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Monday, July 25, 2005


poetry....
I know I have no skill when it comes to writting poetry but I wanted to put some of the things that I have written....I think I wrote them all for Comm Arts a couple years ago. Like I said I know they suck but I want an honest opinion on them...

Love, Sweet Yet So Sour

SHE was the one who I first gave my heart to. She
WAS the only one to see me as I once was,
THE one who saw past the mask I built to hide my soul. The
PRIZE that I left behind on the beach for the freedom of the sea.


Loyalty In The Hands of One

ROUND the cliff I left my men,
THE ones most faithful to me yet the
RAGGED loyalty of a pirate can’t be kept by one. The
ROCKS that now separate me from my former followers are
THE only ones keeping me from the guilt I feel. As I go into my cabin, a
RAGGED man I now be, my lover tries to sooth my heart, yet even he can’t be of aid.
RASCAL, whelp, pup all names I gave to the men that I have now betrayed. When I would have
RAN back to give them more then one shot , I am stopped by the pride that I should have left in there place.


The Blood From a Midnight Roses Thorn

Through the loneliness I shall always feel.
Past the moon and through this midnight seal.
This drop of blood shall seal that fate I have worn,
Like the crimson life that falls from a midnight roses thorn.


Here are my fav three...well sorta I like the second two better then the first one but whatever...I might put up some more later on...

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