Sunday, November 12, 2006

this may be a rare thing for me to do anymore. This is a Naruto story by muah (oc)
Chapter One

A large, filthy cat demon, only 17 years old ran threw the streets in rage. It’s size was large, at least three times the size of a regular human. The demon was black with a white belly, and blood red eyes that stood out. It’s speed increased every second, in no time becoming a passing blur. His claws rapidly tore down houses of all kinds, and cutting into people’s flesh. Soon, half the town was destroyed, blood littering the streets.
A young girl, about 4 years younger than the demon, walked into the road with her hands stretched out blocking his way. Her eyes were glittering with green, and her long, silky black hair swayed in the wind. Her pale skin, and red lips matched well with her eyes. She wore a long black dress, one that a rich person would wear.
With one good look, the demon skidded to a stop, panting heavily. As he looked into her eyes, he became almost hypnotized, his body paralyzed with a strange feeling running threw his veins.
“Who are you, why have you come here?” the girl called out. Her voice was strong, firm, and full of confidence.
The demon snarled under his breathe, his three tails swaying and wagging like a dying snake. “I came here to destroy those who betrayed me, that’s all. Now let me pass, for I do not want to harm such a pathetic human such as yourself.”
“Why am I any different from the ones you had already slaughtered? Stop killing our people and leave now!”
“That I can not do,” the demon lowered into a defense mode. “I had already begun, I can not stop.”
“Yes you can!” the girl screamed, taking a step forward as her hair punted in the same direction. “Just please stop! These people didn’t hurt you, so stop hurting the-”
“No!” the cat interrupted. “They hurt me, and I have the right to fight back!” He leapt forward again in rage, opening his mouth wide, saliva dropping and spinning in the air.
The girl evened out her legs, she placed her hands together and closed her eyes as if she was praying. Her blank expression didn’t tell much of what she was doing. Suddenly, her hands that were centered between her chest began to glow a heavenly yellow, it made a sound of a humming bird.
With the demon only inches away from her face, her eyes snapped open. “Die!” she yelled, slamming her hand on the demon’s chest. The yellow erupted into what seemed like a tornado, the cat being in the eye. He shrieked in horror, roaring in pain. He was dying slowly, and suffering for every sin he had made.
The girl removed her hand just in time to keep the demon alive. He automatically fell to the ground, blood tickling from his mouth. His body was limp, and he didn’t have enough strength to move. “W-why?” he whimpered.
“You said it yourself, someone hurt you, but we didn’t. that’s where your rights to kill us were twisted.”
The demon looked up at her with one eye. “T-this isn’t right! W-where have you taken my p-power to?”
“At the moment, it is inside of me. I will be forced to give it to someone else before my death, other wise my body wouldn’t be able to hold it and you shall be free again. I can’t let that happen.” The demon’s eyes rolled back and his heart stopped. The girl lowered, and placed her hand on his forehead, the glow returning to her palms. She was just in time to suck up his soul before it left his body.
Years passed, the lady grew old, tired, and weak. Soon she was unable to keep the demon’s soul locked inside her any longer. She needed an infant to care for it. The old women called for a baby, they sent in a naked baby girl. She was young, no older than a few days. Her cry weakened the ladies strength more.
“No! no, please don’t!” the infants mother cried out, trying to get her baby back from the soldier.
“Hey lady, Get off!” he yelled, kicking her off for a warning.
“Please, anything but my baby!” she cried, drenched in her own tears.
“No, we need her, now get off!” he snapped, slapping he across the face. She lost balance and fell back on her head, knocking her unconscious, as her nose started bleeding.
“Bring forth the young one,” the old one said, holding out her arms as she sat behind a fire inside a teepee. The soldier handed her the baby, as her mother quickly awoke, grabbing onto his boot.
“Please … don’t,” she begged.
“Too late!” he took out his shotgun. “Now no more talking.”
Though he meant it, she still struggled. “Please … no!” she yelled desperately.
The man pointed the gun to her head. “Shut up,” he cocked the gun and pulled the trigger.
The babies cry grew louder as she felt her mothers blood shed across the grass, and heard her body drop on the ground. “Shush my pretty,” the old women said. She began humming as she took ink on the end of a feather, and began to write something on the child’s arm. The ink swayed into place, not a single dropped left out. The women wrote the same thing on the palm of her own hand, the exact same size, too. The old lady took in a deep breath, then put her hand on the arm of the child. Yet, another yellow light began to glow, the humming bird’s song returning to the sound waves.
The baby screamed from both pain and scarce, the switch-over wasn’t ticklish, as you may had thought. After the glow was gone, the women fell over dead, the transportation used up all of her chakra. The baby remained, in a better state than before. The demons chakra was building up inside her. Even though she still cried in pain she was still in better shape than any other baby alive. The Soldier looked down at the infant. “Well, now that you have no home, I guess I can have you,” he smiled. “I shall call you,” he paused to think. “Jari.”












Thats it. if you would like to be in it, answer the following questions I MUST KNOOWWW YOU AND CALLL U SIS/BRO FOR GOD SAKE PPL!!
1) Name, nickname, siblings (include gender & names) Appearances. (try to keep siblings creative and your own characters. don’t make any more than 5 not including parents) and the one you MIGHT have a crush on
2) personality (be as descriptive as possible)
3) create a past. (include every bit of detail, if your parents died, then how, by who, was it on purpose….)
4) anything else you might wanna include


Example: (my char)

1) Jari, no siblings. Appearances: straight black ,short hair about chest-high, sprinkling green eyes, black shirt, blue jeans, and a little black purse-bag to hold weapons. Has a crush on Kiba, Naruto, and Sasuke.
2) She is one of the quietest people you will ever meet. She is very shy and creative, smart when it comes to plans and dumb when it comes to school, and her voice is as calm as her actions. One thing that would be wrong is to piss her off. She is also one strong girl, but even stronger with will.
3) As an infant a girl had a cat demon sent into her body, while her mother was trying to save her the soldier who brought her there shot her in the head. She never had a dad, so the soldier, Senshi, was forced to care for her as a parent. When her demon takes over her body, she looses memory.
4) nopee
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