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Friday, June 23, 2006


Eternal Darkness
everything is NOT ok...nothing is ok and never will be. everything is wrong and no one will know why b/c they never listen. not even my friends excpet 3. only 3 out of my friends will listen. cuz most the time they are to busy going off talking about themselves not even caring what's wrong with everyone else!!! it's so f****d up if u ask me!! i mean...they're ur BFFL and u listen to them but they don't give a d*** about u!! pretty lame huh? well here's the 2nd chapter to "Angel" By: Shia

Angel
By Shia
Chapter 2

Chapter Two
As Angel walked into the two front doors that led to her high school, eyes were on here. Her cheek was stained with blood from the cut she got, along with a cut lip and black eye to go with it. She wore a jean jacket that covered a long sleeve shirt and sweat pants to hide her skin from being revealed. Her hair was straight brown as it hung over her face. She walked slowly to her locker as everything was quiet.
Angel opened her locker hearing a couple of girls talk. “She’s wearing sweat pants and a long sleeve shirt in the middle of MAY!” one had said. “Maybe she’s just sensitive about her skin,” another added.
She walked to first period. Biology. As she walked to the back a couple heads turned to look at her and catch a glimpse of her face. Having no friends sucked. No one to talk to or tell them what was really wrong. Angel found a seat and sat down. She brought out a pen and paper to take today’s notes.
Suddenly a note was passed to her. She looked up to see a guy staring at her. He’s cute. She thought silently. She opened the note to find it read: “Are you ok? You look like you were beat. Is everything ok?” she looked back up to see the guy still staring at her. “…Signed Ricky.” The guy staring at her was Ricky. She was at school enough to learn everybody’s names.
She began to write back. “…yes I am fine. I just had an accident. I’ll be fine. Thanks for asking, signed Angel.” She passed the note back to him and put her head down to look away from everyone’s staring.
“I CAN’T TAKE IT! IT’S NOT MY FAULT!” Angel screamed as she jerked awake. All eyes were on her. She ignored them as she ran out of the room tears threatening to come down. In the girl’s bathroom, she locked herself in a stall and let the tears fall.
The bell rang. The halls were suddenly filled with students rushing to their next class. She got out of the stall and walked to the sink to wash her face. Two girls came in and stared at her face as she walked out going to her next class. Thinking ahead she smiled softly. No dad to go home to. She thought smiling. No dad.
Ricky was in her second period class to. He was the smartest and the most popular boy in school. He was cute to. Angel sat behind him. A note from him was passed back to her. “Come to my house after school.” She was shocked. “Um…ok…” she wrote back and passed it up to him. “Cool.” He said passing it back with directions to his house.
Nervousness is not a good thing when you’re hurt. It made your muscles tense up and hurt your bruises and cuts. She winced in pain as she fought to relax. Finally she slumped down in her chair and closed her eyes. When she opened them, another note was on her desk. Ricky. She opened it up which read. “…I don’t mean to bother you again but is it ok if we just walk to your house so you can ask to come and then walk back to my house?”
“…yea sure, whatever works for you.” She passed it back up. Great. She thought. Let’s watch me make a fool of myself and have him tell his friends what a dork I am. The note was passed back. “Ok, cool. It biology you screamed, ‘I CAN’T TAKE IT! IT’S NOT MY FAULT!’ was everything ok since you had been gone or what?” She began to get nervous at weather she should tell him or not. They weren’t exactly best friends and she couldn’t tell him unless she knew is he would keep it a secret or not. She decided to keep quiet and make up and excuse. “Oh, that outburst? Just a dream or a nightmare I guess. I didn’t even mean to scream. Sorry if it scared you.”
“You didn’t scare me…ok yes you did. But hey, you’re ok now right? I want to be friends with you Angel. I know something is wrong…I know I’m not the type to be like this. But I am. I may be popular and smart but it doesn’t change who I really am ok? I want to help you.” she wrote passing it back up for the last time. Ricky read the note saying “No Comment.”


there's chapter 2 working on chapter 3.

~~~Shia~~~

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