Friday, November 24, 2006

Ummm....This is part or shall I say Half of Chap. 1 of my story...
In the darkness came a strange voice to the ears of a frightened teen, "There is nothing here, but darckness.I guess I could say nothing more nothing less?Yes It is BLANK here...But Myles I would have thought you would of shown a little more emotion or atleast screamed for help?" Myles was in fact frightened, but not of the darkness or the strange man's voice he was frightned because he felt as if he were suspended in the air, hovering just above the clouds.Myles finally blurted out, "What the...where am I?What do you mean BLANK?Who are you?Where are you?Why should I scream I am not afraid of you..." The man spoke again this time with a command, "Open your eyes..." Myles felt his feet touch ground and opened his eyes to a magnificently beatiful garden filled with people who seemed dazed and just seem to pass by him with no regards as to who he was or how he appeared there.The voice emanuates again this time distinctly beind him, "Is that better?It seemed a little more...quaint." Myles turns sharply to see the man's face and is very surprised by his appearence.The man was very well dressed with short Honey-Brown hair and square shaped sunglasses.He wore a suit of complete white and if it weren't for the fact that this man was coverd in splashes of blood all over his body he would of been completely normal, but he wasn't. Myles suddenly thought to himself {AM I going insane?Or..am I just dreaming?} But Myles said this aloud, "Wh...who are you?What's wrong with these people?And where am I?" The man replied, "OKay.If that's all you want to know then I'll tell you.One: You already know who I am." As the man speaks Myles listens to what the man is saying and comes up with the his own answers {Your name?I already know?Yes, I already know.It's KILLER.} The man continues with his strange answers, "Secondly: Your not crazy and your not dreaming, exactly, either." Shock begins to spread through Myles' body {How the hell...did he know that?I thought that didn't I?If I'm not crazy then what am I?} Myles demands another answer from the man and almost yells, "What about these people and this place?" KILLER responds in a condescending tone, "Oh,questions, questions, questions.Myles didn't your Mother ever tell you that curiousity killed the cat?Also, you know exactly how I knew what you were thinking, and you know where we are now and you know who these people are.After all you come here often with them." Myles had been pushed to his limit and became very frustrated, "What do you mean I know all of this stuff...It's more like you know were we are!" KILLER gave Myles a strange look and asked, "Hey, do you not recognize me?Oh, come on.Do I have to do every thing?" KILLER pulls a small sized mirror from his pocket.He was able to hold the mirror in the exact position to show Myles what he looked like, and if there was even the slight amount of luck in Myles' entire body the sun would have reflected off the mirror,but it didn't.Myles saw what he looked like and it was incredibly horrible.Myles was the man.He was the man that so disgusted him, and...scared him.Every fiber, every molecule, every inche of Myles' body was exactly like KILLERs.The glasses, the hair, the hands...the blood.All of Myles was just the same as him.Myles screamed loudly and abruptly, "Impossible...this is crazy.I am not you.I have darck brown hair and my voice is different.I don't kill and I am not covered in blood.I am not you!" KILLER talked with the sound of smile in his voice and said, "Okay then, why do you look like..." Myles suddenly punched him knocking hi sunglasses off.His eyes were...exactly like Myles.KILLER was Myles and Myles was KILLER.Myles woke up.
Breathing heavily and covered in ice cold sweat he rose up slightly and whispered reassuringly to himself, "Damn...that was a crazy dream and only a dream." he laughed quietly because it was night time outside.He decided to glance at his clock and turned to his left to face it on his wooden desk against the wall.It was 4:30 P.M.Myles spoke softly to himself again, "What is today?Wednesday.I have school tomorrow.If I don't get back to sleep quickly and go to school tomorrow tired CeeJay will kill me...."
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Fear is what this first half is about and tell me what you think.I haven't introduced all the characters yet but this is only the first HALF of the first Capter the next part Myles will be at school and you will be able to get to know 3 other characters as they're pulled into a plot dealing with a kidnapped girl...oh and CeeJay is Myles twin sister and not his girl friend.
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Author's Note: I've always wanted to right that.But I will thank anyone who gives me a reveiw(even if its mean or rude, I accept all help)Thank's a bunch...
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