“Ok.”
That was the last word he said before we got there. When we got there, All I saw was a huge metal-mesh fence and huge, dark trees in a huge, dark forest.
“Is this it?”
“Yes. Let’s go. I go in, and start to form a circle to the left, and you go around to start to form a circle to the right,” Sasuke replied as he opened the gate. I walked up to the gate, and we began to thread our kunai knives. As soon as we were done, we went on our ways.

Sasuke’s POV and Thoughts: This Ayokai girl interests me. She didn’t say her Clan Name, Doesn’t have a hitae-ate headband, wears some sort of black leather jacket over a black shirt, and pretty much collects demons. She also has vast amounts of chakra, judging by how large her Chidori was and how many Shadow Clones she made. *shing* *cling* *tak* Yes…right on target. *shing* *tak* *cling* *shing* *cling* *tak* *tak* That’s good. *tap* *whoosh* *tap* *shing* *shing* *shing* *cling* *cling* *cling* *tak* *tak* *tak* *tap* *whoosh* *tap* *shing* *shing* *shing* *cling* *cling* *cling* *tak* *tak* *tak*
“Woah, you’re here already?” Ayokai came up in front of me immediately.
“Yeah, how many have you done?”
“Three, how many have you done?”
“Twenty-three,” She replied.

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