Friday, July 8, 2005

poems...comment so i can improve them..
stupid poem by me..

You could call this the end you could call it good bye/

Cause what the point of life if you got to get high/

Alone I always cry, when I'm plotting in my cell/

Can't wait till I die see me rotten deep in hell/

One day they’ll hear my tale, and my life long struggles/

How everyday as me is another sign of trouble/

I ain't a stunt double, I'm one of a kind/

And if you think life is easy then son you must be blind/

Always promised to find, my road to happiness/

But reality cursed my life with full of stress/

And I push with my best, my soul and all my heart/

But what do u do when u lose before u start/

And it seems I always part from the people I love/

At the end of the year they turn to rats and bugs/

Bunch of fakeless thugs, anyone of them could tell/

Cause of backstabbing friends I spent Christmas in jail/



It’s more than I can bare

This is ma life that isn’t fair

This song will be my last

I have to reminisce the past

I saw my people grow

I guess now it’s my time to go

And I'm sorry if you’ll cry

But now I have to say goodbye,

Goodbye


In life I always tried to make a stand in pride/

But as days passed by I kept staying alive/

And when I lay and die, I'll keep telling you my story

And please don't cry when I’m murdered and buried/

And does the world worries? Cause my life ain't concerned/

I ain't afraid to die I’m just waiting for my turn/

The pain is like a burn, the scar will never go/

And it’s hard now a days to watch your child grow/

Things they’ll never know, and things they never heard/

Cause how can you trust if no one takes your word/

So I soar like the birds and keep on smoking/

And I threw away my heart so it’ll never get broken/

The doors already open, just waiting for my soul/

Each step I take closer see the darkness as it falls/

My eyes start to bawl, and I can’t go on/

I just hope the know my name when all the pain is gone/

Good-Bye



You could call this the end you could call it good bye/

Cause what the point of life if you got to get high/

Alone I always cry, when I'm plotting in my cell/

Can't wait till I die see me rotten deep in hell/

One day they’ll hear my tale, and my life long struggles/

How everyday as me is another sign of trouble/

I ain't a stunt double, I'm one of a kind/

And if you think life is easy then son you must be blind/

Always promised to find, my road to happiness/

But reality cursed my life with full of stress/

And I push with my best, my soul and all my heart/

But what do u do when u lose before u start/

And it seems I always part from the people I love/

At the end of the year they turn to rats and bugs/

Bunch of fakeless thugs, anyone of them could tell/

Cause of backstabbing friends I spent Christmas in jail/





It’s more than I can bare

This is ma life that isn’t fair

This song will be my last

I have to reminisce the past

I saw my people grow

I guess now it’s my time to go

And I'm sorry if you’ll cry

But now I have to say goodbye,

Goodbye





In life I always tried to make a stand in pride/

But as days passed by I kept staying alive/

And when I lay and die, I'll keep telling you my story

And please don't cry when I’m murdered and buried/

And does the world worries? Cause my life ain't concerned/

I ain't afraid to die I’m just waiting for my turn/

The pain is like a burn, the scar will never go/

And it’s hard now a days to watch your child grow/

Things they’ll never know, and things they never heard/

Cause how can you trust if no one takes your word/

So I soar like the birds and keep on smoking/

And I threw away my heart so it’ll never get broken/

The doors already open, just waiting for my soul/

Each step I take closer see the darkness as it falls/

My eyes start to bawl, and I can’t go on/


another poem by a friend
I just hope the know my name when all the pain is gone/

“ Love is when you have a certain bond with that person,

and you want to be with them forever.

Love is when u wanna be with them till the sunrises.

Its where u and that special person can go on

A beach and watch the sunset.

Love is soo powerful, and only u and the person u love

will ever know wat love is all about.

Love is when u find a guy that wont break ur heart.

a guy that will always be there for you.

a guy that won't turn his back from you

even through the storms of problems that might arise,

a guy that will love you because of u who u are.”

Well don't you like this peom=) enjoy!!!

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