Saturday, December 15, 2007

   Stories! YAY! Please read!!!
Well hello everyone! Your all here to read my story right! ...No? Well too bad cuz now that your here your probobly gona read it anyways! I do have ooone tinsy little problem though... I have two openings and I don't know which one to pick! So, I'm going to ask for your help so vote for one and whichever opening is liked the most by the end of the week, I'll pick it! If there are only two people who say anything and they both pick different ones, then whoever said anything first wins! Also, I'm trying to think of a name and some more things to put in the story line so I'm open to any ideas! Ok then, here we go with the first opening!
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A long, long time ago, in a place most humans don’t even know exists, there was a war taking place. In that place, there was a prophecy: “during a hopeless war, a blind one will see and bring peace.” During this time of war, which seemed hopeless, there was a great hope among those who knew the prophecy. That hope was that the blind one would come, that this was the prophesied war. So, with this hope in mind, they went searching in the human world, the world of the blind, for the one that could see. That one human who could see their race, that was the human that would save their race. What happened if they couldn’t find that human, if they failed you ask?

…They would be destroyed.

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That opening is what the story would be told like from the point of view of the other world, and I have no idea who I'll be following in this point of view, so give me an opinion on that one, like his future girlfriend or best friend or something. Here's the second one!
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A long time ago, a young boy lived upon the earth. He still lives to this day, even though he is 114 years old. Pretty old for a human, and it’s amazing that he’s still living, right? Even more amazing? He hasn’t aged in looks since he was 18. Like I said, the boy lived on earth long ago, so where is he now? Well, if I told you, I would spoil a part of the story wouldn’t I? So, if you want to know, you’ll just have to keep reading! Now I guess I should start so listen well. I’ll be reading the records of a war and a hero, but where to start? How about the day his life changed for good, the day his life started taking an unforeseen path and confusion filled his being, the day he met a certain someone…
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Yup, so there it is! It needs some improvement I know and I'm not sure it'll be interesting to you guys but tell me what you think please! This one is told from the main characters point of view and I think it would be more interesting but it's up to you! Ok then, that's all for now, who knows maybe I'll talk about life later but that's not very interesting so probobly not!

Thanks to anyone who read!
-Desi (or Zera!)
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