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Moni
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Monday, March 13, 2006
Second chapter is 8 pages long O.o
Yo,I finally finished the second chapter to my story.It's way long, about 8 pages.Hopefully it's not too long,--;.Anyway I got alot of homework today-history,4 english projects plus spelling packet,and choir paper.It really sucks. I have to write an essay either today or tomorrow and turn it in on wed.I have to write about a lantern and how it helped in the story and it's due thurs.On Friday the spelling is due and on Mon. the 20 the two page report is due.Also I have to do a bookreport.For choir I have five pages of wrok to do that's due on different days.The history is pretty easy,I just have to do one more word and I'm done.Also,since my story is about 8 pages long i'm just going to put two paragraphs are here.The two paragraphs are like in the middle of the chapter.So, if you want to read the rest go look at my other posts from before and it'll tell ya.Anyways here's the story and no question of the day today.-
Monica walked to her house slowly, so she could think about what Himeko had said without being interrupted. As she walked she saw smoke coming from the direction she was going. Scared, she ran to her house faster than a human, her demon blood slowly awaking. She opened the door quickly and smoke seeped through the opening. She covered her mouth and nose while coughing. She ran into the house and saw something on the wall that made her stop all movements. Seconds later she shook her head and ran to find her family.
She searched and finally found them in her parent’s room. She ran to them and checked to see if they were still breathing. She noticed that they had wounds all over their body and was shocked. She got them got of the house, not caring that the fire was burning through her clothes and leaving marks on her skin. She got back into the house and tried to put the fire out. It wouldn’t go out. ‘Wait…what if its…Maikai fire?’ she thought then realized what it meant. She ran to the wall she was staring at earlier and used her left hand to rub something off. She then ran out of the house and heard sirens coming closer. She checked her family again, not touching them with her left hand.
-Well that's all you get to read.Please comment it.
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