myOtaku.com: Yasha-Chan

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Birthday
• 1989-01-31
Gender
• Female
Location
• In my own litle world...
Member Since
• 2005-04-16
Occupation
• Writer...well...a student at the moment but I want to be a writer.
Real Name
• Atashina Akume

Personal

Achievements
• ...none that I know of...
Anime Fan Since
• not sure exactly...major fan since about 6th grade though
Favorite Anime
• Anime:Gundam Wing, Full Metal Alchemist, Yu Yu Hakusho, Yu-Gi-Oh, Fruits Basket, Inu-Yasha, Angelic Layer, Case Close/Detective Conan, Nuku Nuku, Card Captor Sakura Manga: Petshop of Horrors, W Juliet, Demon Diary, Planet Ladder, Host Club, Angel Sanctua
Goals
• To become a writer
Hobbies
• Reading and Writing
Talents
• None

myOtaku.com: Yasha-Chan

Friday, September 1, 2006

Yeah...Another post...
A major switch in topic here but...the other day I was motifying a poem called Philosophy of a Tool that I had found on a pic of Haku from Naruto and I still am not happy with what have thus far...and Tenshi-Chan isn't helping in the slightest...here is what I have...

Useless life
Born within winters mist
This cursed blood tortured an even colder soul

Family, country
By neither was I acknowledged
An unwanted existence bringing endless pain

Then one appeared
His hands stained with blood
These tainted lives forging an altered destiny

Time flows forward
My unspoken debt remains unpaid
His will created an unbreakable tool of ice

Forever used
This tool of his remains
Faithful to him for a tool feels no pain

The original is longer and much wordier then mine but I think they both get the same thing across...as for what I don;t like,besides the whole thing, is the last line in the second stanza, the word bringing...as well as the last two stanza...those parts specifically don't sound right to me...anywhos...I think I am done today so I'm off to bed...its already after midnight and I need to start getting up early for school...ja.
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