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Thursday, March 2, 2006

Crimson Tears
Wow, two posts in one day...dang...Anywho. This is a poem that I have been working on for the past two days and I want a couple of opinions on it....first off...Does it make sense? and second, does it sound really forced? Aka, does it sound like I forced the words together to write it? Well here it is...sorry that it sucks but thats why I am still working with it...

Along this path I walk alone
Sheltered within Heavens silent tears
My scorching pain is shrouded
Upon this path I call upon my deepest fears

On that fateful day long past
Along those streets we ran
Never aware of what would be
Clueless to Gods plan

His mane a flag of liquid silver
His joy echoing upon these walls
Through the crowds we pushed and played
We were deaf to their final calls

Across the road he tried to pass
Out of sight but not of sound
His joyful cries fade and die
A prelude to the site I found

Splattered crimson, shattered soul
A rapidly fading light
My dear twin, the other me
Was losing his final fight

Noise is present all around
I remained deaf to the countless cries
I sensed Death was here for him
I am helpless as he slowly dies

As his last words pass from bloodied lips
Words of love, a final good bye
A part of me is forever within
The other me whom was fated to die
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