Thursday, April 29, 2010

   Ello everybody!
Soooooooo, it's been a looooong time since I was last on here, and you know what, I think I'm a lot different. :D
Seriously, it's been like two years... whooooooooooah...
And I'm still weird!! And I still haven't written that story I thought I was going to write, and then started a new one and didn't write that either... So I gave up on writting mostly...
So, now for a fresh start with everyone!
Although I won't be on here much... I think...
You can call me Desi, I live in Texas, I'm a Jehovah's Witness baptised March 9th 2009, I'm 17, homeschooling, ummmm what else...
Thanks to my 15 year old brother I'm weird, well actually I've been weird for a long time, but I blame it on him haha.
Well I don't wanna bore you so maybe I'll go on about what I like to do later if anyone asks eh? Though I doubt they will.
Now I'm ging to go to bed, so oyasumi!
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Monday, December 17, 2007

   Story opening decided!
Thank you Angel Zakuro for noticing the tense problem! I'm always really bad about mixing them up in my writting. It's all fixed now though, I edited my post!
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Ok, so I know I said it'd be at the end of the week, but it was a pretty obvious who was going to win! Opening one wins! Though in my personal opinion I liked the second one so That's a little bit of a loss for me, but I even showed it to my friends at school and no one liked the second one! So, I'm going to go with the 1st one... But! I don't want to let the 2nd one go so easily, so what do you think about switching between point of views? I already wrote a page in the narator's p.o.v. while he's watching the main character, so tell me if it's to comical for the story, I'm a little worried about that. If I don't follow the main character's p.o.v. at all in the story I'll probobly follow his love interest, but then she'd turn into the main character wouldn't she? Ah well! Here it is!
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“Meep meep meep” An alarm clock blared in a once quiet room on a warm spring morning. In this room, our hero awakened from a deep slumber. Slowly he sat up and looked around his room in a daze as though saying, “Where am I again?” After a few seconds he realized that he had awakened from a good nights sleep, and feeling refreshed, he stretched. But wait! He stopped in mid-stretch and made a face of annoyance. Slowly he put his arms at his sides and turned his head to the right, where the source of a loud repetitive sound was, and fiercely glared as if saying, “…SHUT UP ALREADY, I’M AWAKE!!!” But it didn’t stop, even though its job was done. It kept blaring, and soon the boy grew EXTREMLY tired of it. Sighing, and irritated, he threw the sheets off of his legs and went to turn off his alarm clock. Once the job was done and the noise was gone, he sighed with relief and resumed his stretching and yawning. Once this ritual was completed, it was time for him to ready himself for school.
You say you want to know more about this boy I call a “hero” do you? Is he your hero? Well yes, he is! Though I doubt all but a few humans know they’ve been saved by him, he’s only famous for it in our world. He didn’t only save our two worlds though, he saved everyone from our enemy! But we’ll talk about that later. For now, let me describe to you what our hero looks like, that handsome dog!

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Yup, that's it so far! Well, other than advice on the level of seriousness in the story, I also need help with names and descriptions of what the characters should look like! Help me please!! Okay then, I probobly forgot something but for now that's all! Give me your honest opinions!

And now, guess what guess what! I'M L!!!

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And I'm Allen! OMG I LOVE ALLEN! The things it says on the picture describe me almost perfectly!!





What D.Gray-man Character Are You?


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Aaaaaaaaaand a Zora! The words are so true it's scary!

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I have no idea how I got this but OMG IT'S FUNNY!!! Don't worry, I have a sense of humor!

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Saturday, December 15, 2007

   Stories! YAY! Please read!!!
Well hello everyone! Your all here to read my story right! ...No? Well too bad cuz now that your here your probobly gona read it anyways! I do have ooone tinsy little problem though... I have two openings and I don't know which one to pick! So, I'm going to ask for your help so vote for one and whichever opening is liked the most by the end of the week, I'll pick it! If there are only two people who say anything and they both pick different ones, then whoever said anything first wins! Also, I'm trying to think of a name and some more things to put in the story line so I'm open to any ideas! Ok then, here we go with the first opening!
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A long, long time ago, in a place most humans don’t even know exists, there was a war taking place. In that place, there was a prophecy: “during a hopeless war, a blind one will see and bring peace.” During this time of war, which seemed hopeless, there was a great hope among those who knew the prophecy. That hope was that the blind one would come, that this was the prophesied war. So, with this hope in mind, they went searching in the human world, the world of the blind, for the one that could see. That one human who could see their race, that was the human that would save their race. What happened if they couldn’t find that human, if they failed you ask?

…They would be destroyed.

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That opening is what the story would be told like from the point of view of the other world, and I have no idea who I'll be following in this point of view, so give me an opinion on that one, like his future girlfriend or best friend or something. Here's the second one!
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A long time ago, a young boy lived upon the earth. He still lives to this day, even though he is 114 years old. Pretty old for a human, and it’s amazing that he’s still living, right? Even more amazing? He hasn’t aged in looks since he was 18. Like I said, the boy lived on earth long ago, so where is he now? Well, if I told you, I would spoil a part of the story wouldn’t I? So, if you want to know, you’ll just have to keep reading! Now I guess I should start so listen well. I’ll be reading the records of a war and a hero, but where to start? How about the day his life changed for good, the day his life started taking an unforeseen path and confusion filled his being, the day he met a certain someone…
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Yup, so there it is! It needs some improvement I know and I'm not sure it'll be interesting to you guys but tell me what you think please! This one is told from the main characters point of view and I think it would be more interesting but it's up to you! Ok then, that's all for now, who knows maybe I'll talk about life later but that's not very interesting so probobly not!

Thanks to anyone who read!
-Desi (or Zera!)
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