Thursday, April 26, 2007

   ok this is the second part of the book im working on
Chapter 2
Brutus: Warrior of Fire


Kaylos found himself in a large chamber made completely out of diamond. The chamber was so enormous a mountain could fit neatly in it with room to spare. Kaylos looked around the large area.
“ Where am I?” he thought out loud.
“You are in my domain." a loud voice boomed.
Suddenly there was a bright flash of light. Kaylos was forced to close his eyes. Then he saw before him a golden griffon its entire body bathed in light. It had four horns, which curved towards a ball of light above its head. It had six wings that looked like streams of light. Its eyes glowed like miniature suns. Kaylos found himself staring in aw.
“Kaylorn, god of light.” Kaylos muttered.
“Kaylos, on you I must bare a great burden.” The god spoke loudly.
“Great burden?”
“Yes, you are the one who must fight the chaos, and save this world!”
“Fight the chaos? But how? Why?”
“I am afraid that I cannot tell you how… but I can show you why.”
There was another flash of light Kaylos found himself sanding in a void. He was completely weightless here and with some difficultly tried to keep his footing. Suddenly he heard the voice again.
“When the universe began, everything was incomplete. The elements ran in the space fighting with each other, destroying each other.”
Kaylos saw a blaze of fire rush towards them he braced himself for the heat but if passed through him. Then he saw water rushing left and right putting out flames and then stopping as if frozen in time and starting again. He also saw rock appearing smashing into plants that seemed to grow out of nowhere. There were also times when light would flash and moments when everything would go pitch-black.
“ Then we were born, out of these elements. We were brought here to bring order.”
Then Kaylos saw forms coming out of each element. The first god he saw was Taylos. He looked almost like a sethan but he had antlers like a deer, he also had fur that seemed to change from red to green to white, and his eyes glowed an iridescent color.
“ Taylos was the first to rise. You know him as the god of earth and nature. Without him there would be no life in any world.”
Next he saw the god known as Faylorn. He was like a snake but was bright red and had two huge front arms. He also had a line of plates on his back that represented a volcano. His eyes glowed a dark red color.
“ Then there was Faylorn, god of fire and wind. He created the planet’s volcanoes that shaped the earth.”
After that he saw the god called Ronock. He had the body of a horse and the head of an eagle with long antlers and spikes of ice running down his back. His to front legs were long dark blue talons. His eyes glowed slate blue.

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